American Comics: My Career Template Is Very Serious

The author's language description has a kind of naive innocence, which is too different from the protagonist's identity. The setting is quite interesting, but the writing system is too messy and dry. Some of the playing processes cannot be written and simply skip. When I meet a film and television protagonist, I can't help but lick between the lines, and then I want to express the protagonist's aloofness in words. The classic teenage state is sometimes cool and sometimes cold, and Erha is equally sharp. You have a good foundation. If you write more, you will definitely be a good person with enough experience. The current state still lacks life experience.

What the hell? The beginning is so foggy and mysterious that it makes people want to stop watching.

After looking at it for a long time, where is your panel? Why are you so shy, or has the system left?

He said his memory was fuzzy, but it felt like he was straight out of his wits. He said the motorcycle looked like a horse, and then spoke with a sense of innocence.

Other book friends have all complained about it. Let me say one thing: the lines are not life-like enough. After writing, the author reads it himself and recalls whether you speak this way when communicating with others. But this is normal. It is a common problem for newbies. Write more and practice more~

After reading a few chapters, the author is a complete newcomer. Step through all kinds of pitfalls. The author should write more fighting books and practice writing and setting up various aspects of the plot.

The writing style is incomprehensible, I can't continue after reading a few chapters, and the stitching is also a mess 🙂 Really, it's a newbie's fault.

The story structure is okay, but the concept is too big for novices. The profession is too complicated, and complicated layouts have been added. No matter how you look at it, something is wrong.

It's very well written. I haven't played Baldur's Gate 3 and don't understand much about Goldfinger, but this world is actually DC plus Marvel. I have some comic content, can I grasp it?

What is the potential of this book? Is it creativity or writing?

Good looking, food and grass😅

Alas, there are all kinds of stitches in the clouds and fog, and the author's writing style. Don't you divide large sections into sections?

If you write that Pig's Knife is a Chopper Team professional with DND, and write that Pig's Knuckle is level 12 or 3 at the beginning, that's fine. Still quite attractive. Don't do any conspiracy, just do it. Killing indiscriminately. Only good-looking

The most important thing is sentence fragmentation, all long sentences. Long sentences are difficult to attract people to read.

So far, this book is quite to my liking, and it's right on my brainwaves.

Everything else can be broken down slowly, but can you break it down into sections? Each picture is a long paragraph•ᴗ•💧

This is a good book that caught my brain waves. However, the protagonist's abilities are too complicated and complicated, and they continue to be added, which makes me confused. Can the author provide specific and detailed data?

It's too complicated. The world is complicated. Your career settings are even more complicated. There isn't even a panel. You just write whatever comes to mind.

Has anyone read the updated chapters? How is the content? Even the chapter names are gone in subsequent updates.