America's Tough Police: Starting from Killing Through the Fatal Curve

There are too many details on the protagonist's outfit 😵, which somewhat affects reading.

Too much nonsenseto

It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless. It's so damn ink-stained. The whole background or scene description of the film.

Heather, "Texas Chainsaw Massacre 3D" and "Baywatch", character fusion, twin sister Lisa, key American TV series "True Detective" and "Hot Detective".

Heather Tragnetti The movies "Texas Chainsaw Massacre 3D" and "Baywatch" integrate human society. "True Detective" is tentatively scheduled in the outline, and I haven't found a good entry point for the plot yet. If you have suggestions, you can share them here. Nora Bing Jane Banner Mary Sebastian Rachel

It's not that you can't write good articles if you rely on AI. The problem is that AI can't grasp the key points and likes to pile on details and descriptions. This aspect requires the author to polish and adjust. It is recommended that after the AI ​​is generated, the author should polish it more, otherwise it will be a mindless hydrology, with a clear soup and little water, and an incoherent plot. The above is only my personal opinion.

If you want justice, you can hunt down the bad guys If you want to deal with that mundane gang leader, just use Barrett I didn't know what the author was going to write at first, but the protagonist in Chapter 49 said that he couldn't stand the wits of the original characters, and he wanted to make things develop for the better. Does that mean he has to follow the plot? You have a basic body of steel, superb marksmanship, storage space, a super high IQ, and the ability to become stronger by killing enemies, but you just want to play house in a small town?

The beginning is stunning, with violent gun battles and eye-catching moments. After entering Banshee Town, the long descriptions of food, cooking, wine, house layout and character emotions were too procrastinating. Those who are impatient will quickly lose interest in reading.

There are too many useless details, like a short composition composed of countless small details piled up with gorgeous words. A few descriptions of expressions, driving, environment, and actions are enough. If you read too much, it will be a bit watery, and it has no effect on promoting the plot, and it also arouses readers' disgust.

Deborah/Gloria Harper

I quite like the writing style and it's well written, but it's too flat and the author's pacing needs to be improved. The fatal twist was completed in the first ten chapters, but after more than seventy chapters, I still don't feel that there is any progress in the plot. Apart from recruiting a few female protagonists, there are no real actions. It seems that I am leisurely watching a movie every day. This operation is also very confusing. Is it his pleasure to stand next to a known plot and witness it with his own eyes? But those plots are not special famous scenes. I don't know if the author has read Carp's Banshee Town. You can check it out for reference. His writing style is average, but the pace seems comfortable. He does not talk too much and just does it. The plot is linked one after another. Isn't this why you watch American TV series? If the plot is slow, you can also choose to write the limited plot with passion and increase the participation of the protagonist. At least it should be a little satisfying. Now the plot is not rich enough to keep up with the protagonist's character, which makes the protagonist's character a bit hollow, which makes people feel that the literary youth and middle-class taste are a bit too much. The Godfather image is written in an American variety show, which is actually not pleasing. The unique taste of blood and fire in the American variety show is overshadowed, and the excitement is lost. If this continues, it will easily develop into an American variety show, a bulldozer, and a daily life of literary youths. It is recommended to consider how to balance it early. Come on!

Jesse Dawson Rebecca Bowman Nora Runcid West Vaughan Kelly Deborah, Harper Integration of characters from the movie "Once Upon a Time in America" and "Point of Passion"

The description in long paragraphs is just a garbage piled up with words. A few sentences almost took hundreds of words.

The author is too self-indulgent, and the long paragraphs of psychological description make it seem as if the author controls it himself. He is so cunning that he has no choice but to abandon the book.

The description is too detailed, so detailed that it affects the perception. Some chapters are almost all description and have little plot.

Um😓. It's too boring. I feel like the description is too much.

When I saw the campus kidnapping, I didn't want to watch it. As a killer and a family heir, Nima ended up acting like a hero in this kind of scene. It was inexplicable and even appeared on the news. Oh my god🤦🏼

There are several pictures that cannot be sent in the text

Isn't this different from 🍅's Los Angeles Police: I'm proficient in all kinds of American style homes? What's the difference? , Someone else is 2.0 And you are 1.0?

If the picture in the comment section is swallowed, try posting it in the book review section. Grandma Connie Little Sheldon's parents, George and Mary Protagonist's mother, Sally Little George Missy As a Child Little Sheldon Peggy Accountant Man, Chris

I have read about 50 chapters in the book so far. As someone who has been reading for nearly 20 years, I think the content of the story in this book is okay, but some of the narrations are really unnecessary and make readers feel that the word count is too high. Pictures can be included but not necessarily too many. There are too many buried threads. Some stories have no transition, such as the part where Anthony escapes to Banshee Town. The characters appear too suddenly, and the events and information related to the characters are too abrupt. You must know that many readers may not have watched some related movies or TV series.

I came across this book again, and after reading a chapter, I remembered why I hadn't read it at that time. Because the author inserts a large number of pictures at the end of the text, it greatly affects the perception. Even if you put it in the comments section, it doesn't matter. If you put it in the text, you have to read it whether you want to read it or not, and you have to read several pages.

Dear book friends, please read the new book and please read the last chapter. This is the first time I have signed a contract for an online article. After having a little understanding of Qidian's intelligent recommendation mechanism, I found that follow-up reading is really important for new books. Without follow-up reading, there will be no recommendation, and without recommendation, there will be no exposure. No wonder I often see authors talking about this issue in the book review section and asking to read more. Please use your golden fingers, click to read the latest chapter every day, and read the latest chapter~Thank you everyone!

Peggy as a child

Peggy

I hope to mainly focus on New York, Friends, How I Met Your Mother, The Big Bang Theory, The Secret Book... I just came to see this 😡

Chapters 36, 39 and 40 are missing

If you can, please vote for the new book, "North American Violence: Starting from Shameless", thank you!

Adult Peggy

Robin