You've Already Won the Top Prize, Are You Telling Me This Is Journey to the West?

The protagonist is Tang Seng's father. According to Journey to the West, Tang Seng's father, Chen Guangrui, was killed by bandits on the ship after he got married. They also took his wife and pretended to be employed. After his wife gave birth to Tang Monk, he drifted away and was called Jiangliu'er.

The easiest way to break the situation is to go into seclusion and run away, or to criticize Buddhism in the street, or to find a way to persuade Li Shimin to destroy Buddhism. The easiest way is to directly cut off the eternal rule. Can tmd time travelers still let these NPCs play with them?

1. The supporting characters are too stereotyped, probably the kind who try their best to flatter others and put down others, and are immediately panicked when an accident occurs. You know, it is an ancient public examination. Those who can participate are those who have family property and can read the Four Books and Five Classics. There cannot be no one who is good, right? The supporting characters are slightly smarter 2. The plot is a little pretentious. In the hotel, they are writing poems to express their ambitions, being encouraged by classmates, waiting for Wei Zheng's servants to compliment them, and being impatient to pay money directly. This opportunity for pretense is so coincidental that it seems a bit stiff.

Brother Monkey is already in place, and Jin Chanzi can also be reincarnated. I don't understand that even if you engage in conspiracy theories about Journey to the West, Chen Guangrui is of no use. People with Xuanzang's surname, Chen's surname, Li's surname and Yang's surname are not all able to go and learn from the scriptures.

The main character is pretentious and the supporting characters are full of nonsense. It's written too much and makes people disgusted.

What do you want to write about? The protagonist is normal, but no one around him is normal. The servant next to me was startled and very opinionated. As a servant, you only need to obey, there is no need to think so much. There are other people who look like supporting characters in ancient novels. They all look down on the protagonist, especially Yi Cheng. Are they waiting to be slapped in the face and then be surprised?

Have you ever been the number one scholar? Just write it here🐶

How can there be any calamity of life and death in the original Journey to the West? Some people believe in the superfluous stuff added by the Tatars. The original chapter contains poems and there is not even a hair on it. Moreover, the second disciple of the Buddha, the father of Nan Wu Tan Merit Buddha, the master of Na Wu Du who defeated the Buddha Sun Wukong, have wronged you? Tang Monk: Will your blessings be less after studying Buddhist scriptures and becoming a Buddha? The protagonist is now just like the stupid bastard at the end. It was clearly an opportunity to make the Buddha owe something. In the end, the good guy was thrown into the river by all the Buddhas, Bodhisattvas and Arhats. He also deserved to be captured by the victorious Buddha and taken back to the camel monument.

In order to survive, he castrated himself and entered the palace as a eunuch 😁

There are 70 chapters. The actual progress is worrying. Mortals are trying to stop the immortals and Buddhas from planning. Heaven may say that this side, and the protagonist is just a pawn, how can it help? I can only tell you how to play if you can't open it

You really can't find gold in a book with a title like this. The stereotype is so true.

It's chapter 26, but the plot hasn't advanced a bit, it's too watery, no wonder it's so popular 🙂

The timeline is wrong. You killed the dragon before you won the first prize. Where did Tang Sanzang go?

Very well written, I support it. I just feel a sense of disconnection from time to time, I don't know if what I'm describing is right. Didn't the protagonist travel through time? The 1986 version of Journey to the West is played every summer vacation, and the vernacular version of the novel Journey to the West has been read since I was a child. Why do I feel like I don't know anything when I come to the protagonist? The Dragon King of Jinghe, Yuan Shoucheng, Black Bear Jing, and Gao Laozhuang are all familiar to me, but the protagonist gave me the feeling that I only knew a little about Journey to the West. This feeling was very fragmented when I read it, and it felt a bit distorted. But the writing is very good

The time is wrong! The Jinghe Dragon King made a bet with Yuan Shoucheng more than 20 years after Chen Guangrui became the number one scholar 😰

I didn't know what to do after reading the front part but not the back part. The security guard next to the protagonist has no eyesight. He likes to make his own decisions, but he also knows that he is not as good as the protagonist. He asks questions as if he is explaining to the readers. It feels very superficial.

When I read Chapter 17, the distant relative talked too much, and it was all a stupid idea, just to set off the protagonist? Maybe it would be better if you watch it without thinking?

After reading the original work, I believe that Chen Guangrui is not Tang Monk's father, but the water thief. I would have to read the original work to make it clear.

The author said that he would not rigidly follow the settings of the original work (generally recognized as a hundred chapters) and make illogical changes. He would also use other people's opinions that are useful. So I recommend "Saber's Journey to the West" (video), which is my favorite among the two of Journey to the West. It's just that Saber's works are so original that I feel like there's nothing that can be used.

Although it is reasonable for the time being, the presentation is really not enough. It does feel like this should be the original idea, but overall it still looks very outline. The final climax of this book ends with the release of Sun Wukong. (Then the character's character was almost destroyed during the subsequent fight against the three monsters) After all, what do readers want to see? It's nothing more than the protagonist using his subjective initiative to change something. In the end, the Lord went full circle and only saved himself, so why bother really? 🤔 And the final breaking point is Wukong, not the protagonist. If the performance were better and the description of this time, Wukong finally challenged Tathagata again due to the influence of the protagonist, and these details would be performed, it would not be so sudden. Or it may be some foreshadowing laid out earlier, that those who have achieved great merit and become a Buddha can transcend time and space. It won't be that abrupt. And the ending of this reincarnation lacks the pleasure of breaking the situation. To put it bluntly, this group of heavenly pests should be burned clean by the karma fire according to the setting of this game. You might as well write that after reincarnation, all the gods and Buddhas are dead this time, and Tang Monk is really a human being, embarking on a journey to learn scriptures and return to history. At least you can feel happy. Let me say it again for the last time To put it bluntly, the problem in the later stage is not whether the protagonist decides to save himself or not, but whether the protagonist is used as a gunman until the later stage. Nothing has changed. None of the bad guys died. Wukong still has to learn the scriptures. So what is the meaning of our protagonist's time travel? Novel characters? 🤔 You are the number one pick after all? I'm not asking you to open Wushuang, but asking you to break a little bit of the original tragedy has become a bit of a luxury? Alas, that's all I can say, if the author is busy, we shouldn't insist on daily updates, okay? Polish the plot carefully, and as long as the ending is written to the level of releasing Wukong Nazan, it won't look like a bad ending. 😅

Brother, just click and finish the book so that I can enjoy the investment income from the new book.

Damn it, only two chapters in one day, author, how can you sleep? How do you manage to sleep at your age? ? ?

Invest and vote, come on!

Don't be a eunuch, it's so well written.

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That means you need to use a magnifying glass. If the last chapter could be expanded upon in a few more chapters, it would be somewhat complete. In the end, one chapter passed. Did you use the knife as a magnifying glass?

As a novice, you can write well 🤭🤭🤭

😡😡That's it? That's it?!

This book is anticlimactic The title is good, but the writing power is visibly missing at key turning points Later, the typical outline collapses, and I don't know how to write it.

It's considered a good grass. It's a bit slow at the beginning, but it's fine later on. The subject matter is also novel