Journey to the West: Starting from Tiger Pioneer

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It's very good, the plot is gradual but not interesting. It has a great sense of story and is one of the better books on Journey to the West in recent years. Come on, author 🤭🤭🤭

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It feels very short, and the progress goes by very quickly... The writing is not in-depth enough, and the portrayal of the image is relatively average... I gradually fell apart and I don't know what I read...

In fact, this novel has already reached a dilemma. If you have no strength, you still set up a wisdom barrier. You have no force as a basis. Why should others comply with your request? You can flip the table and read the original book to find out. The king hates the monk, but he is more afraid of death. In fact, the best thing is that your force can compete with Monkey Sun, and then you can set up a smart barrier for them to break through. If they can't break through, then find reinforcements. This is more reasonable. Personally

The banshees that can be captured in Journey to the West have good looks, some strength, and gentle methods. In my impression, they are Xingxian. Other banshees have too big backgrounds (peacock princess, scorpion spirit, golden-nosed white-haired spirit, jade rabbit spirit) who are either heaven or spiritual mountain. Not to mention the gods, the Heavenly Song and Dance Troupe, its leader Fairy Chang'e, the Seven Fairies, and Princess Baihua, these are simply impossible.

It's okay to call me Xiao Zhuan Feng in Shituo Ridge. But outside of this place, you have to call me Nine Diamond Xuan Feng Ancestor.

Author, please don't mix it into the plot of Black Myth. This game is fun, but its plot is indeed the same as 💩. It's dark for the sake of being dark. The world of Journey to the West is already big enough, so don't engage in conspiracy theories and mix it into other world views. I just want to watch a pure Journey to the West fan without the Six Saints of Hongjun, nor the prehistoric world, Fengshen and other dark and profound world views.

It doesn't look good at all. It still looked good in the early stage, a typical trend of opening high and moving low.                                                                                                                                        In the early stage, there is a deep brotherhood, the three rival Manniu brothers, their escape from death, wonderful fighting scenes, wretched development, camaraderie, and the battle between the monster clans to compete for the mountains and forests. What about the later stage? How is the fight scene written? If you are strong, don't fight him, if you are weak, kill him instantly! And although you have been saying that the protagonist values ​​friendship, there are no examples to support it, giving people the feeling that the protagonist is lonely and has no friends in the later stages! The later stages of Ah Qi felt like a running account, the plot went by very quickly, and I wrote about a lot of small things, but the master didn't write them down in detail!

I thought it was another bad book, but it turned out to be unexpectedly comfortable to read. It is considered a fairy grass, but the amount of daily updates is a little less. I gave it a monthly pass, so cheers!

Pingping

After reading Chapter 122, I have a question. I don't know what the author's definition of Journey to the West is in this book. Why am I struggling with this definition? Because when the author described Zhang Daoling, Zhang Daoling directly said that he would stop people who traveled to the West to learn scriptures. Then there is a question. If I find someone to kill you and then save you, is it considered a merit? The original Journey to the West did not describe how these mount monsters went down to the lower world. It only described how they were captured by their owners. They all said that they sneaked away to the lower world when I was not prepared. Let's not talk about conspiracy theories, because one day in the sky and one year on the ground may really be out of the world. The door slips around a corner, and he has been doing evil in the lower world for half a year. In other words, according to the original description, those immortals and Buddhas are trying to avoid being associated with the Eighty-one Dilemma, but to help Tang Monk overcome the Eighty-one Dilemma. I know that many people now think that the immortals and Buddhas are all bad. , But just like the officialdom, there are ways to be evil, and it is impossible to directly threaten or induce him. Just like Dujiao Si's lower realm, will Laojun just let him go? He only needs to leave out a Seven Return Fire Pill, and the boy will eat it after seeing it, and then fall asleep. , The one-horned Si sneaks into the lower world and meets the Buddhist scripture seeker. The difference lies in the use of human nature, so the cause of this difficulty is the boy's greed, rather than the Laojun's orders and temptations. The Laojun can divide the merits by solving the one-horned Si. Now Zhang Daoling's direct order will make me feel that Journey to the West is not inevitable for the movement of heaven, but a show of immortals and Buddhas. Since it is a show, there must be a simpler and more exaggerated way of handling it. The intrinsic motivation of the drama itself is missing, and the expectation for the content later in the book is gone.

