From Family Sacred Tree to Immortal Clan

The core selling point of this book should be the idea of ​​having many children and good fortune, starting with many children and then promoting healthy offspring, building family bonds, and then entering a farming mode. Don't you think the part where you take your son to become an apprentice is too drawn out and too far off-topic?

Huh, so similar?

Even plagiarism fails to capture the essence, and the "sister-in-law" subplot is highly toxic. The worst in the Divine Tree series...

The previous book on simulators was poorly written; it completely lacked a clear framework. I hope this one will be better.

The protagonist doesn't need too many women. It's better to "selectively marry" them to improve their quality. Then, when the protagonist's son has grandsons, and the grandsons have... Well, they'll all be considered the protagonist's descendants! Anyway, the protagonist has plenty of time, and his aptitude will gradually improve.

Let's stick to writing a martial arts story. The formula is all the same. Try changing it to a multi-female lead story, something you're good at, with the female lead running throughout the plot. That should do well.

The Divine Tree is the protagonist's foundation, and currently, its advancement seems to rely on two things: time and the sheer number of descendants. This is illogical, as the Divine Tree's growth is based on the family, but family development isn't solely determined by quantity.

My new book is here! Please vote and read it! This is very important to the new book. Thank you all for your support. Feel free to voice any opinions here. I'll check them regularly, and I'll consider good suggestions. I'm generally open to advice.

What's going on here? They're already slacking off before it's even released! ❌ Rating

It's a pretty good book. Why cut 😭?