Alchemy Crown and Ancient God Hunter

The plot setting is just for the sake of being aggrieved. The protagonist's family is not good to the protagonist, and the protagonist doesn't like them, no problem. But in the end, you told me that the anchor of the protagonist's humanity is them? Are you sick? Shouldn't the anchor point of human nature be determined based on the one with the deepest emotional connection? It shouldn't be the protagonist's master and the protagonist's maid, but it turned out to be them, and then they forced the protagonist to stand up as an anchor for maintaining humanity, and then got caught again. It was simply a setting set up entirely to seek death. Why write such a thing? Are you disgusted that someone asked me to come over and spray you? In order to suppress the protagonist, disgusting readers set the settings

The world view seems pretty good so far, so I gave some recommendation tickets and monthly passes as an investment. I don't know what will happen next. I still prefer a single heroine or no heroine. It's better to add some restraints; If the rest of this book can also match my appetite, it will be great, and I can add another book to my collection. But I have had enough of the lack of books. I am tired of reading those assembly-line books with poor writing, low ideological depth, confusing worldviews, and incompatible values. I hope the more I write, the better.

Can the protagonist die without smoking that crappy cigarette?

A part of the worldview is given at the beginning, slightly earlier than the worldview of A Song of Ice and Fire, and it does not reflect the huge gap between mortals and extraordinary people. (But as a web article, this is better) The battle scene hasn't appeared yet, so I don't know if it can be written like a blade. (The comparison is meaningless) Of course, it is very well written!

It's so frustrating. Should a good guy be held at gunpoint? Stop being your bad guy, it won't do any good, it'll make you a mess

There are ten million wars in one million worlds. No time to rest, no place to hide. In the galaxy, there is only war.

The plot is too long and drawn out, there is no need for so many surprises and twists and turns, the decisive development is over, the twists and turns are ruined, the climax of the plot is diluted, the verbose and unnutritious trash talk is also removed, it gives me a headache and just wants to turn the pages quickly, that's all.

Nothing exciting at all, the setting is crazy, and the protagonist is also frustrated

Don't die, Lao Cao😭😭😭

Are you happy now? Just do it to death 😭😭😭

The atmosphere is good, but it doesn't have the orderly and progressive design of Secret. It feels like it was written on the fly according to a rough outline. There is very little effective information and the pace is a bit slow.

I always feel like I've seen a profile similar to this one before, but the date is earlier than this one.

If you insist on finishing it, it will definitely become popular. I just don't know if the author has the perseverance and the ability to not finish the job.

Is it a little too bland? It feels like a common problem in fantasy novels. The narrative perspective is like a God's perspective, and there is no immersive feeling.

It's quite good. Contact with secrets again and again drives the protagonist to explore and go deeper. The writing is also good. There are also the conflicts between various forces, the social environment, and the empire that hangs above. The protagonist is like a foreigner who has just entered Yharnam, which has not yet collapsed, but the world outside Yharnam is also active.

Don't die, I already want to vote for you, but you can't die now. At worst, I'll read other books to support you. It's not easy to find someone who suits your appetite. Don't die, don't die 😢😭

Additional refinement

It's a pity, there's not even an outline escape

The soul is back, the soul is back! ! ! !