Rising from the Streets of Pakistan

After reading Chapter 18, there is no interesting piece of junk. I didn't see how I was spending money... He said something here and there. Write whatever comes to mind... Damn, when will Qidian launch the function of blocking authors?

If something like this is unfinished, you will have to pay historical responsibility for it. It is hard to say whether this book will become a eunuch!

The author has no direction at all in what he writes, which is not good.

1. There are more than a dozen chapters in the main story, but none of them have been completed 2. Pakistani girls have darker skin, and white-skinned Indians belong to a higher caste. Do you think white-skinned Pakistanis are Aryans? 3. Should the author try to get a passport to see and then come back to write a book? This is simply outrageous. The national conditions of India, Pakistan and Bangladesh are very similar. Look at how biased your writing is.

There are so many things to say about picking up girls, and the most disgusting thing is the Chinese people who criticize laowai. I'm speechless.

There's no main plot, it's a bad plot with several women entangled in it.

A dying fantasy of a licking dog.

I was reborn as a licking dog in Baba Yang 😡

The author writes well, Pakistan is in ruins! It's true that people who are not from my race must have different hearts (~_~💧)

The system is full of poisonous articles, the stallions are full of pleasure, and the author is really cheating.

I don't even know what the idea is to write a book. You write about Pakistan. You actually give people Chinese names and shout about them every day. You say that it's hard to express your exotic style. You don't even have a name. Why are you Pakistani? What's even more embarrassing is to call me Mo Bai. Even if you call me Xiaobai, it's more smooth than this.

The first thirty chapters are already here, what are you writing about? Even if you want to cheat, you still have to be in Batina to complete the mission? Then he wrote a few trivial things and it became popular on the Internet? You should go to Douyin and post videos. Writing novels here won't make you popular. Junior high school students can write anecdotes better than you. It's so fun! Do you really think that a few beauties can go viral after just a few videos? Tens of millions of people post videos every day, including many beauties. How many of them are popular?

It's quite nice, but the space is not used well!

The setting of a hundred-fold increase in wealth is a bit off. A ten-fold increase would be great. Otherwise, if you just do it for a few years, you won't be able to earn enough money on earth.

You've already written about foreign countries, so why don't you write a little more lawlessly? You don't even dare to dream big, and just engage in ambiguity in a different place. Why don't you write leisurely pastoral articles

What the hell! Just write about a few women? Can't write about career or anything?

In a poor and chaotic place like Pakistan, the male protagonist is set to be slow and passive. He does everything by being pushed around, without any initiative, and everything he does is described as ordinary. This is a farm setting, which is not suitable in Pakistan. Moreover, that kind of environment is romantic and ambiguous with a few girls, which looks too awkward.

After reading the first few chapters, there were many typos and few words, and I immediately lost interest in reading any more.

When writing a story, you need to write it like a story. Clearly define the main tasks and move them from east to west.

Is there nothing else besides being tired of being with a girl? Go write pornographic articles, it's suitable for authors

The progress is too slow, not comfortable at all, very depressing.

It's resurrected, the author will work hard to complete it, it's still quite interesting 🤓