Sixteen Years Old, Just Practicing Qi, the Centenary System Is Here

Dude, what's your logic? If you know you are cheating, why don't you cash it out quickly? You are rewarded with 10 Qi-training pills, but you have to hoard them instead of eating them. You say you think the pills are too precious and you can't bear to eat them. What's going on?

The protagonist is always unclear about his wife's senior sister (someone else's fiancée), and it is estimated that they will be together in the future. I am practicing fairy writing well, why do I always want to touch the line of ethics and morality? It is not pornographic writing. I can't stand it and ran away🏃🏻‍♂️‍➡️🏃🏻‍♂️‍➡️

Card level, the cheating is still stingy, I can't see it at all

It's really hard not to vomit. You say he is 'poisonous', but he seems to be able to stand it. But in many places, people are left speechless. I can only say...

It is said that the three golden chapters attract readers to read the book. What you did, author, makes it difficult for others to read. Although the later chapters look good, the first few chapters are unbearable and readers will run away.

It takes too long to travel. The author wants to highlight that the map is so big that there is no need to waste time like this. It takes almost a year to go back home. After a few trips back and forth, everyone will die.

The first thing I wrote is a bit weird, but it is much better when some plots are introduced later. There are no poisonous points for the time being. It is tentatively classified as food.

This update is too slow, and there are not enough manuscripts saved, which means that there is not enough idea in advance. Even if the early start is good, it may not be able to keep up with the collapse in the later stage.

What the hell is the latest 63 chapters? Do you still want your younger siblings to become immortals?

Investigation object: "Sixteen years old, just refining qi, the centenary system is here" - Male protagonist - [Cao Ze] Investigation results: [Soul Transmigration and Seizing the Body] Judgment basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates the time-travel situation of the time-travelers and The purpose of recording this profession is to allow observers (readers) in all worlds to know in advance the travel situation of travelers in this world, and to volunteer to provide observers with a quick query service for travel information If there are any errors, please correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on June 2, 2025

I didn't see the update stopped, so I won't update it.

Let other foreigners see it and think we look down on it. Let's write another chapter for each person.

So far, it's okay. You can fight monsters by jumping higher levels. After all, sows will climb trees when they're in a hurry, but don't fight monsters by jumping higher levels. There's still a fundamental difference between the upper realm and the lower realm. Also, I hope that there will be no need for physical training. There will be less miscellaneous spiritual roots in the street, and the three of them must be practiced at the same time.

I was put off by the title of the book. When I saw the title, I thought it was just a cookie-cutter novel. I didn't expect it to be a masterpiece of fairy tales written by a somewhat talented author.

Yes, I have read too much about waste materials. It really tastes better if I change the taste. The book is also well written. Come on

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of writing about cultivating immortality. Now it's all waste material, making it look like I can't write about cultivating immortality normally.

Lived, but only lived briefly

Although there are many poisonous points in the early stage of this book, if you really put aside these poisonous points, or if the author handles it better, I feel that this writing style is very good I feel that the early rhythm of the whole book is very good, and it is more novel than quite a few assembly-line immortal writings. However, the problem lies in the author's inexperience to a certain extent, which has caused some originally insignificant places to become serious poisonous points, causing a book that was originally very potential to be lost to everyone. This can be seen from the number of people who liked me before. When a book is in chapter 30, if my review has more than a hundred likes, it means that your book has great potential. I think many people miss out on those few poisonous points, such as the details of the pill at the beginning. Even if you want to patch it up for the protagonist, it reflects If the protagonist doesn't take the usual path or is extremely cautious, you can either change the system rewards directly to things that won't cause abnormalities, such as spiritual roots, understanding, etc., Or you can apply patches immediately on the spot. You want to suppress the protagonist's realm and prevent the book's combat power from collapsing. So fast, but current readers don't have the temperament to watch your protagonist slowly improve like a soldier You must have one of your understanding, realm, foundation, and background. Let's talk about the poisonous point of keeping pets. In fact, animal pets are very bad in current fairy tales. It is very popular, because everyone knows that animal pets need resources, look at the background, and use pure background boards in the later stage. It is very simple. It takes hundreds of years and treasures to raise a demon king and demon creature. How come your protagonist can be raised in a few months or a few years? Unless you get a Pokémon that cultivates immortality (which I feel is not impossible), animal pets are completely unnecessary for this kind of immortality novel about mortals cultivating immortality. Your attempt to rely on this method to suppress the combat power in your article will arouse readers' disgust. The protagonist himself is already too high to be too low, so he needs to learn a little bit here and a little bit here and there, and he is not happy with both.

How is the author doing? Will this book be continued later?