Douluo Jueshi: This Xiao Xiao Took the Heroine Script

The author gives Xiao Xiao a painless way to increase his height. The original version is really too short. It is only a little over 1.5 Meters, which is a bit inconsistent with Huo Yuhao's later height. There are many ways to increase the height. The one I can think of right now is to transform. Doesn't it happen that he has the body of a dragon and fish? After the arowana body rises later, you can perform a perfect height-increasing transformation. It doesn't need to be too high, about 1.7 Meters or 1.6 Meters is enough.

It was quite interesting at first. It didn't follow the popular route and the plot was novel. There was a sudden resurrection at the back, what the hell, it was so sloppy. When I read the previous article, I had been looking forward to Xiao Ding's martial spirit shining brightly in the competition, but in the end, he changed his leather holster to his martial spirit. It was both a pleasure and a real regret. It's still worth it. I skipped ahead and read a few chapters. Please come back again if you have the chance.

It looks good, cheers for the author😍

The plot of the latest chapters is very good, but I wonder why Shrek is so bad😭. The eldest sister is quite kind-hearted, and Mu Lao can understand (Pavilion Master), but how come the others are so bad😭, and they want to take away Yi Lao's credit, it's really bad😡. Looking at the introduction, it turns out that the three of Hao, Dong and Xiao will be together in the later stage. I am looking forward to the plot.

I've read some, and I'd like to say my conclusion first. The book is good and good-looking, with novel plot angles and creative ideas. However, there are indeed some problems. As for online novels, the true details are not very good, but if you pay attention to the details, the novel will be better. There are two plots 1. The protagonist killed a group of evil soul masters and regained the territory of the Star Luo Empire. However, he was abandoned as a death squad and the credit was divided. If Shrek hadn't stepped in to support him, he wouldn't have gained any benefit at all. 2. The protagonist joins Shrek Academy, Tang San takes action, the system shows its power, and then... It's gone? The protagonist continues to live his daily life happily without any sense of crisis. In summary, the forces that the protagonist has offended, and the forces that have offended the protagonist, include: Star Luo Empire, Shrek Academy (Tang San), Sun Moon Empire (Evil Soul Master), and various large organizations in Dou Er. Almost all of them have problems with the protagonist. They can be said to be the enemy of the whole world. I don't know. In the end, how does the author come back and let which force befriend the protagonist Details say that given the level of understanding of the emperor of the Star Luo Empire in the original work, there is no reason to give up the good opportunity to reward the protagonist with this kind of "benefit". However, this is not a big problem. The main problem lies in the second plot. The protagonist throws out Tang San. She already knows that Shrek is Tang San's power and knows Tang San's hostility towards her. The protagonist's dissatisfaction with Shrek is also written in the article. Why is there no back-up preparation at all, but she happily plays house with the protagonist group? Will Tang San, whose spiritual consciousness has been eliminated, get any feedback? The author didn't say. The protagonist is worried that Tang San will attack him again, so what preparations has he made? The author didn't say. Regarding the bad things in Shrek, will the protagonist tolerate it for a while and then take revenge, or will the protagonist solve it on the spot and return to his heart? The author didn't give a clear direction either. The author can say: After the three-dimensional spiritual mind was poisoned, Tang San could not sense the protagonist, and the protagonist felt relieved; it can also be said that the system informed that Tang San could not affect the lower world for a while, and the protagonist felt relieved. But isn't the protagonist afraid when nothing is explained? The child walked through the busy city with gold and didn't panic if anyone saw him. . . In short, I hope the author can change the plot and give an explanation to make the story more reasonable.

After thinking about it, in fact, if there is a world without Dong, Haoxiao's possibility is the greatest... Because probably only Xiaoxiao will fall in love with Huo when she is nothing... Classic question The girl who falls in love with you when you are nothing and the girl who falls in love with you after you become powerful Who do you choose?

