From the True Inheritance of the Immortal Sect to the Supreme Taoist Master

Finally, it is no longer a "Foundation Building Powerful" novel. MD wrote one hundred and two hundred chapters about practicing Qi and building a foundation. To put it bluntly, there is no outline. I am not confident in my own book, and I dare not write about the feeling of a high-level immortal cultivator.

Like the title, it can be seen that the author has borrowed from Immortal Industry and Dao, but the writing style is indeed a bit dull. My evaluation is that it can be read, but it still needs practice.

It's beautiful, I see you as a genius.

I feel like I got involved too early in some affairs of the Taoist masters. The protagonist is still the Taoist master. It would be difficult to write a plot involving too many Taoist masters.

In a word, it's ordinary, it's better to write about the devil's way and kill him when he comes in 😒 in CCC

Genius Liu's writing is very good, why are the monthly tickets so low? The Qingwu Immortal clan next door uses AI to write articles with hundreds of dollars.

There are only 12 great realms left. No one has been able to obtain these twelve realm seeds for millions of years. So where did the great realm seeds of the first and third generations of ancestors, a certain Taoist master and the leader (only the great realm realm seeds became Taoist masters) and others come from. There are only so many Taoist masters in this realm. Twelve are not enough. Even if the destroyed great realm realm seeds are preserved and can be used, they are not enough.

Why not kill Zhao Quanming?

It's a bit like what Tomato wrote. Keep this style and flow of genius. It's best to have a single female protagonist. If the emotional drama is not easy to write, don't use a female protagonist.

Isn't it almost the end of the book? Each realm is short. Judging from the title, the protagonist still has two realms before the end.

Have you ever been a genius, so you take it for granted that you write something?

It's becoming more and more indigenous, a bit.

How should I put it? It's my favorite novel about a genius who was born with a high starting point and cultivates immortality. However, the writing style is too naive and I can't read it. I just glanced at it and it slipped away.

Yuan Ling, a disciple of such a bad sect, said he would be destroyed if he was destroyed. It would be too rubbish for him not to take revenge.

The writing is a bit poor, but it doesn't matter, it's just fun. Geniuses are the real immortals.

The protagonists are all real kings, and they don't have a Taoist title yet. All the real kings in this novel have a Taoist title.

This must be some great eunuch...

Isn't it the trumpet whose golden elixir was removed?

At first glance, this author can't be considered a new author, so why does it feel so much like Dao Zheng Zheng? Does any book lover know which master's waistcoat this is? One book is not enough to read!

@These chapters are not well written. Whether it is the Purple Emperor or the Lingbao, they are top figures who have lived for several epochs. They die like a roadside person. They are anxious to deal with the ending: not good

You just spent three yuan, and you get it for free

The Genius Stream can advance by leaps and bounds, but the purpose of breaking through the realm is still story-telling, and one should not break through for the sake of realm. The most comfortable stage in this book is when the sect gets along with the master. Just like the string of a kite, the string is broken after meeting the ancestor. The protagonist cannot be exposed to powers beyond his own realm. Storytelling is the purpose of the protagonist's interactions with people and the stories he encounters. From the middle to the later stages, the outline becomes chaotic. Realm for the sake of realm, just like dealing with homework, the protagonist has become very thin, without emotion, like a set of data.

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Well written, keep it up! ! ! ! !

I am used to reading fast-food novels, but when I came to this classical fantasy novel, I couldn't read it at first. But as I read it, the plot is reasonable, the logic is clear, the characters are delicately drawn, and it becomes more and more interesting. It is a good book. Today I went back and read some old fast-food novels, and I felt that those novels were so childish.