Hogwarts Wizards of Middle-Earth Check-In

There are many people who have only watched the movies of The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings, and have only a little knowledge of the cities of Middle-earth as a hobby. Writing a plot without a movie will bring out a strong feeling. In addition, the previous writing is good, and this kind of tearing feeling in reading will be intensified. This may cause many readers to start reading the book directly, and then continue to read the book until they are familiar with the plot. Some readers may even abandon it directly due to the too strong sense of introduction.

In order to make a wand, the protagonist goes to the land of the tree people every day to "burn, kill and loot", breaking the peace that the tree people and the hobbits have maintained for many years. The tree people invade the hobbits. If the protagonist behaves openly and honestly, "I am the magic wand, and all I do is to cultivate people, and if you don't obey, you will do it." Then he will kill decisively and openly. It turns out that the protagonist is a white lotus + green tea. To the tree people, "Why is this war so inexplicable? Why are the tree people so grumpy?" To the hobbits, "I am a savior who came from the sky to help you resist the invasion for free. I am so righteous." It's a bit difficult to comment. Can you change it a little bit? It's easy to think of the little people around you who "always get into trouble and act like I'm here to help you, you owe me."

Harry Potter's magic is different from that of dnd's mage. If I had to say it's similar, it's a psion. What's the core? It's a miracle, a miracle where all your wishes come true. I really can't stand it when you use magic as the power of telekinesis.

You cut someone down, but you still think it's inappropriate for them to seek revenge from you. After you win, you still want to eradicate the weeds.

Could the author please add some assumptions? Only European wizards use wands most often. African Wagado wizards use hand gestures to cast spells in the first grade. This is Rowling's official setting. The Harry Potter Wiki records it.

After the Battle of the Five Armies, this book is no longer interesting. Is the key protagonist preparing to be a eunuch until his death? You've traveled through time, yet you still have so many worries? Not to mention multiple heroines, but at least two or three, right?

The author did not understand many settings of the book, and there were also many errors in logic and character design. The simplest one is Saruman at the White Council meeting in Rivendell. At this time, he was not bewitched and his mentality did not change. As a result, he was very jealous and spoke in a very unpleasant tone towards the protagonist. Then the protagonist responded in a tone that was deeply offended, and the inner narration actually stated that Saruman would be controlled by Sauron in the future. 🤔 That's because Saruman was ambitious and radical, but he was also good before he was bewitched, but he was just a little "bad". Including later when you cooperated with Sauron, you always wanted to be more technical and become the boss. How come you are being controlled now? Their "souls" are of the same level, but Saruman's power is sealed. I didn't read much at the end. I read other book reviews that said there was no female protagonist. I wonder if the situation has been changed? But when I watched it a long time ago, there was a protagonist who went to collect the wife of a king. Please, the fate of everyone in the world of Middle-earth is determined, especially for this kind of love, you go directly..., Forget it, I feel huge thunder. I have traveled through time and still have a "human" body that needs a magic stone to live long. I am really speechless and want to die. Can you go in without such permission? You who are outside the world and enter Middle-earth are also Ainu, and you still need these 🤔🤔

Waste time travel: Do I have a system or am I a waste?

It's a pity that after writing the heroine, it turned out to be unsightly, not pure love, not sentimental, and the dry emotional drama took up a lot of space. The surprise of the original Harry Potter world's magic appearing in the demon world was weakened. I hope the author's next novel will be better.

The beginning was okay, but later on the protagonist in the small forest went to pluck branches to annoy the tree people, and then killed some of the younger brothers and the boss. I admire these three views. The best thing is that the protagonist did not regret or reflect at all, and was still angry and cheering. 6

You just sent out a copy of it, copying it without changing anything except the name of the protagonist. The last person who did this was when he brought the Lao Gun system to Middle-earth. After being discovered, the book was immediately removed from the shelves and sealed. You are really not afraid. It's hard on the eyes to copy everything.

The introduction looked familiar at first glance, and when I clicked on the first comment, it clearly stated that I copied the MC to Middle-earth. I clicked on the first two chapters and compared them. I found that the plagiarism check rate was really high. Especially in the first three paragraphs of the first chapter, a few words were changed. When I came back, I saw that the post claiming to be plagiarized was still there, but when I clicked on it, the post did not exist.

These recent chapters have been too toxic, and I can't understand the point of starting to arrange for natives to be transformed into wizards, just to satisfy your bad taste in Hogwarts?

After reading more than twenty chapters, I suddenly wanted to check out the comment section, and I saw this. Is this book so outrageous?🤔

I hope that the heroine is Princess Alwen, and the two of them can understand each other by making a wand for her. Aragorn was annoyed the most. All the races in Middle-earth risked their lives to fight. In the end, Aragorn became the king by virtue of his blood and led an army of undead to solve the problem. There was no magic at all.

Hogwarts is too low-level compared to Middle-earth, but at least there is a God of Creation there.

How to say it? The protagonist's character is a bit like Tang San Does it need to be said who Tang San is?

No women, no power, like a dish without salt or seasoning

It's a bit incomprehensible. Isn't the original intention of watching this movie just to use the unique magic of Harry Potter's worldview to make the protagonist appear holy in front of the people of Middle-earth? But why do some people always mind the powerful power of Harry Potter's magic in Middle-earth? It seems that it is not allowed to have such powerful power. Do they really not want to see the protagonist become a saint but want to see him being tortured?

Come on, author, keep at it. Apart from MC, you are the only one who has written the best Chinese Chinese novels in Qidian.

It was pretty good at first, but when I went to Saruman, I immediately wanted to give up the book 😅. After strengthening the white robes so much, I was almost besieged by the White Council and I wasn't even in the wizard's tower. In the end, I had to fight hard with the 4 protagonists plus Smaug. The dragon was seriously injured by a blow. I used the crystal ball to shoot lightning like the punishment. The balance between the two of you is too different.

It's a short article, not much interesting, and also not very good at writing. Overall, it's acceptable.

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I have always wanted to have a novel that brings the magical and magnificent magic of Harry Potter's worldview to the magnificent world of Middle-earth, and finally I have one. There has always been a regret that the author of The Lord of the Rings only used magic to set off the atmosphere of the book, and did not make it a universal power system. It only served as a moderator. The author of A Song of Ice and Fire also adopted this approach. Although the Harry Potter world view has universal magic, and magic is integrated into every aspect of people's lives, it is very magical and charming. However, because its magical world is placed in the real world, the entire magical world is far less magnificent than the Lord of the Rings. It would be very interesting if we combine the characteristics of the two.

I really like this book and hope it will be longer and more epic.

I didn't see the end, so I flipped through the catalog and looked at the titles of the last few pictures. It was another scene of destruction and creation, please! Don't make it so big, this kind of plot is outdated, the world can't survive without the protagonist! Just let it develop naturally! It's so tiring that I don't even have the desire to watch anymore!

No, I've read eight chapters and it's all just anecdotes. Let's have some plot.

I couldn't write half of it and said it was...

I feel sleepy after listening to it, just plain and simple