In the World of Kexue, It Is Bound to the Naruto System

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

The characters are perfectly designed and the plot is directly based on Conan. The author's writing skills can also perfectly reflect the interesting plot. This alone is extremely valuable. Not to mention the plot is very enjoyable to watch. The protagonist basically has a very high perspective from the perspective of God throughout the whole process, and it is easy for readers to become involved without sacrificing the price at all. The second point is not like other fanfics where the female protagonists are messed up. The protagonist just lives a simple life and watches the clouds rise and fall. This is really appreciated. She doesn't lose her cool at all because of the thing in her crotch. After 800,000 words, it's basically a start

It doesn't cause trouble, it doesn't show its saintliness, it doesn't fall in love, it doesn't change the plot, it doesn't create an original plot, and it doesn't have many laughs. From the beginning to the end, it's just a nanny going through the plot, and occasionally it's a little cool in front of Conan.

The presence of the shadow clone is too high, reaching the level of clone poison.

My own shadow clone is talking to myself. Isn't this poisonous point corrected? ? ?

Come on Akutagawa, if things continue like this, the re-employment of the undercover agents after the organization collapses will depend on your Konoha and Akatsuki 🙂

Too frequent nanny-style plots lose the freshness of the Naruto system

Chapter 4: As soon as I received the novice gift pack, I started to make up random settings and add settings by myself I can't even think about what kind of bad things I could do in the future If you haven't read it, just run away. I am a historian, this is a bunch of history

I have nothing, I want to be happy or not, I want 1, 3 but not 1, 3, it's mediocre and worth having 😒

In Conan, Naruto is capable of dimension reduction strikes, transformation, stand-in, and teleportation. If you play these three, you can become an urban dragon king at the genin level.

The plug-in is awesome but doesn't cause trouble at all. At least it blows up the God's toilet. My little life has become troubled again recently. I don't want to live a good life anymore, so I feel distant when I see the old woman.

I just want to ask the author if he has read it, and what is the core goal of the entire novel? What does the protagonist want? Doing tasks for the sake of doing tasks? No woman, no money, no enjoyment, learn the skills of Hokage and use it as a nanny?

In the early stage, there were a lot of pitfalls, and later on, they became more and more unbelievable. The loess of the Fourth War can create a mountain of earth that traps the demon statue of the outer path more than 100 meters away. The complete body can instantly cut off the mountain top. If you have the Ten Tails at the Six Paths level, you will not die.

Pure NPC-style plot, I can't stand it anymore

If you don't believe me, I've read a few chapters of the content in the comment section, it's really a bunch of stuff.

It turns out that the golden finger is too big and there is no design to correspond to the plot. It looks like this.

Kaleidoscope + Wood Release + Sealing Technique + Tailed Beast Chakra, this kind of supermodel character who can throw nuclear bombs (tailed beast jade) and catch nuclear bombs (wooden figures) joins the main storyline of Detective Conan. It really follows the plot. What should the winery do? When the case comes up, it will spoil the story and influence the murderer. There is no initiative to do anything. It's boring.

The writing is terrible. Don't write again.

If there is a clone that you don't like to see, please leave immediately. If the clone has its own thoughts, personality and characteristics, I think it is no different from a stranger.

Before 300 chapters, you can read more than 300 chapters and haven't finished it yet.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Wasn't described as an invincible novel. But for me personally it is a high-quality book. Mainly relying on peer support, there are too many articles that abuse the main character and challenge the author. It is not easy to come across a normal and enjoyable article, but it is indeed too bland. I feel that the writing style is a bit poor, because I read novels at a glance and ten lines at a time. According to my reading method, the reading is very smooth. I think the writing style is good. It is a bit uncomfortable to read. If you need to read carefully word for word, I think the writing style is poor. After all, I can't tell whether the writing is good or bad. I only judge the fluency I feel during the reading process. My personal pet peeve is the characters who like to eat cakes, desserts and snacks, because in real life I really can't swallow a bite. Watching the protagonist eat them makes me feel tired. The taste of this book is right for me. I like novels where the protagonist Wuwei is having fun in the world of Ke Xue. After all, Ke Xue is full of explosions, guns, and poisons. Gin also shoots with armed helicopters from time to time, and builds a submarine at every turn. If the protagonist travels through the world of Kexue and doesn't cheat, he may be gone one day. There will be shipwrecks, explosions, and plane crashes. There is always something suitable for you.

It doesn't mean anything, so there is no difference between having extraordinary power and not having it.