Taoist Priests in the Age of the End of Dharma

After reading Chapter 15, I feel average. There are some problems with wording and sentence making. It looks a bit strange. The world view system and setting seem to be okay, but the plot twist is indeed a bit stiff, and the handover dialogue between many characters is also like this, which is very strange. There are also a lot of plots where the villain is looking for trouble, and then pretends to be a slap in the face. There are already two in Chapter 15.

Many authors like to drive at the beginning, or hint in the introduction to attract LSP, which is essentially a scam to kill pigs.

I don't even need to read this book. It was put on the shelf too early. Why is it too early to write a book? Because the results are not good, I started to put the book on the shelf to promote the book. Good book readers will try to have as many free chapters as possible to accumulate popularity, monthly tickets, recommendation tickets, etc. It also allows the story to unfold, attracting readers, leaving some explosive points, and there is a lot of foreshadowing. You, a newcomer, dare to put it on the shelves directly. You can't even read the free chapters to tell whether they are good or bad, so who can order it?

I feel like everyone in this book, including the protagonist, is a fool

The shelf life of canned yellow peaches is 15 months. The coke should be consumed within 24 hours after opening. The hickey will disappear in about a week. It takes two people together for three months to pass the running-in period. It seems that everything has an expiration date. So boring. I still like everything that has no rules. For example, another chapter is suddenly updated.

Has the author ever been a sidekick? He writes blindly and takes it for granted. How can a sidekick not be a witch?

I've read a few chapters and it feels pretty good. I hope this book will be longer.

It's probably the author's first time writing a book. The plot is there, but the writing style is a bit stiff. However, this is a common problem among many first-time writers. The more you write, the smoother it will become. Come on.

How to say? The description is not enough to bring the situation into context, but everything that should be included is there. It is only superficial to say that it is like writing an essay. You can go and read the latest work of the author of "The Immortal Family", which is flesh-and-blood and exciting enough. They are all similar themes, and the author should think about how to find his own way - writing style.

The author's character design of the villains and their conflicts with the protagonists are clearly flamboyant and mindless. It's really uncomfortable to watch. In order to kill them, they tried their best to give people buffs and add negative information, as if there are no normal people in this world except the protagonists.

Pu Songling wrote about Taoist priests with two meanings. One is that there are many messy cultivation methods, and the other is a criticism of following heretical ways. To persuade people to do good, it is better to follow the main road. After all, Taoism is the main road for people, and they are called Taoist priests. If this is a weird and scary folklore theme for you Novels about heretics should be very attractive, because the Tao is too mysterious and mystical, and their cultivation methods are completely inconsistent with the behavioral philosophy and the subject matter. If it is really about the monks practicing Taoism and cultivating their minds, then it can only be said that none of the heretics can really use seal script... It depends on what you write in the future.

The writing is capable, but the characters and settings are not good enough. The current plot is very cliché, still the same as the little green bottle, and it does not match the overall weird atmosphere of cultivating immortals. It can be seen that I want to make the other supporting characters smarter, but the final presentation effect is like having only half a brain, sometimes stupid and sometimes smart.

The new book has set sail. If readers are interested, please read it. It is very important to follow the data and it is related to the subsequent development of this book. Thank you, little brother. (*￣3￣)╭♡

This is the first time I've seen a place name written about my hometown, Yongzhou.

Is there any control, threat, or coercion? ! ? ?

It feels like the characters are all fools 😥

Why do we repeatedly arrange for the mentally retarded to target the protagonist? Alas😔

I saw the main character learning things and picking and choosing. The problem is that the main character didn't learn anything. Also, when it comes to cultivating the physical body and saying that it conflicts with martial arts, I don't know where to go. , You can do without the body in the later stages of Ghost Immortal Path, but you can't do it in the early stage. What's more, no matter what they cultivate, no one wants to take away the physical body. Even if he doesn't become an immortal, he still needs a physical body, not to mention ghost immortality.

I find this kind of writing particularly easy to read

A good heretic Taoist priest, why do you feel that the car is going to be written as a record of the creation of the underworld? Don't be too attached to Eastern mythology. Why Xuanjian is so popular is to put aside the inherent thinking. How many old bookworms can be conquered by just one golden elixir fruit position?

I'm burned out, are you burned out?

Burned out

A lot of these novels are bad.

The protagonist of this author just knows how to kill, kill, kill, kill, there is no emotion at all, and there is no human touch at all.

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