Douluo's Beginning Fusion God of War Body

What is written is extremely ugly😤😤😤😤😤😴😴😴😴😒😒😒😒

Without a heroine, half of the readers have been lost

Regarding the title of the protagonist! Originally the protagonist was named Qian Renyu, and I saved a lot of manuscripts under this name. Then one day, I suddenly had a discussion with a friend, and he told me that calling him Qian Renyu would not work because the protagonist is a child picked up by Bibi Dong, and Bibi Dong and Qian Xunji have such a relationship, so what is the name? It can't be called Qian Renyu. After that, I changed Qian Renyu to Bi Tianqi, but maybe because I saved too many manuscripts, I didn't notice some places. This is my problem 🤤🤤 If you find it, you can mark it and I will change it immediately. Please! !

The protagonist has a super invincible wisdom-bringing halo! , The poison test has been completed. It's okay, as long as you can bear the halo of wisdom, you can continue reading. I really can't stand it anymore. Chapter 37. I won't complain, just read it yourself and understand everything.

It's really annoying to explain time travel for a long time. Who cares what you were like in your previous life? You are the president and no one will lick you. There is no time travel article that doesn't explain the past life. If you don't know what the story is, you can't give a brief introduction. Just say it's a sentence about Blue Star Time Travel and that's it.

Some words about this book: The last one was also a Douluo fanfic. Because it was also my first time writing, I didn't understand it in any aspect. Moreover, the last book was also affected by the comments in the later period, which led to a complete collapse in the later period. This book is Gui Qing's second one. I don't know. What will happen to this one, but I will absorb the lessons from the previous book. This book will be written in more detail, but the writing or the storyline may still be a bit green. I will work hard and hope not to disappoint you. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, you can write them down in the comment area and I will read them! ! ! Thank you all again! !

The setting of this book is really interesting. The combination of Zhenhun Street and Douluo is unexpected and touching... It's just the author's writing style... He still needs to work hard!

The monthly recommendation vote has been voted. This book is very interesting.

Ninety percent of readers of Douluo fanfics come here for the female character in the original work. They may have differences on the female protagonist, but the overall goal is the same. Douluo fanfic has no female protagonist=fuck off the street

To make everyone laugh, the reason for watching Douluo fandom is to watch the heroine... So, Monk Shangwen is sorry 😜

In the later stage, the more miserable Tang Doudou is, the better.

There must be at least one, right? I originally wanted to read it, but when I saw that there was no heroine, I gave up on it.

What fanfic would you write without a female protagonist?

Authors should not be influenced by the comment section. Only good works without female protagonists are good works. In ten Douluo books, there are eight stallion books, one with a single female protagonist and one with an unknown female protagonist. Those who like stallion books are perverts. There is no need to cater to such people. It affects writing. Only works without female protagonists and single female protagonists are in line with the core values ​​of socialism.

I felt like it was so uncomfortable to read. I read these two books, and the settings are both pretty good. But the author doesn't seem to know how to write emotional scenes, which made me feel uncomfortable all over. Also, the protagonist felt like a child pretending to be an adult, which was too stiff and looked a bit unnatural. This is my overall opinion of your book. Also, I read that martial arts simulation. You said that the setting is based on Shrek, but you are almost offended. Now that you are almost offended, can't you accept the kitty? And isn't your reason too far-fetched? Why don't you want to create obstacles in the team? It's almost turned into hatred for you, right? Can't you give Kitty a good outcome? He has to be with a fallen prince who has a romantic streak and even abandoned him? Emmm... This is my personal opinion as a cat fan. I feel that the kitten works so hard but ends up being cheap. Dai Mubai is a bit unhappy.

Well said, Shrek Academy is garbage. An academy for talented people. There is not even a simulated training environment, and it relies solely on the students' talents. The purpose of opening the academy in Flanders was utilitarian. And so are the students we accept. Just look at talent. To be honest, it feels like all the protagonists in Tang Sanhui's early works were crammed into one. .

I have to say, it's very strange. In fact, if you want to write about Zhenhun Street and Douluo, there is no need for such a fusion. It is better to set the protagonist himself as the spirit sender. It is weird to deliberately integrate the two routes. The protagonist crosses from Zhenhun Street, or the protagonist himself is the spirit sender but the martial spirit is a weapon, similar to ten Yama is used as a weapon, and a very boring point is that the guardian spirit is Yu Jin. For me, it is more interesting if you write about Yang Jian, Nezha, and Lu Bu Baiqi. Finally, the pace is so fast, so fast... In short, it doesn't feel very immersive, and when I read this book, it gave me a very Mary Sue feeling, which was very uncomfortable.

Zhu Zhuqing

Don't use your brain when watching, there are many poisonous points and illogical logic

The name Bibidi is better than him, oh, even better than Tianqi, bah (*｀へ´*) I will live as long as Tianqi.

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This book made me laugh to death, the protagonist said, the supporting character said, the protagonist finished talking, the supporting character said

Whatever you wrote, please take it off the shelves immediately.

No, it's very well written. I voted for it every month.

I can't figure it out, why would you stop updating? >O<

As the helmsman, I support you, come on!

This is a bit outrageous, why not the Tenth Palace Yama?

Can't you call me Bibi Fan? Bibi Qi sounds ugly.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

It is necessary to collect a bunch of female protagonists who are like TM stallions. How can a man change his wife without a wife? The subject matter is good.