Begin with Simulation to Achieve Enlightenment and Transcendence

The most typical thing about this book is that the writing style cannot support the setting. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food. Author, you can definitely sell this outline to an author with good writing skills to write it. It's a waste if I write this stuff myself. The writing is really impressive and the outline is really good.

It feels like I just put some water in the outline and then it gets stuck on my face.

The protagonist has traveled through time and turned into a simulator, but why does it feel like only the character has changed and the overall situation has not changed? It still keeps simulating and simulating. The identity of the protagonist as a simulator is dispensable.

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It's okay, not bad, but it's a little bit sparse. I don't know if it can be finished on the shelves normally 😤

Infinite flow, no more than ten chapters in a world.

Chapter seven is a map. Eating dumplings does not eat the skin, not the filling, only the meat. It's a bit... Why don't you calm down and write in detail?

It's a bit of a running story, but it seems to be going well, I'd like more updates

Author, others are like water. Do you only have dry biscuits or instant food? If the pace is slower, you don't need hundreds of chapters to complete the world. At least don't just yo-yo after two or three chapters. It's too dry and you're looking at an inexplicable running account.

It feels like I'm reading a history book, which is powerful in a way.

It seems to be about a dozen chapters, what should I say? I don't understand the settings in the simulation world. The simulation ends just after the storyline begins. I don't understand many settings. I can only say that the creativity is fine, but the writing is problematic.

The imagination is fine, but the writing power cannot support the plot.

I think this book has potential

I saw the main character's name. Author, have you written Killing Paradise before? Open a small account now

Your update is worrying! Take a look!

Each world goes by too fast, and it is not much different from the detailed outline. The author can't even use AI to polish the pen.

It's been 3 days, when will you come back alive?

After the author arrived at the dungeon, the protagonist's subjective and indifferent mentality was too heavy, and he should be more influenced by the dungeon characters. He was also too strong, and there was no suspense about winning. The setting of this hermit was actually not very good. You turned on omniscience, and his strength was overwhelming. It can only be said that he was too shabby. Although the protagonist's behavior is very calm, he will not fight the dungeon that he cannot beat. This is very rational, but there is no passion. There are too few words for the supporting characters. This requires me to write a dungeon, which will be at least twice as long.

Good looking👍👍

The stuff is good and the quantity is OK, but it's too dry.

It's a bit difficult to hold on, the protagonist always looks calm, and then he can't help but complain in his heart. The two don't match well. Secondly, there are the fixed shortcomings of the simulation text. Multiple copies are opened randomly, it is messy and unsystematic, and it lacks the plot and stability of long copies. It is boring to watch. Overall, it's fun to watch, but it's easy to throw away after reading and won't pick it up again.

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It's okay, but I recommend writing more chapters for each world.

It's not as simple as this game

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The setting is very interesting. I feel like I can add a protagonist to simulate the world and then choose a protagonist based on the world to create a behind-the-scenes kind of thing.