The Person Is in the God of Death and Has Been Dead for a While.

You've already opened it up so much, you can write almost 20 chapters for a single spiritual cage... I can't think of any use for the protagonist in this world, and my combat power has collapsed.

You can just abandon this paradise after seeing it. If you finish writing Death first and then go there, you might still be able to read it!

The writing of "Spirit Cage" is so rubbish. The protagonist looks like a female general and a male general. He has power and acts like a turtle man.

This book has been dead for a while

After reading it, the questions are: 1. The focus of the subject matter. I was attracted to Death, but there were very few scenes of Death. I suddenly went to the park to play unlimited streaming. Although I came back after the first mission, it appeared at this moment. No matter whether the author focused on Death or Paradise, it had an impact on the readers who were attracted by Death. The mood was too broken. Suddenly, it's hard to answer 2. The problem of the golden finger. The protagonist's own golden finger already has many functions. He can fight against the characters in the world, obtain blood, skills or values, and then harvest loyal subordinates who can appear at any time. This is already very unnatural. When the protagonist has the golden finger, he goes to the park to exchange skills and add points, and And the protagonist seems to have lost the ability to learn and practice independently. He relies entirely on cheats and paradise. He has lost the fun of practicing and upgrading, and feels a bit overwhelmed The settings are repeated and the themes are repeated, which leads to the main plot being unclear. If the author writes a separate part and only writes about Death, or only writes about Paradise at the beginning, it can be written very well, but the author wants to take care of both. There are too many, one is that the continuity is reduced, the other is that there are too many repetitive things and it feels boring, and the other is that you can't write it. Some readers like Death, so if you write the plot of Paradise, it will feel useless and difficult to write well. Some readers like Paradise, but what about your Death world? There is so much foreshadowing, but it is not written, or it is not written well. Wouldn't it be embarrassing?

I saw paradise appearing. The previous article was quite good, but because Paradise appeared, I stopped reading it for the time being (mainly because I planned to read the fanfic, and it has nothing to do with the author's writing style). At present, there are doubts that there are already challenges, and with the time travel between the heavens, there will be a certain degree of plot duplication, which will mess up the plot? I hope someone can clear up the confusion later

The writing of "Paradise" is not good-looking, it feels like a pretentious slap in the face in ancient fairy tales.

Well, this time-travel method... Also allows Lan Da to join the paradise...

He's a eunuch. It's quite beautiful, but I'm disappointed 😞

Can't think of writing about Death, do you want to challenge the difficulty?

In fact, it is better not to play and to tell stories seriously.

Once the paradise comes out, it doesn't mean much if you can enter it. Ling Cong just read the beginning and the end.

It's okay to write, but it's too little.

Why are you playing Lan Da? Let's open up a new world with him.

Can you not write Chinese comics? It's not that I look down on it, but the writing of Dou Po is terrible. The books I started reading in 10 years are almost the same. I only read one and two of Dou Po. The low-end ones are not necessary, the fruit treasure level (mechanical thugs are okay), the funny ones are too buggy, the fighting ones, Fire Lin Flying in 7 Days and 7 Worlds, the high-end ones, Dou Po are bad. The whole thing is the same. The core is that these categories are the most popular among newcomers. Have you seen it on the home page? The core of many Chinese comics is the mythical history of variants. Except for Qin Shi, the details are good, and the others are difficult to work on because he himself is a variant. When you change, it will look different. It's hard for me to be interested in Chinese comics. The one-eyed Ninth Princess was very cute last time I saw it. I don't remember the other characters, and I don't know what it's about. There is a cliff river of more than ten meters in the capital. It's nonsense and pretentious. It's the protagonist who is no different from a useless idiot. The main impression is that I'm a useless person and I'm going to cause trouble. Is a bad person a person who writes about the world or the court? There is always a feeling that Yuan Tiangang is moved by himself and is forcing people to restore. If he has an idea, he will fight it off first and then play with it slowly. If he imitates Huang Chao, I would consider him a great man. He also has the flavor of revenge for his family and country. He is paving the way and paving the road without thinking. Is he the same material? Do people have such thoughts? It's really better to watch a sketch. He only thinks about restoration without drawing any lessons.

Isshin only became the captain after Hirako and the others were reduced to the Hollow, I remember.

The timeline is very wrong. Ichimaru Gin was still a boy during the Hollow incident, and Rangiku, who was about the same age as Ichimaru Gin, should not have entered the Seireitei at this time. Rangiku was brought into the Seireitei when he was a child. Also, when Kiryu was promoted to the Zero Division, three captains were missing in the meeting. The captain of the Tenth Division died in battle, the Eleventh Division was absent, and the Thirteenth Division was on sick leave, so Isshin was not the captain of the Tenth Division at this time, and Haku might not have been born yet.

The book is indeed dead. This title is unlucky.

Is the author going to have a surgery or go back to work and stop for a few days? Can you please give me an explanation?

Please read it! Care for every seedling! Everyone! Please!

Unlimited streaming? Why not classify it into the infinite realms of the heavens?

Can't you bring the hairspray hand into the space and sit together🚽?

If only Aizen could be given a starring role