Time Travel at the Same Time, I Am Not a Villain!

Invincible, several worlds are superimposed, but it is so weak. You only have this level after reading so many books. I am not unfair to you.

Is Naruto World cut too much? No matter how you say it, Mizuki is a chuunin. Except for A Qing and the sweeping monk, everyone else in Jin Yong's world is just like paper in front of him.

If you want to suppress your fighting power, don't write about Naruto or the like. If you write about it, it will suppress others.

I won't comment on the plot. Novels of this type are pretty much the same, and it's rare for the writing to be fluent.

It is better to introduce this kind of castration ability into various worlds than to not give it to the clones, so that all clones can easily obtain the castrated ability. It is better to directly set a special ability that breaks the upper limit for each clone, and use localized upgrades to directly upgrade the skills. The clones are different and not homogeneous.

Is the author written by AI? Some local dialects are simply inexplicable and lack common sense.

Naruto has been bad at writing since he led the team, and he has been working as a teacher for some reason!

Don't write Tongchuanliu if you're afraid of overlapping combat power, which will lower a lot of combat power.

It's not that you have to make a deal with the devil by following the example of Fenghou Qimen. You can say that the things under one person are very advanced, but that's just a concept, and it doesn't actually have such a big impact. Moreover, writing it like this is a bit deliberate and there is no explanation.

If you are convinced, do you insist on this Fengshayan? Doesn't Lu She smell good?

I don't understand what's wrong with the villain and why he needs to clear his name. It seems like some people's faults are fixed by fate. In this world, you can only take care of others and gain recognition.

As soon as I ordered the Naruto volume, I didn't want to read it anymore. It's not that Naruto isn't popular, it's just a piece of shit written by the author!

Orange prosthetics are basically laboratory grade, not military grade, and there is little regard for endurance. Military grade is blue and purple. If you put an orange on someone of Mann's level, he would immediately go crazy.

The Hokage is inexplicably good at being a teacher and has no idea what he is doing. What is your purpose? It's not that it's invincible, you can play it however you want.

I looked at the introduction and it smelled like a female channel.

It's getting boring, these worlds are like the protagonist's licking dogs. Give away any treasure. The protagonist is also suspected of having ulterior motives😢

Malfoy's two lackeys are named Crabbe and Goyle. There is no one named Clark😅

His combat power collapsed in the first three chapters. Mizuki is at least a chuunin, but he can't beat Yu Canghai head-on?

I feel that the author wrote the part about Cyber ​​2077 well. If this book is published, I feel like it could be a book about cyber.

There's nothing to say. Suppressing combat power is the most taboo thing for Tongchuanliu.

I would like to make a suggestion, since the protagonist of Dragon Maid World wants to become a god, why not give yourself a cover? If something goes wrong, you can just blame the cover and escape yourself. How about choosing VOX from Hell Inn for your image?

I couldn't stand watching Dragon Maid from the beginning, and I have no interest in watching the rest of the world.

1. The writing is not good. The logic of the writing is often confusing, and there are a lot of wrong sentences, especially the misuse of related words and confusing subjects 2. Various flaws in time-travel writing, various inexplicable "knowledge from birth", and you don't need to observe to get a conclusion. It all relies on inference from the original work and then applies it directly

In the movie, Star-Lord's father is not Ego, why was he changed to Galactus? Don't you know who the author is?

When one person fights against the Celestial Master, it becomes a bit unclear about his own status. If he really kills the subordinates, he can be extremely intimidating. I put it in a bad way. Is it the protagonist's turn to implement it? Now that he is a first-year freshman, he has the courage to expose Lao Deng's underpants unscrupulously. To be honest, the protagonist's brain is not very good anymore. Even his father is not qualified to expose Lao Deng's underpants in person. Old Deng has been the Dark Lord for two generations, and he has become the White Devil. Why do you think you have to expose his old underpants? . . . So I couldn't stand it any longer. It was so unscrupulous. . . In the future, we will enter a world where you can compete even more. . . Haha, this is not 99 flow, this is a battle royale. . . The train of thought is distorted

How should I put it? Many places have not handled it well.

After it was released, it was too long-winded, the plot progressed slowly, and it was unpleasant to watch.

I just saw another one, it's the same story, but the one starting with Inuyasha, the main character has the same name. If you are an author and you can't write about wearing the same clothes, you don't need to write about it.

So boring boring

Why are there so many typos that sometimes I can't read them clearly?