From Family Sacred Tree to Immortal Clan

The core selling point of this book should be to have many children and be blessed, to have more children in the early stage and to have eugenics in the later stage, to establish family bonds, and then to enter the farming mode. Don't you think the part where you take your son to become a teacher is too procrastinating and too out of touch with the topic? Moreover, in the apprenticeship section, neither the family's growth nor the protagonist's growth can be seen. The world background is also a very traditional fantasy world, which is not novel. The plot of slaps in the face and feedback to the readers' emotions is also very ordinary. The overall content of more than ten chapters is tasteless, and it would be a pity to abandon it. My humble opinion, please delete if you don't like it

Um, so similar?

Even the essence cannot be copied, and Sister-in-Law is extremely poisonous, which is the worst in the Sacred Tree series. . .

The previous simulator was not well written and I couldn't grasp the framework at all. I hope this one can be written well.

There is no need for the protagonist to have too many women. It is better to "marry carefully" and improve the quality. When the time comes, the protagonist's son will have grandchildren, and the grandchildren will... After all, they will be considered the protagonist's descendants! Anyway, the protagonist has plenty of time, and his qualifications will gradually improve. Moreover, the number of tree hangings is already very good and many, but he still needs to control it, otherwise it will collapse easily. It is better to portray the protagonist and family growth well. This is the selling point! Otherwise, if there are too many women, it is easy to become a bunch of data tools, which in turn will drag down the article. (You can delete it if you don't like it)

Let's write about Gao Wu. The routines are the same. Change it to a multi-female protagonist that the author is good at. The plot will develop throughout and the results should be okay.

The sacred tree is the foundation of the protagonist. At present, one improvement depends on time and the other is simply the number of descendants. It's unreasonable. The Divine Tree uses family as its fundamental growth point, but developing a family doesn't rely solely on quantity.

The new book is here, please vote and read it. This is very important for the new book. Thank you for your support. If you have any opinions, you can put forward them here. I will read them from time to time. Good suggestions will be adopted. I will only listen to advice.

What's going on? I'm slacking off before it's even put on the shelves. ❌Comments

A very good book. Why cut😭