First of all, I am sure this book is very interesting, so you can feel free to read it. But in the last few chapters, I feel like something is wrong. Here are some suggestions from an old bookworm of more than ten years. If the author feels that my suggestion is wrong, just ignore it 1. It is not recommended to have an emotional relationship with a mortal woman, because the early setting will kill the mortal, and you have to hold back your strength and not be able to enjoy yourself. What is the purpose? The four maids obviously fell in love with the master, but they ended up being dismissed and married to other people. It's all because lifespans are completely unequal. The protagonist can be in seclusion for ten years and the maids will be old when they come out. Why bother? After accepting a girl, whether it is a maid or a wife, at least it will be a long-term companionship, rather than a relationship that will be thrown away after use. (It's best if you can revise the article) 2. There should be two updates a day. The book is a good book, but the author's writing style and pace make it easy for people to read the book, and the results may be poor if they keep it. But if you are not good at writing emotional scenes, it is not recommended to open too many harems. Many novels collapse in writing emotional scenes 4. When the protagonist reads the panel, some unused skills and techniques that have been replaced by superiors should be replaced by ellipsis. Otherwise, it will be too blatant. There are more and more skills in the later stage, so I can't list them one by one. At present, I may have one or two hundred words per panel.

My name is Qi Hu, an unlucky guy who traveled from Blue Star to become a tiger demon. Three days ago, I was on my way to go fishing with my friends, and ended up eating mushrooms in a small shop. When I woke up, I turned into this beast-headed person! At first, I thought I was poisoned. After all, the red umbrella has a white pole, and you can lie down after eating it. As a result, I later discovered that this special thing was not an illusion! I actually traveled through time in "Journey to the West"! The little monster patrolling the mountain is actually me? Let me see, where am I, "Jindou Mountain"? Isn't this the lair of Qingniu Jing? This is where he fights against Sun Wukong and one hundred thousand heavenly soldiers and generals! As a result, I found that I seemed to have arrived early, and the Green Bull Spirit hadn't descended to earth yet! Now, I hang out with my two monster brothers, one is an elephant monster and the other is a deer monster. They treat me very well, but I know in my heart that this is a cruel world. After all, Sun Wukong will take over this place in the future, so I have to make plans early. Although I am just a little demon at the moment, I know what will happen in the future, so I must seize the time to improve my strength. The king asked me to patrol the mountains. After patrolling the southern mountains, I would visit the northern mountains. After touring Beishan, I started thinking about the big river at the foot of the mountain. The water was fast, but I always felt that there was something in the river. After asking various questions, Brother Lu Yao told me that the end of the river at the foot of the mountain is not the sea, but a bigger river. The river is called "Tongtian River". {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}

To be honest, I feel that the growth of the protagonist has stopped, and it's quite ugly to see the protagonist's hot face and cold butt. In the end, you really need to find a more reliable backer, maybe a master or something. Don't keep writing about the main character. It's difficult to even have a formation of heavenly soldiers. The reality of Big Brother is difficult enough. Let's give some adventures in the book.

This book could have been a hit, but because the author likes to suppress his power, it probably became a hit.

Can you be bolder? I feel like a petty person. Even with a golden finger, I can still suppress it so hard.

It's no different from this book. I can't talk about the fairy grass. The starting point is really bad now.

What's the use of plug-ins? If you want to push your limits, don't use cheats.

How should I put it? Later on, I became more and more dull. I just brushed everything off in one go, and it felt like a running account. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

The book is quite good, but it is too watery I listened to the book and listened to Che Luluan talking non-stop. Sometimes my blood pressure is really high.

Originally, there were few updates, and the meaning of one sentence was written over and over again.

I first started reading the author's books, partly because of the popularity of Black Myth. At that time, the topics were very popular and the stories were well written, so I stayed to read the stories written by the author. I can't stand it anymore, probably after I finish studying the scriptures, I will go outside the territory. At that stage, the author no longer has the writing power to control the overall situation from the beginning. The author of the story of Hu Daxian gave us the ending using Spring and Autumn style of writing. What a pity! The joy I felt when I first read this book, the description of friends, enemies, and disasters is like a painting, I can imagine... This is a rare feeling I have after reading so many novels, so that I don't want to remove it from the bookshelf. I just think about the grace of the Great Immortal Tiger, the high-spiritedness when he broke through the realm, the control of his own destiny when he went to heaven to serve as an official, and the freedom when he came down to earth to find friends. Just leave the remaining ten or so chapters empty. I hope to read your novels again in the future. Your loyal readers

I'm going high and low, and I can't write anymore. No outline?

It's ok, as long as the protagonist is making progress and moving forward, it's ok. It still feels the same and is very comfortable to watch. I finished watching the update before I knew it.

I knew it wasn't going to work after I took that skill book. That's where I stopped chasing. If you cheat even though you have a cheat, then it will just collapse.

Write a lot of things in just a few sentences, and repeat the emphasis

Grandma, you have ordered more than 170 chapters and voted for several monthly votes. This is how you treat me, right?

I gave up long ago😁😁