In Bleach, I’ve Been Dead for a While Now

You've already opened it up so much, you can write almost 20 chapters for a single spiritual cage... I can't think of any use for the protagonist in this world, and my combat power has collapsed.

You can just abandon this paradise after seeing it. If you finish writing Death first and then go there, you might still be able to read it!

The writing of "Spirit Cage" is so rubbish. The protagonist looks like a female general and a male general. He has power and acts like a turtle man.

This book has been dead for a while

After reading it, the questions are: 1. The focus of the subject matter. I was attracted to Death, but there were very few scenes of Death. I suddenly went to the park to play unlimited streaming. Although I came back after the first mission, it appeared at this moment. No matter whether the author focused on Death or Paradise, it had an impact on the readers who were attracted by Death. The mood was too broken. Suddenly, it's hard to answer 2. The problem of the golden finger. The protagonist's own golden finger already has many functions. He can fight against the characters in the world, obtain blood, skills or values, and then harvest loyal subordinates who can appear at any time. This is already very unnatural. When the protagonist has the golden finger, he goes to the park to exchange skills and add points, and And the protagonist seems to have lost the ability to learn and practice independently. He relies entirely on cheats and paradise. He has lost the fun of practicing and upgrading, and feels a bit overwhelmed The settings are repeated and the themes are repeated, which leads to the main plot being unclear. If the author writes a separate part and only writes about Death, or only writes about Paradise at the beginning, it can be written very well, but the author wants to take care of both. There are too many, one is that the continuity is reduced, the other is that there are too many repetitive things and it feels boring, and the other is that you can't write it. Some readers like Death, so if you write the plot of Paradise, it will feel useless and difficult to write well. Some readers like Paradise, but what about your Death world? There is so much foreshadowing, but it is not written, or it is not written well. Wouldn't it be embarrassing?

I saw paradise appearing. The previous article was quite good, but because Paradise appeared, I stopped reading it for the time being (mainly because I planned to read the fanfic, and it has nothing to do with the author's writing style). At present, there are doubts that there are already challenges, and with the time travel between the heavens, there will be a certain degree of plot duplication, which will mess up the plot? I hope someone can clear up the confusion later

The writing of "Paradise" is not good-looking, it feels like a pretentious slap in the face in ancient fairy tales.

Well, this time-travel method... Also allows Lan Da to join the paradise...

He's a eunuch. It's quite beautiful, but I'm disappointed 😞

Once the paradise comes out, it doesn't mean much if you can enter it. Ling Cong just read the beginning and the end.