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Have you ever worked as a maintenance worker? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

How does the protagonist compare to this?

This is what I heard: For a time, the Thousand-Hand Merciful Medicine King traveled to all realms, and together with ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people, lived under Luohou and preached the Dharma. At that time, I suddenly ordered my envoy to ask the Thousand-Hand Merciful Medicine King: "All living beings have diseases, and all types of suffering are suffering. All sentient beings are bound to the suffering of birth, old age, illness, and illness. What is the source of suffering?" Thousand-Hand Merciful Medicine King said: "The pain of birth, old age, illness, and death all result from death. The suffering of the living comes from the fact that there is no end. The suffering of the old comes from the inevitable arrival. The suffering of the sick comes from the nearness of death. Therefore, the suffering of birth, old age, illness, and death is said to be caused by death. Death is the source of suffering." Suddenly ordered the messenger to put his palms together and say: "All sentient beings have a day of annihilation and a day of reincarnation. How can we stop the suffering of birth, old age, illness and disease?" Thousand-Hand Merciful Medicine King told Suihu to say: "Those living beings are confined to their bodies, like being imprisoned in a cage, and are suffering three painful punishments. Now I plant the sacred tree of eternal life, so that these living beings can be liberated, live without end, never grow old, be resurrected from the dead, and be freed from their worries." At that time, he suddenly ordered his envoy to recite these words: "The king of medicine is kind and compassionate, and the trees are growing. With one mind, we will reach the ultimate bliss together." "The king of medicine is kind and compassionate, and the trees are growing. The farmers are united in their minds, and they will reach the ultimate bliss together." At that time, the ninety-nine thousand and nine hundred and ninety-nine people who died at that time all said: "Lost their limbs, dethroned their intelligence, separated from the form to know, and are the same as Datong. This is called sitting and forgetting!" At that time, all the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people in the field said: "No! Sitting means moving. Forgetting means thinking. If you don't sit, you will stop working. If you don't forget, you will stop thinking. If you don't stop working, your mind will be calm. If you don't stop thinking, your heart will be peaceful!" At that time, the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people in the world all said: "The gathering of three flowers at the top is an illusion, and the clouds flying under the feet are not real. A big dream must eventually wake up, and it has no roots and no ends and returns to the dust." At that time, the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people who died at that time all said: "This is the appearance of the instrument but the mind is confused, the director is cute but the emotion is sudden. The truth is beyond the color and taste, the true nature is separated from the desire, and he can hear the subtle things to suspend his faith, and listen to the images without being confused. It is like a person who has heard the method of sitting and forgetting... At that time, the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people who died at that time all said: "In the ultimate path, there is nothingness, and the gods have no way to use it. The same is true for the mind and body. It originates from the mind and body..." At that time, the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people who died at that time all said: "The Master of the Vacuum Wonderful Appearance, the Supreme Xuanyuan Heavenly Mother, the golden light shines, the sun and the moon shine brightly, when the precious pestle spins, the ghosts and gods lose their color, appear in the world, and the guardian saint rides on the pavilion... At that time, all the ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine people who died said: "If all living beings are in trouble, please call me by name. The great master will ask for help and save the suffering. The great compassion and great wishes, the great sage and the great mercy. The Holy Spirit is the great innate queen, and the great sage Moli supports the sky. Yuanming fights with the heavenly master!"

Congratulations, you all know what I am congratulating for, the benefits are less than the effort, the plot looks uncomfortable, and the protagonist begins to be suppressed. Sit back and watch the author commit suicide

If the last five can be safe and sound, then the protagonist will be done with it. If someone can forgive the other person after being messed with like this, the protagonist will also be a god.

If the protagonist doesn't make the five immortal incarnations pay the price in the end, he will be the best turtle boy among turtle boys, and the novel will be useless.

Hey, I read it again. I felt that the writing was really good. In recent chapters, my mentality suddenly exploded. I suggest that the author seriously consider how to write the next few chapters. If he can't write it well, he will really finish it. Once it is written, it may be a climax and be included in the masterpiece or masterpiece, otherwise it will be a mess Put it into the reader's perspective, you go on a trip (like a star iron), and you are taken advantage of by the local boss. As a chess piece (the key is not an evil force), you got a test that you didn't want to participate in. Because you were not informed that you might die if you failed the test. You could have quit, but because you wanted to have fun, your exit option was closed, the difficulty of your test was infinitely magnified, and you were singled out. You paid a huge price and doubled your mental effort. You started to take revenge by passing the test, and people came to admit your mistake. What are your options? A small punishment but a big warning? Is it funny? Now it depends on how you write, the author. I can accept that I can't win or that I am temporarily weak, but I can never accept that I am a clown. If there is a similar person in my life now, this person must be my life-and-death enemy, the kind who will never stop fighting. Don't talk about extremes or not. He chose to take this kind of thing for fun. From the moment he fooled me, there was no forgiveness or understanding. It's possible. Not everything can be forgiven and forgotten. This kind of person's real life is very representative. What I mean is that I broke up with him, killed him, and treated him as a child. I realize that the boy is already very bad. It must explode. It must be destroyed. I don't want to interfere with your creation, the author, but I feel that it is a pity that the previous writing is so good that it is wasted here

The result is to eat a big meal, use the immortal power, solve short-lived problems, and then sleep until the plot begins. Maybe most people who read this book expect the protagonist to repair the train, join the development, and follow the plot.

