The Immortal Clan Started from Renouncing Its Clan and Establishing a Clan

After the protagonist completes the task of quitting the sect, there are many transitions within one chapter, resulting in a messy structure, confusing plot, and a very poor reading experience.

The writing feels okay, but the plot is a bit cliche and the characterization is a bit thin. There is still potential. Come on, author, I'll give you a monthly pass.

Come on, come on 😜

Not bad. Let's keep updating.

Interested book friends can move on to watch! ! !

Everyone speaks in a deep voice, and all the co-authors are produced from the same template. It's boring to watch.

Is this a family with no sons or development of power?

Everyone is welcome to take a look at my book "Magical Fairies: I Carry out a Scientific and Technological Revolution in the World of Cultivation" Chen Mo, as a wearer, learned that the earth may be destroyed by the beast tide. Bury your heart to raise future generations with the seeds that carry the earth's civilization, and let them become the inheritors of the earth's civilization. But her wife and children also concealed a huge secret from him. They are all magicians and have embarked on the path of cultivating immortals. Technology, magic, and cultivation are three different forces that, when combined, will surely set off a huge revolution!