Witcher in the Steam Age

Review, recommended by a friend, I read 30 chapters, let me tell you about it. A half-hearted start? The third golden chapter is good, the world view setting is more attractive, but the level of the rest is average. Looking at your profile, I have a feeling of being extraordinary. The introduction has explained a lot, including personal power, farming, family, and striving for supremacy in all kinds of sewing. I hope you will do well in sewing. It doesn't matter if there is no heroine. If it were written like the Electromagnetic Riot Army, it would be better not to write it at all. First of all, the details of the scene are well handled, coupled with the steampunk, it has a Klein feel. But there are too many trivial things, and there is basically no description of the general environment. The title of your book is about the steam age. Can you not write about the representative products of the steam age and the struggles of small characters in the quasi-medieval world? There is also unclear explanation of economic basics such as prices and currencies. It is not clear whether it is omitted because it is difficult to write, or simply does not want to deal with it. The next chapter is Chapter 30. The composition of the superstructure is not clear. There is no description of the zz or the ideological structure. Even the shadow has not appeared. What aspects of the extraordinary power and its impact on the steam age have not been described. Do you want to import slowly? Starting from a small character, are you also a famous V? ! Ha. The character portraits are well done, vivid and three-dimensional. But there are too many profile descriptions of small characters, especially the dialogue. In order to set off the protagonist - the whole chapter is full of dialogues and narrations of minor characters, giving people the feeling of nothing but water. . Don't know how to grasp the rhythm and attract people. You can read what "Go away, misguided person" wrote. There are also too many curse words, but there is no sense of humor like Heifan, which deserves improvement. Secondly, the plot advancement is ink, for example: the plot of the arena fight has too much foreshadowing, is not interesting, and is also mixed with other small sub-plots. . In the front, it was easy to eliminate unnatural creatures like ghouls, but in the back, there were a few chapters of mortal ink. The feeling of separation was too strong. This shows the problem of unclear strength positioning and extraordinary system. There is a link, but the explanation is not clear. The ranking is unclear, and the combat power is unclear, and there is no quantified rank or value. Emm, it feels like a lump in the throat. Then, there are a lot of small problems. For example, in Chapter 9, the odds are 2 and 7. It's a stable way to give out money, right? It's ridiculous. Finally, the author should keep working hard!

The writing is sophisticated, the narrative is smooth, the structure is grand, and the timing of the arrangement is good. However, the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional drama is not described thoroughly enough. I look forward to a big explosion. If you can persist, this book will be a masterpiece!

The writing style is sophisticated, which means he is an old eunuch.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I think I understand the biggest problem with this book. Possessing strength that far exceeds the local combat level, but does very frustrating things. To put it simply: The starting point is set too high, unable to rise, and then lowered forcibly, making it difficult to stand. Plot analysis: Description of strength at the beginning, strong, very strong, but low-key. I thought it was the kind of behind-the-scenes development flow, but it turned out not to be the case. It felt like it wasn't written well. Hunting ghouls and trolls, the church mistakenly thought they were monsters that could destroy the local church. (Strength increased.) Turning around, he only sold goods for 80 currency. (This plot feels worthless, with only shortcomings but no advantages) He turned around and lost hundreds of thousands of currency. The reason was that the local gangster caused trouble and the second person, the younger brother, was cheated in his investment. (The plot of this contradiction is too blunt.) I gained the power of a giant, and then had several chapters with a black boxer who was worse than his own younger brother. The explanation given was that he was not used to the strength of giants and wanted to recruit subordinates, but the description said that actual combat was not suitable for black boxing matches. . . (Not only was the improvement in strength not mentioned, but it was getting weaker.) Then, there was also intrigue with several local underground organizations. (To put it nicely, it's called a gang; to put it worse, it's just a group of gangsters) It can be said that it started to lose its strength from the beginning, and it was gone after twenty chapters.

Before reading Chapter 43, it is understandable that he concealed his own strength because he wanted to teach newbies the materials in the secret realm for free. But you can be said to have exposed your strength in front of people. You killed a few trolls, came back with a bunch of troll heads, and then told them that I picked them up... Now that you are like this, is it still necessary? The protagonist has no money, little power, no background, and insufficient channels to obtain extraordinary knowledge. How can you obtain it without exposing your talent and strength? I really don't understand. What's the point of turning around and denying this after killing the troll in front of others?

The name and introduction are very attractive, but I don't know what the content is about.

The beginning is quite amazing, but after a few chapters, the B-frame plummets like a blank article! !

The content is novel and interesting. Since the soul possesses the summoned object and obtains the ability of the summoned object, it is very high-end, but the result has to change slowly. The 8-cylinder engine drags the bicycle. The pace is too slow, the title of the book is The Witcher, and there is no description of the troll hunting at all. There are more than a dozen scenes written in 110,000 words. For an old bookworm like me, there are only 6 scenes that really promote the plot and I can pay attention to them. The rest are all rubbish. Finally met the troll, returned, conspired, implemented the plan, diverted the disaster eastward, and cleared the old forest. There is so much content that can't be more than 20 chapters. Add the bookshelf first to see the effect.

