Mortals Become Invincible from the Time They Become Disciples of Lei Wanhe

There is no Nangong Wan, and harem readers basically don't read it, so there is no point in writing about harem flow. I have read several books with good writing, but there is no Nangong Wan. Readers don't like to read it, and the data is not good, especially after it was put on the shelves, they all ran away. Are you leaving this to Han Li? Or what to say. The protagonist is either undead or underperformed, has few resources and is slow to upgrade. The protagonist has a hard time practicing and cannot support the harem. It is easy to become a eunuch, and it is easy to become a waste cultivation stream. Looking at the comments and content, you still want to take Han Li to Chaotic Star Sea. If you write it, forget about the results of your book. This thing is already outdated. Befriend Han Li, no Nangong Wan, the protagonist is Wu Gua or Gua Xiao This is basically a dog-licking old slave style of writing. Author, your readership is too small, so it is only suitable for self-pleasure. I plan to watch it for a month to see the situation. Author, if you really write Lao Nu Liu, then everyone will have no choice but to run away.

I'm curious, forget about the Dayan Jue, what will Han Li do without the teleportation array? If Han Li didn't go to Chaos Xinghai, he would still be Han Li, and he would still be a mortal. Regardless of the interference ability of Taoist ancestors or historical revision, the current plot seems to be developed in place of Han Li's plot. In this way, it is highly consistent with the original work. I suggest you reset or patch it so that Han Li can go to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars normally, or go together with two people, and his own main line should not interfere. The two lines can intersect but not overlap. But if you write it like this, go to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars, avoid some pitfalls, and repeat Han Li's chance plot. I don't think it is interesting. Isn't he just Han Li in disguise? If you grab some small opportunities, just grab them. I don't think you should change the big events. Han Li will show up when he should. The worst you can do is not write his role. What's more, what you wrote is very out of place and cannot be substituted. It's too fast. Spring and Autumn's writing style is all in one stroke. It feels like just watching a horse and watching the light. It's almost finished before dozens of chapters are published. It's not satisfying to write like this.

You also created some female concubines that I have never heard of before. You are trying to throw yourself into the street. There are so many women in the original book that I can't count them on one hand. Author, you succeeded in shocking me.

I came across your book again, and I remembered that you asked me before. I didn't expect you to be able to write for so long. It's really fate. I'll give you all my monthly tickets at the end of the month. I hope the author will work hard and his writing will get better and better.

It would be a pity for Nangong Wan not to grab it! A daughter from the Chen family and a daughter from the Nie family three times in number are not as good as one Nangong Wan. Emperor Ruyan didn't just say that! Xin Ruyin also released it! Then there are only Yuanyao Ziling and Ling Yuling! Yuan Yao still has to deal with the plot, whether to let his sister Yanli die or to get rid of her in advance. The two sisters are like conjoined twins like Xin Ruyin's maid Xiaomei!

At first glance, this is a brainless stallion story, and it's an author who has never read the original work.

Violating the basic settings of mortals and creating a thunder and fire root, there is no need to continue watching.

The pacing is okay so far, at least it seems to be written seriously. Some settings are not very pleasing, but it doesn't matter. If you can keep writing, don't just follow the original text and you will already surpass 90% of the mortals. I've read too many Chapter 60 of Going to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars

The point of the mortal fandom is to find a new way to ask about immortality, not to make up for regrets nonsense, nor to love and love between men and women.

It feels like it's written in one stroke

Nangong Wan

Let's talk briefly. . . . I watched it for a long time. Are Dayan, Lei Wanhe, and Li Huayuan all dead? He even died earlier than in the original. This protagonist is not trying to make up for his regrets, this is just a big mistake. There are sparks and lightning all the way. . .

I just read the first chapter. Is the author illiterate? The Nine Heavens Divine Thunder Jue is written correctly, but the Lihuo Nirvana Jue is still written incorrectly. Laughing to death

Holy shit, the protagonist is green? The heroine was captured

I feel like the author can let Han Li show up more and learn the mortal's path to immortality. That would be a very good book. You and Han Li will start to suspect each other and become friends later. You also need to know that what you are writing is not Han Li's biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. Don't be a nanny. A harem is okay, but please add more emotional lines. Otherwise, you will be just like a stallion.

I have been writing this for a week. During this period, mortal fans kept pointing out problems, and I responded to them one by one. Thank you everyone for your opinions. Of course, those comments that are very violent should be deleted as well. After all, I know that most readers will only read the comments. Explain it here. 1. Is there any problem with the setting of thunder and fire attributes? I see that many Taoist friends are quite controversial about this. In fact, the golden finger I originally conceived for the protagonist was used in conjunction with this, and both are indispensable. 2. Won't others be suspicious of this? Yes, it is definitely possible, but only some Yuan Yin Shen Shen bosses will be curious about whether his spiritual root is special. Ordinary people can get away with it if they are surprised. For example, if you see a person with six fingers on the street, would you ask more about it? 3. Why didn't Goldfinger make it clear at the beginning? In the mortal world, I don't want to write a system, nor do I intend to write a useless start like four or five spiritual roots. The protagonist travels back in time and is just a newbie who doesn't know much about cultivation. He has to figure out its functions and origins step by step. It's impossible to know the abilities of ancient techniques and heaven-defying treasures right from the beginning, right? 4. Eunuch training style/harem style/stallion style? The number of female protagonists I envision is within ten, so let's count it as a harem affair. After all, the original intention of writing the book was to come here for Zi Ling, Mei Ning, Senior Sister Chen and the others after reading anime and novels. There are 5 in the human world and 2 in the spiritual world. There are too many to write down, and you won't feel the same just by adding girls without a plot. 5. Will the subsequent plot be innovative? I plan to create some branch plots and hidden plots. Many parts of the original work were mentioned but not mentioned, such as Wulonghai, Tiansha Continent, etc. I don't know if you want to see this kind of thing. This book will not be about eunuchs. The current plan is to write it until the end of the spiritual world. We will also collect your questions in the future and answer them specifically when it is put on the shelves. Finally, I would like to thank the few people who vote silently every day. 🙏

When will the author start free membership in QQ Reading?

I hope the protagonist doesn't play puppet. Those precious materials and resources might as well be used for refining treasures and practicing cultivation. Nascent Soul stage puppets are very valuable. It would be better to kill the Nascent Soul cultivator by refining the pole and soul flag. Raise a few Yuanying ghost cultivators. Refining a few demon corpses. And with the protagonist's standard combat power. Yuan Zhong can kill Yuan Hou. Also wasting precious materials to make puppets. It's unnecessary. Kill a few Yuanhou monks and use them to refine corpses. Raise ghosts. Better than anything else 😏

Every novel needs to search for a supporting role for Senior Sister Chen, rubbish is only suitable for foundation-building ones.

They all like to ride on traffic. In anime, Chen Shijie's modeling is not good-looking, and some novels are even red-faced. Damn it, with all the ugly modeling in old animations, what kind of food is there for Mrs. Wen? Damn it, they are all second-hand goods. If you don't talk about learning Korean, you can at least say something useful.

Reached the peak at level 7 in two months, awesome

The novel about cultivating immortals starts with a gun, but half of the book is ruined. The author should write a martial arts novel.

Is there a setting for the twin spiritual roots of thunder and fire? Among mortals?