It's best not to let Xiao Xiao lead the way and Yu Hao becomes a pendant The most taboo thing about pure love works is this kind of status is completely unequal and meaningless. The so-called love is also full of reluctance You can refer to Lintong from the two sages of the bamboo forest. My personal favorite pure love fanfic The gap in the front is simply huge. Unless Yu Hao comes with some more opportunities, it is difficult to imagine how to catch up with Xiao Xiao. Let Yu Hao play the third martial arts more.

In fact, the text is not very comfortable to read. Xiao Xiao was tricked by Shrek, and Tang Fozu had a big problem, so the side details about Shrek's passers-by were skipped, and Xiao Xiao didn't know when he would realize that he was tricked (too little, please update soon) and he didn't know if the two protagonists would break away from Shrek. Let's do this for now, update soon.

What I find most disgusting about Dou Er: 1. Wang Donger + Wang Qiuer = Tang Wutong? Wang Qiuer's life span is twenty-five thousand, while Tang San's lifespan is only ten thousand? 2. Ask the protagonist to recognize his ancestors in front of Huo Yuner? Also forcing Huo Yuhao's second candidate to enter the God Realm to be his father? 3. Electrolux initially had a chance to be resurrected but was completely wiped out by Tang San's Qingqing Valley test? By the way, he also killed Wang Donger? Just to wait for Wang Qiuer to sacrifice and then resurrect Tang Wutong, right? Tang Wutong still has no memories of Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer? Are you really not the third person? 4. Did you, Tang San, personally violate the laws of the God Realm just to threaten a pregnant woman and threaten to kill her child? Level 5.98 Super Douluo Xuanzi was actually killed by a Soul King in front of several Soul King students and ran away with the hostages? If the hostage is not the protagonist, can he still get away with it? Isn't this the first time? 6. It's no problem that there are no seats in the canteen of Shrek Academy. Why are they not allowed to be taken out of the canteen? Things that I don't think have any problems: 1. Shrek's running training, I personally don't think it's a problem here. The main reason is that in the original book, only the protagonist actively runs there every day, or because of his special skills. Others don't have any regular running plots, and his teacher Zhou Yi doesn't ask to run a few times. Otherwise, it would be impossible to have so many students in this class after one year. 2. Cheating, in a world where strength is paramount, if you cheat based on strength, it is not cheating. The border war here has been going on, and there is something wrong with you still thinking about fairness. 3. Blow up Mingdu, this is a classic accident, and there will be no problem with the follow-up handling by the companions, otherwise Huo Yuhao would really be punished. 4. Tang Yazong's slip of the tongue is normal. Although there is indeed something wrong with her words, her original intention is still easy to understand, and she does not mean any harm. 5. There is no problem with Shrek's dormitory. The conditions in my middle school are much worse than those in the outer courtyard. I am already in my 10th grade in middle school and no one has complained. What's more, the single dormitory in his inner courtyard is much better than my university. 6. The plot related to Ma Xiaotao is actually not bad. In the previous novel era, the setting of not knowing each other before fighting was quite popular. For example, the number one villain BOSS in Perfect World has this kind of double pupil. However, her plot during the Dou Er period is not a poisonous point but is still a classic. By the way, the darkening of Xiaoya and Xiaoya later is still a plus in my opinion, but it is too cruel and less interesting. I can't remember anything else, so let's leave it at that.

I saw it on Zhihu, and it sounds good. True dragon and luck-type soul beasts are very suitable for tripod 🙂

In fact, I feel like I can just kick Dong out. With or without it, I still belong... To be honest, the character wd is really funny If you look closely, you will find that this thing is actually more disgusting than San...

I love Xiao Hao so much 😍, but the first few chapters are really a bit toxic 🤐, please give it a try, author

The subject matter of the book is good, and it's the type I want to read (it's because of the love between Xiaoxiao and Yuhao, but you made Xiaoxiao offline for such a long time), but the plot from when Xiaoxiao took over that Cen Hu's body was so boring that I didn't want to read it, so I haven't read it for nearly a month since I caught up on it.

