Two Worlds, I Am Building a Starship in the Wasteland

Hey, it's okay, it's just to highlight the protagonist's handsomeness and how cool he is when he drives a motorcycle. This is not a low-tech era in the interstellar era.

It's still enough for now, but there are too many supporting characters. The most recent update is about a group of people. It's not necessary. Let's get to the main line and write branches. At present, more than one-third of the chapters that have been updated are written about the group of people named Chu. It's boring to read.

The sense of déjà vu

It's probably about using wasteland resources to exchange for money from the interstellar era. Selling gold in the early stage can earn the funds to buy a small ship, but ships that are several kilometers or even larger cannot be earned by collecting resources in the wasteland. I don't know how to make money later. I think we can consider disasters in the wasteland. After all, they are also local products.

The protagonist's behavior gives me this feeling

Don't you have intelligent robots? It feels weird that in the interstellar era, in addition to spaceships, there are mechas.

The imagination is not bold enough, but it has a primitive beauty.

It's all about motorcycles, not two wheels

It sucks to grind out the gold logo. Can't you melt it and cast it? It has to be rubbed off and the weight will be lost.

There are really so many natural disasters and strange things in the wasteland world. Can the people of the wasteland still survive? Even the protagonist's interstellar civilization can barely survive, let alone the ordinary people in the wasteland. This is nonsense. Do you believe that the interstellar civilization wants gold?

The plot is completely backwards. Normally, it should be the end of the world with high technology but no food. The economic world has low technology, but plenty of food. Why are you using gold directly? Is there still a shortage of gold in the interstellar world? The core of any planet is full of gold.

In the interstellar era, there is much more natural gold than on earth, unless gold is set to be a consumable.

There is no feeling of being crushed by technology.

It is almost as easy for an interstellar civilization to build a spaceship as it is for us to build a car now.

There is an asteroid called Psyche in the asteroid belt, with a mass of 2.72 Trillion tons, and at least 60% of its mass is gold. This was accidentally discovered by astronomers. It is not known how many asteroids with natural gold there are in the universe, so how can there be a shortage of gold in the interstellar era?

So far, it seems to be a good idea. The overall plot is smooth, a little bit poisonous, and not a big problem.

Not bad, food and grass 🙂

It would be better if you update more frequently. Squeezing out toothpaste will not attract many people in the early stage.

There are too many characters, which are not recognizable and make people tired to read. It should be streamlined and use words with distinctive characteristics to refer to the characters of various forces. Otherwise, the writing will feel a bit strange.

There are a lot of pitfalls and details that have not been explained clearly. I hope they can be dealt with after they are put on the shelves. I will just tell you this once and for all.

If you don't get an update when it's released tomorrow, I'll hang you on an electric fan and spin it

Is there still a shortage of gold in the interstellar age? There is no shortage of gold on the earth, but most of it sinks to the center of the earth due to density! In the interstellar age, you can collect a lot by finding a fragmentation zone. Unless gold is a consumable like copper in the interstellar age, there will be no shortage of this thing. Even wires in the interstellar age may use superconducting materials, unless gold is used as superconducting material.

Stellar class battleship tears through the clouds?