The Saint Wants to Die

Seeking death is just an introduction. The plot and character arrangements are very well done. It is not a cliche way of adding plot to the wish for death.

The subject matter is good, the writing is good, the plot is excellent, and the characters are played as they should be. It is a very good product!

After entering Shushan, I started writing messily. I felt that the author was immersed in his own art and could not help himself, without caring about the life and death of others.

I don't understand. What does the literary spirit have to do with learning? Only Jinshi can obtain it. As a result, the way of obtaining it feels like a fantasy novel grabbing resources. At first, I thought it was enlightenment in Shushan or something like that, but it turned out to be a hard grab.

The oppression of the five major aristocratic families, the forbearance of all the countries to survive, the weird cruelty of Shushan Wenxin, the origins of Shushan's guards are like time travelers, the senior brothers and sisters who were deprived of Wenxin by the aristocratic families. There is also a time traveler who can return to wealth and freedom even if he dies with great fanfare. A world of oppression, exploitation, and cruelty, combined with the saint of the title of the book, I can only say that this stage is very big, the author, come on. I look forward to the protagonist smashing all the monsters and monsters and becoming invincible in the world. PS: It seems like no one has read it, not even a single chapter.

I can't feel the main line of the story, I just write whatever I dream about. As a book friend said, I took off after entering the book mountain. I don't know how to describe it, but I am very tired after reading it.

I retract my review. After Chapter 60, the plot is watered down, the characterization is confusing, and the charm of the worldview is not brought out at all. It even forgets that the main character wants to be killed.

The writing is poor, the world view/character settings are strange, and there are only countless books to read? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Unexpected, the plot is quite interesting

It's not quite there yet. There's something to be said for being able to write 160 chapters in such a mess.

You feel tired when you write like this, and you can't catch the readers. When you get into the mountain of books, threads, dialogues, foreshadowings, seemingly important things are praised, and when I see the end, I suddenly don't want to know what the protagonist is doing. I am tired of reading, and I don't know what result I want to see if I continue to pursue it.

After entering Shushan, things became more and more puzzling. . . Abandoned

Is there a Shennong? 🙂

When I read the introduction, I thought of Young Master Wei on the flat floor.

It's very messy to read, and it doesn't quite match the title. The title made me think it was a bit funny and light-hearted, but when I entered it, I felt that the writing was messy. On the one hand, my writing habits are messy. There are many sentences of 5 or 6 paragraphs, several times in one chapter. For online novels, it is difficult to read. Generally, short sentences are the main focus. On the other hand, the plot arrangement is messy. The current main line seems to be to become a saint and change the world. The development of the plot should be, enter prison-come out of prison and enter the Book Mountain-meet the saint-participate in the struggle of the Qi Kingdom-experience a series of events to change the Qi Kingdom-go to the Immortal Sect or continue the struggle between various countries-become a saint through all kinds of hardships, but I wrote more than 100 chapters for just one Book Mountain, and And this book mountain feels like it is not worthy of its name. If I change it to another name, it would be almost the same as the Blood Demon Cave, the Skeleton Forest that feeds human blood... I feel uninterested. This is not a horror zone, nor is it scary. It also involves time travel early. The guards in the book mountain are all time travellers. How to explain this system? It is often difficult to improve the sense of immersion when the mystery of time travel is introduced too early, which is very confusing. And the protagonist is not worthy of being called a saint at the moment. He tortures both sides with a group of teammates and guards who are like fakes. Without big love, the little love in his heart is just crushing the legs of the national master's child. It shows when he is angry because the father and daughter were dumped. After entering the book mountain, he is like a fake. It is just for fun

I could still read it before entering Shushan, but it was a mess after entering Shushan. I seriously suspect that the AI ​​continuation was added without even reading it. Speechless, gave up.

What's the benefit of returning to Earth, or returning to reality? If you can become an immortal and become an ancestor, you can live forever, you can fly into the sky and escape from the earth, why do you have to come back? Many novels have this setting. You have worked hard to come back. You have become an immortal. Why come back as a mortal? Can't we change the purpose? Must come back! ?

In fact, I think this routine may be more reasonable and interesting in another way. For example, after you commit suicide, you can go to heaven to inherit the position of the Jade Emperor. But now there is a person in the position of the Jade Emperor, so you are crazy to commit suicide down below, and he sends gods down to wipe your butt like crazy. In this way, it is more reasonable and has all kinds of drama, instead of making people think that you are screening readers and only the mentally retarded can become your fans.

If you commit suicide this way, you can get what you want, which is probably good luck. You can sing all the way without seeking death. However, the protagonist just wants to go back.

Borrowed from "Considering Death as Returning to Young Master Wei"?

Why does it feel like deja vu? Where have I read similar novels?

I don't know if it's an illusion, but after entering the bookstore, I felt like a female author writing female videos with unlimited streams 🙂

The male protagonist's name makes it difficult for Fujian people