It dragged a bit, with a lot of (in my opinion) useless plot, making the plot too slow. And Xiao Xiao is a little aggrieved. Aren't you the protagonist? The first is Xiao Xiao's death. I summarize it as: A system that can be discovered by Douluo God, a body with a body that is a soul saint but is cursed. Then it was gone. Zhang Lexuan's concern may also be the same. This system is of no use to Xiao Xiao, it just gives him a technique. This technique looks very high-end, with five tones and five elements, but I haven't seen any dazzling operations yet. Then the damage is repaired with gold soul coins. Too low. Why don't you change it and use Huo Yuhao's mental power to repair it. This can not only bind Huo Yuhao, but also connect you, the sea god, to come. Because they were bound, Poseidon recognized both of them as children of destiny, and then Poseidon first tried to control one, and then the other. Let's talk about Huo Yuhao, he appeared too late. We are here to see Xiao Huo's CP, so don't write so much about other Wu Feng and that person from the evil family. At most, Zhang Lexuan can write more, because she is a friend Huo Yuhao should appear when Xiaoxiao goes to the night market, instead of writing about evil siblings. Do you think this sister from the shoe family can have any effect on Xiao Xiao in her zero soul? And he's still fat. I am not discriminating, but I am imagining the world, I am dreaming, can't I dream of a beautiful woman? You have connected her to the evil family of Wuhun Palace, and she is your younger sister. Why not use the Hu Liena template. Doesn't the fox girl smell good? And how did Zero Soul Power enter Shrek Academy? So we met Xiao Xiao in the cafeteria of Shrek Academy? Even if it is as you wrote, this sister brought up the taste of dad, and Huo Yuhao also happened to describe dad's taste in the original work. In fact, you can write that the sister ate grilled fish and then thought of dad. In this way, there is no need to write so many weird food descriptions and scenes, and then Huo Yuhao can be naturally involved, instead of having him fight with Wang Dong again. Because the fight is the point where Tang San comes into contact with Huo Yuhao, you put the point where Tang San comes into contact with Huo Yuhao, before Xiao Xiao comes into contact with Huo Yuhao. This means that Xiao Xiao must confront Tang Sanqiang, and then have to face Wang Dong's competition. So I think it is too late for Xiao Xiao and Huo Yuhao to meet. You can mention it when Xiao Xiao goes to the night market or even registers. In this case, Xiao Xiao and Tang San are weakly opposed, and there is a teammate who can help them fight together. As for Beibei's line, you can actually draw Beibei out of the whole scene, because Zhang Lexuan is currently Xiao Xiao's side, so you can also write the confrontation between Tang Ya and Zhang Lexuan. This is Shrek Academy. On the contrary, their attitude towards the evil soul masters. They claim to be righteous. Shouldn't they target the evil soul masters more vigorously? Xuanzi offered to reduce the number of tasks for the pickets, so how to trigger the Death Incident? In that case, how can Xiao Xiao and Huo Yuhao build a close relationship during the game? Based on some of the author's comments in the comment area, I think you seem to have no outline. I suggest you think about the outline, because it feels a bit broken now. There are too many characters, but too little effective information. I don't understand why Tang San came into contact with Xiao Xiao? I don't understand what help the zero-level sister from the evil family can give Xiao Xiao. I don't understand why Wu Feng's character is the same as Wang Dong's. I initially thought you wrote about my sister because my sister is Xiao Xiao's roommate. It turns out that Xiao Xiao's roommate is Wu Feng. And this Wu Feng took the Wang Dong template. How could these two, a young sect leader and a bodyguard, have the same personalities? As Ning Tian's bodyguard, Wu Feng would never be arrogant and domineering. Isn't she afraid of losing the face of the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect? Chapter 11, I only read the title, Fight, why Wu Feng proposed a fight. And the reason for the fight seems to be that Wu Feng framed Xiao Xiao. Wouldn't Wu Feng's behavior affect Ning Tian? As you wrote about Wu Feng's psychological activities in your article, if I were the leader of the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect, I really would not want this kind of guard. The same suggestion applies. If the author is big, you still need to make an outline. I wish you a prosperous literary career.