It doesn't mean anything else. The protagonist really has no ability. He was bullied like this and it only took a few big slaps. In the end, he still followed other people's routines. It felt like the slaps were all in vain. He looked really clownish.

The current storyline looks very unpleasant. It just depends on how the author makes it round. If it's not round, then bye bye.

Do you take Xianzhou seriously by playing like this? The official staff was treated like this by the local SB and Xianzhou didn't react? It feels so frustrating now, what should I do next? I'm packed and ready to run away

I feel that the author did a better job at the beginning, the plot on the Yaoqing Immortal Boat was pretty good, and the later emotional scenes of separation from colleagues and Yu Kong were also pretty good. But the recent plot of the new planet is relatively vague. I thought about it carefully and found three issues. First, the purpose of everyone was not clearly explained. This is a problem that many novice writers have when writing. That is, the outline of what everyone is doing and how they influence each other is very well thought out, but when written, it is impossible to create a group portrait. Everyone meets and then acts very deliberately and suddenly. The author's Chekhov's gun or the gray line buried in the plot are mixed in a bunch of descriptions; and because the perspective is not focused on the protagonist, what the protagonist is thinking is not transparent to the reader. In this way, everyone seems to be very mysterious, but the reader has no way of knowing the purpose of their actions. Generally, a better way to deal with this is to cleverly insert a summary, using the dialogue of one or some characters, to sort out the current situation for the readers, and explain who I am, where I am, and what I want to do. The point is what I want to do. The second question is an extension of the first question. In the plot of the new planet, the protagonist has completely lost his initiative. In Yao Qing, he is the most proactive, he has a repair shop, and he will seize opportunities when he gets them. At the airport, okay, he also picks up trash, but in the new plot, he is just walking around. The leader asked him to come here. What is his position? Is he a maintenance foreman, an airport representative, or a tourist? What is his mission and what is his personal purpose are not explained at all in the current plot. Maybe the author feels that I let him meet Huang Quan, let him meet the little girl Longzun, and let him discover the girl with the problem. However, there is a lack of the protagonist's proactive actions and thinking about the above, or in other words, a lack of description of his thinking. This is a situation where the author thinks he has written a lot of clues but it is invalid information for the reader. The third point is an extension of the above two, the author's planning for the new plot-how to connect the plot with the protagonist. How did this happen? A meeting about the Immortal Place. At the meeting, someone issued a declaration and then blew himself up. Next, the author explained through these dragon people what this place is, what the people in this place think, and what undercurrents are surging here - are these things related to the protagonist? I'm not asking a question or a rhetorical question, this is a real question. People don't pay too much attention to things that have nothing to do with themselves. If they are reading online novels (rather than the kind that are written as group portraits from the beginning), readers usually won't pay too much attention to content that seems to have little connection with the protagonist. The test for the author is how to make everything that happens now have a strong connection with the protagonist's goals, tasks, or simply, the people he cares about. The above is my personal opinion. To be honest, the beginning of this article is very good, it has the potential of being a good food, and it is not as greasy as an old fried dough stick, but the problem is still there. The most serious problem for some authors is often that they think too much. In their minds, everything is an extension of the protagonist's will, everything has a rich and far-reaching impact, everyone is meaningful, and everything everyone says has profound meaning. But this connection only exists in the author's mind. It's currently in pieces here and there, and you have to express it.

I take your life for fun, so what about you, you can't do anything, fw protagonist

Just run away. What a waste.

If you like Bengtie so much, I will reward you by going to Ompharos. The world there is beautiful and the people are very happy 😏

It's better to kill all the five immortal dragon clones.

Author, don't run away. This subject matter is very rare at this starting point. You can barely read it. If you run away, this subject matter will become extinct here.

The two forces are fighting, ready to run away at any time.

It's a pity. Drive high and go low. See you again in the world.

If what you write in the past few days is not pure self-pleasure and disgusts readers, then you should revise all the chapters you have written in the past few days as soon as possible. It is really disgusting, so you can not update it for the time being. First, revise the content so that it can be continued. Otherwise, how will you write now? If I continue writing this, it will be too 🐢.

More than 10,000 people have read your book, and a few people came out to criticize you for not writing a few words? Are you in such a bad mood?

Nothing else, just a survey

Well, after raising it for more than a month, it died.

The writing is quite good, why is it a eunuch?

Damn it, good guy. . .