One Person: the Correct Way to Open the Animal Master

What's wrong with being someone's son? That's not the most poisonous thing. Only an author from Alabama can write about being a son to Master Ren and having a sibling relationship.

It's still a traditional set that forces you to slap the face and follow the plot. Beast master + golden finger + dedicated famous teacher guidance. If you don't turn yourself into a strategic talent, it's a waste of resources.

There are connections, there are famous teachers to guide you, and you have family background. If this is still a loser, then I can only say, 6

The description of abilities is still relatively shallow, and I feel that the positioning of the protagonist's combat power is a bit vague. The first few chapters seem to only describe the protagonist's awesomeness, but there is no detailed explanation of how awesome the protagonist is. It is just a general setting of affinity and evolution. The specific how the protagonist uses this setting is not elaborated. For example, the setting of the protagonist's battle pet is just a setting. What specific abilities can be described in depth, and how to evolve Fengxing Tongman, and how to operate it is another touch. However, I may want to express myself in battle, but writing it this way gives the impression of being a very general formula without any intention. Personally, I feel that the setting of evolution is like an experiment. First, there is a general idea direction, then specific operations, and finally the final actual results. Now I feel that the three processes have been generally replaced. I still use the old-fashioned writing method from a few years ago that only writes about how awesome the protagonist is, but does not explain how awesome it is. I feel that there is no market for it anymore.

One chapter has been withdrawn... It can only be said that it is not to my taste...