I thought that if I wanted to write a group portrait, I could have Huo Qu take Xiao Xiao with him when he awakens the second martial spirit, and then take the opportunity to leave Shrek to write a story about the two of them traveling the continent together. It seems that Dou Er and his colleagues are writing about casual cultivators...

There are too few roles in the system. Xiaoxiao must keep recharging, and the system can become dormant and gain resistance bit by bit. Tang San cannot only try to fuse the soul once. The next activation can be arranged when the new soul ring is obtained. When the soul power becomes stronger, Tang San continues to try to fuse the soul. In the process, the system can make some small moves to pretend that the soul fusion is successful, but in essence it is still Xiaoxiao. In this hand With the split soul of Tang San's daughter as a bargaining chip, you can also get some benefits from Tang San, get some god-given soul rings, replace all the second souls with hundred thousand year soul rings, and even be able to fuse souls with Huo Yuhao after Tang San's transformation. When the Titled Douluo is stronger or stronger, Xiaoxiao's memory will be restored, the soul disguise will be removed, and the system will be fully activated.

I know you want to write a system, so don't interfere too much in Xiaoxiao's life. But can you please use a more tactful approach? You are too poisonous. Or make Poseidon unable to interfere with him for a period of time. When I read more than ten chapters, I didn't feel happy. After your 50 million gold soul coins are used up. Can that guy from Tangshan still continue to interfere with you? Also, this super artifact is too useless. Can't you even block the interference of external gods? All at the expense of approaching self-destruction. Very unhappy.

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I hope Xiao Yuhao and Xiao Xiao can interact more 😫

How should I put it? I don't quite understand why Xiao Xiao fell in love with Yu Hao. If it was just a good impression, it would be absolutely fine. Regardless of identity and strength, Xiao Xiao was unconsciously taken down in a week or two. . Isn't it a bit inappropriate (of course I personally look forward to these two becoming a couple soon) How come Xiao Xiao, who has twin martial souls, and Yuhao's martial soul, who has three martial souls, merged? I think it's a bit far-fetched. If it doesn't work, give Xiao Xiao another wave of strength and add a prototype of a god-level martial spirit As for the rest, they are mostly OOC minor issues.

It's so lively. In the first chapter, Tang Ya teases Zhang Lexuan, and in the second chapter, he asks Mr. Mu, Ye Xishui, if he can stop laughing, he can be diagnosed with Yuyuzi.

After reading it, I felt quite comfortable reading it. It didn't have the mindless slander of Shrek and La Tie like other fan fictions. The only problem is that Huo Yuhao's hook is too small. To be precise, Xiaoxiao's hook is too big now. I hope it can be changed.

If the author doesn't update, I will cut you into pieces and stop asking for monthly tickets.

I feel like what I write at the end is a bit... Emm, it's quite strange.

I haven't watched it yet, can anyone tell me what it's like?

It's a bit uncomfortable to kiss Huo Yuhao with Cen Hu's body.

Everyone has read too much Douluo fan and is a bit confused.

Is this book good to read? How come this is updated intermittently?

Finished😰

Recently, for no reason, I wanted to write a fanfic with Xiao Xiao as the main character, whom I liked before. She is a pure aboriginal, and her sexual orientation should be 100. But now, um, I am in a kind of tangled fear, because I really don't know how to deal with some things. My current idea is to save Huo and Wang as friends, and then take the Shrek route. After Moon sends her, she will be the future master of the pavilion. The problem I don't know how to deal with is how to deal with several empires. Xingluo is easier to deal with. My heroine has been preparing to choose for a long time (there is little pen and ink, which is normal). The others are garbage, mainly because Sun and Moon are not good at dealing with them. Can we unite with Orange? Welcome everyone to leave a message