One Piece: I Stole Koby’s Life

The 200 times the effort at the beginning is converted, which sets the pace of this book. Development in the early stage, promotion in the middle and later stages, qualifications, etc., Can be fully compensated by hard work. What is difficult is that the protagonist has nothing, and training does not show any blessings for the entries, such as improving quality through hard work, etc., And adding some devil fruits later, it is completely useless. What if you have more abilities? Moreover, the existence of the acquisition method is ridiculously weak. In other words, the interaction between the characters is like a machine, and whether the favorability is improved is only reflected in the system prompts.

I can't imagine how perverted Big Mom will be after grabbing the steel balloon. After all, she is a woman who can become a Yonko just by lying down! Destroyed the giant village at the age of eight, even the awakening fruits couldn't break through the defense

No, I'm really convinced. Damn it, it seems like the author said that if you don't have this qualification, you will definitely not be able to learn. Then what are you doing with 200 times the effort? If you don't have the aptitude for the Six Styles, you won't be able to learn the Six Styles. If you don't have the aptitude for the Armament Style, you won't be able to learn the Armament Style. Then your 200 times effort will be eaten by a dog. After watching half of it, I don't see any effect of your 200 times effort. Obviously this is the most useful, and this will allow you to reach the level of the General Yonko in two or three years.

I was shocked by this opening. Are you a normal person?

I ran away after reading the first chapter. I can't say it's poisonous, but it's different from my personal choice. After getting the talent of 200 times the harvest, the protagonist in the book has to risk being a slave on a pirate ship for two years, just to meet Luffy like fate, and then get Luffy's talent while completing a mission. This kind of personality and way of doing things seems unacceptable. I would think this way, you have got this kind of plug-in, why don't you level up and develop yourself first. It's not fun to be a slave on a ship, and wasn't Luffy in Windmill Village before he went to sea? You can just go there and find him. But I understand that the author wants to follow the way the plot is written. After all, the animation is indeed like this, and the first episode appeared on the ship. However, when writing novels, I hope that the protagonist will be more rational.

Like the title, don't do it Why? First, the hang-up is too big, and it will be difficult to grasp it later. Once you can't grasp it, you will collapse Second, unlike copying talents, this can be explained. No matter how talented you are, your early performance will not be so noticeable. By the time others find out that your talents are incredible, you will be invincible. , But the ability to copy the fruits is different, which is equivalent to violating the iron law. Once you start copying, it is impossible to copy only one or two. Even the official plug-in Blackbeard has the ability to have two fruits because of his special physique. You are so defiant, and you are not invincible. You are already intolerable to the world, and no one else will do it. I'll fight around you Third, your cheat is very powerful even if it doesn't copy the Devil Fruit ability. When I read novels, I always tend to prefer that Goldfinger doesn't need to be so unnatural. Most fan fiction is already very powerful based on the plot advantage. Plus, the talents given by the author are basically very awesome. You can cheat, but small cheats are fine. One is to find an easy source for the protagonist to continue to become stronger, and the other is to write more carefully and have more words The above is my personal opinion not to copy the ability of Devil Fruit Then the author has already written this, so what should I do? Give some restrictions to the mistakes, just write that you can copy the record, but you can only use one or two at the same time (although this feels superfluous, but there is no way, you can add one more, collect how many abilities to achieve certain achievements and give some rewards or something, such as 10 super-types, 10 animal-types and 10 natural-types and other stage achievements), with improving physical fitness and domineering as the main line of becoming stronger, this Be careful not to deliberately suppress the protagonist. In fact, this is also a common problem with cheaters. It is fun to read in the early and middle stages, but it is too awesome in the middle and late stages. If you want to continue writing, you can only suppress it. This makes it uncomfortable to watch, and many people abandon the book. Okay, that's it. The above are purely readers' personal opinions and small suggestions. We who read novels still hope that you who write novels will become more and more interesting. Come on.

The protagonist is not "pirate" enough, and it doesn't feel that way when reading. If you are not courageous enough, you will be no different from ordinary people. You will have too many thoughts and complex ideas. If you are a growth-oriented protagonist, please speed up the progress.

The author of the appraisal is similar to Lu Mingfei. He looks forward and backward. He is a pirate and still looks forward and backward. He has no courage and is a spiritual coward.

It's quite speechless. The setting of this book is that two hundred times the effort buff was taken away from Kirby two years ago, and then it is a replica of Kirby's experience. With such a buff, even if you exercise a little bit, you won't be called a weakling like your brother. You have to wait until Luffy comes, right? Two years wasted like this? Is it a buff or a replica template? Can't you write without following the plot? Luffy was still in Windmill Village two years ago, Sanji was still at Sea Restaurant, and Robin was still under Sand Crocodile. There are so many buffs waiting for you to get them, it's like completely replicating Kirby's life. It's really awesome.

The author writes a protagonist who can beat others when he is cheating! It's not fun to write at all! What kind of hidden strength is there? . . .