Does the author want to write a group portrait article? If you don't focus on the protagonist, what kind of garbage gangster writes two or three chapters? Why is this gangster the villain? Or an important supporting role? It's just an excessive little weirdo. In order to appear real, I wrote such a long chapter. This is still the new book issue. What do you think?

No, have you missed the development of online novels in recent years? This routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger was also popular when I was in high school. Now I have graduated from college.

The writing and outline of the plot are not quite there yet. It is not attractive enough, and the plot is not exciting enough. There is a reason why it is not popular. After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the character of the protagonist is still unclear, and there are not many interesting points. It needs more practice. The setting is okay. If the writing and plot can keep up in the later period, it will be considered qualified.

A demon hunter who can kill unnatural creatures, if he doesn't make money, may have sharp weapons and murderous intentions. Isn't it easy to deal with ordinary people? Why is the social status so low?

In the early stage, I thought it was the kind of invincible novel where the protagonist is strong but rather stubborn. Then the protagonist struggled to join a gang, and after more than sixty chapters, the protagonist became a loser again. It's really frustrating to watch.

The protagonist said that he wanted to keep a low profile, but his actions were not the same. There was something wrong with the plot and the logic didn't make sense.

Too verbose, the rhythm is a bit problematic

There are a lot of plot problems. When I read the first part of the story, I thought it was a fun story about Wei Wudi's development, but later on I was told that it was a story about a mindless comeback and a frustrating story. Alas, there is no witcher flavor yet. Weird.

Change your introduction, this is outdated.

Why isn't it popular? It's too stubborn and doesn't feel good at all. There's something wrong with pig's feet. It makes me feel aggrieved.

Author, who taught you to write novels like this? Are you a primary school physical education teacher? The plot is piece by piece. Before this paragraph is finished, it immediately changes to another scene. It keeps changing. Do you think you are making a movie? Do you want to express your sense of picture?

The writing is not bad, the description of the battle scenes is good, but the background of the story is too little, and the hunters are taught too much. Except for the protagonist, the combat capabilities of other hunters are a bit too mixed. Except for the protagonist, the other higher-level hunters are meaningless. They are all miscellaneous soldiers in the process of encircling and suppressing the trolls. The promotion of the protagonist's strategy starting from the boxing match in the early stage is a bit forced, or a little unclear, but when the trolls are exterminated, it is not bad. Except for the fact that the villain named Ivan was a bit forced to push the story, seeing the second male lead withdrawing together with other Knights companions, and still having to forcibly frame him was a bit depressing. Even if it can be explained as making me angry and angry, the plot is not flattering and the punishment afterwards is not enough. The deception caused so many people to die, and even directly threatened the rescue of a few knights. Several other noble parents seemed to have no expression, and the result was just words. Except for the strategic promotion of the boxing match, it feels a bit forced and underpolished. If I study it in more detail and think about it, it will probably be better. In other words, the overall style of the book is very good, but some scenes can be more detailed and more reasonable. The battle scenes are also more comfortable, and the protagonist's character has a certain It's a little weird. It's understandable that you hide yourself in the early stages if you have the ability, but the protagonist's hidden motives are not very clear. If it's to avoid enemies or enemies but you don't have one, you're afraid that enemies with higher abilities will discover your golden fingers. But the protagonist doesn't seem to understand the existence of a higher level, or what the high-end combat power of the church is like? . The world view shown in the ability system is relatively large. It can be seen that he is a veteran player of Bloodline. In terms of the weapon system alone, there is a lot to write about. The protagonist's abilities are also easy to carry. Can we write more about other weapons or switch back and forth during the battle? . The protagonist's character may be more stable or calm. The previous impression was more that he was a little afraid of things and was a little afraid of things that were not clearly explained or described. The protagonist seemed to be avoiding something, but he did not say what he was hiding from. At present, I don't really feel the hidden meaning of it. If there is an explanation, the most likely possibility is his golden finger. But when the protagonist faced the boxing match incident, the explanation for the male lead was very obvious. He was not afraid of facing the wind and rain. At the same time, the display of local underworld forces was a bit weak. I felt that the male protagonist was very strong and a little cautious. He was clearly crushing the gangs. The above are just some personal opinions. I don't want these things to affect the author too much. If the author can see it, I don't want to destroy some of the ideas and stories you already have in your mind. This book has some logic and is not perfect in some places, but I think it is quite interesting. I think the author may write better and better in the future, but I hope that the conflicts in the future will be more intense. At least I can arrange a character like Ivan so that he can vent his anger more when he dies.

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Can I say that I couldn't tell who the protagonist was for several chapters at the beginning?

I thought it was pretty good in the early stages, but once I got used to it, I didn't want to open it anymore. The follow-up didn't have the appeal that made me want to continue watching. I'm also thinking about why, the plot is not compact enough? Incoherent rhythm? Not enough fun? There should be all

Will I still use this number when I write books in the future?

Can the author write down the level setting? I watched it for so long that I forgot what the level was.

In the introduction, he is Ginza Howling Wolf, but in the book, he becomes a white-blooded wild wolf.

Why did he hide his strength for so long before suddenly being exposed?

Many sentences are difficult to read