Wanjie Demon Master

I look forward to it day and night. I thought you would stop writing books. I suggest you promote it in old books.

? I wonder why my writing has deteriorated so much after I have been writing books in the past few years.

Be careful not to write a group portrait article, a group portrait article will definitely be popular.

Resurrection, my lingoer

Ever since the last novel, it has always been about being happy or unhappy, and the protagonist's abilities are all messed up. How great are the unreasonable and unreasonable abilities of "Being a Teacher" and "Only I'm Normal in the World", where muscles are strength and strength.

Laoyin finally won the Easter match

The writing is so rubbish, the front and back of the text are not fluent. At the beginning, I said that I only have speed and no other abilities, but at the end, I directly used my momentum to attack people and even injured myself. There is also that little gold thing that appears out of nowhere. Pure garbage.

For this reason, I specially subscribed to the unfinished books. You have to work harder. When you write a popular book, send me a fan card.

The Huashan sect uses the Fire Cloud Robe of the Akatsuki organization. Not to mention that there are many more beautiful national costumes than this. Let's just say that for such a famous and upright sect like the Huashan sect, you are basically all black with a little red. You are not a magic sect. You should look decent even if you don't say anything about your clothes. At least you should look decent. A large group of people are wearing this modified version of the Fire Cloud Robe. Are you really not an assassination organization?

It's hard to doubt that this is a book written by an author I used to like. The plot is cliche and boring, and the writing is terrible. Is it a book that has sold out?

What happens? I have read your book for a long time. I was at the peak of my career as a teacher at that time. Why did I get out of hand after the book "Eunuch in the Dream" was halfway through? Xiaotian Dog Escort Agency or something like that, I was blinded for a while, but why are my grades so bad now 🙂

Like the title, the previous Invincible article is still good-looking

At the beginning, the Huashan dungeon really wanted to persuade a group of people to quit. Using the Akatsuki organization's style to dress the Huashan disciples was really full of flaws. By this dungeon, the disciples have grown up to be independent and are gradually getting better. Comments say not to write group portraits. My personal opinion is that it is an outline or main point. The author chooses the lines according to his own preferences. If the details and logic are not good, you can listen to the readers' suggestions for improvement. The main content cannot be changed. No matter how awesome people are, it will be completely different. Just like those who like harems should look for harem stories instead of letting the protagonist with a single heroine and no heroine start a harem.

The old cliché is to start from the beginning, and then the bastard is shocked, and then suppresses it and says that it will be weak after using it. Are you still in 2010? Repeatedly pull the protagonist's strength and weakness, and then intersperse a lot of explanatory paragraphs. . .

Where's your label? ? ? No heroine, all heavens, unlimited flow, easy, invincible Put your tag on it, who can relate to your book without a tag?

After I stepped back and asked my teacher to read the book, normally the subscription will not be too low even if the writing is much different. However, the new book was released very late + there were too many eunuchs, so the account was completely ruined.

There is always a strange feeling in the books written by the author. It feels like the author is possessed by something strange and cannot be understood very well. Either there is no beginning or end, or the author always likes to fill in the holes at the end. Other authors explain too much in the narration of the plot, but this author does not explain the narration at all. People who read it are confused and can't find the pleasure, it is not funny, and it is not satisfying. It just makes people feel uncomfortable watching it, feeling that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon it. It is particularly uncomfortable, and it feels like they are confused and unable to understand.

He's such a lunatic. He stands out just for the sake of being different. He doesn't learn martial arts and doesn't need the talent to copy. He ignores the reader's logic. He doesn't have any of the excitement of the martial arts world. It's just a simple account.

Can I see new books before the year

Storytelling skills are too poor. It just looks like a running account and the mumbling of a lunatic.

When I saw you going directly to Journey to the West to play Three Thousand Worlds, I knew it was broken. I expected to finish the book quickly. I thought I might be writing one or two copies, but I didn't expect it to end in just a few chapters. You are too lazy

What the hell? I turned on the automatic full subscription and waited for it to reach 1 million words before reading, but you ended it now? ! I haven't read a chapter yet? Isn't it true that I have so many chapters in vain? Should I look at this situation now or not? Look, it feels like a waste of time, it's only 700,000 words, and it's obviously less than a half-finished product. Don't look at it. My entire order was wasted. I'm confused.

I came from an old book and wanted to see how the new one was, but as soon as I got it, I saw the ending. That's all I looked at the word count.

The title of the next book, Take Me with You, is written in one sentence.

The Lantern Festival is over, when will the new book be served

Has the author sold his account? It feels like these two books were not written by the same person.

We still need a real world or the main storyline as a buffer, so we might as well slow down the pace a bit.

Judging from the name of this book, the author should have great expectations, but the results are hard to estimate. I would like to summarize for the author. One of the author's strengths is that the protagonist is always as strong as a bug. He maintains justice and kindness towards good people and ordinary people, but towards bad people, he is ruthless and ruthless like a psychopath. You can slap someone in the face at any time, but it's not embarrassing. You pretend to be smoother, which is a bit more fun. However, in this book, first, 111, the apprentice does it for you, which makes it less fun. Moreover, the apprentice's strength is not much better than that of the villain, and he doesn't have your strong point of critical strike. Let's try our best to start the next book directly. The beginning of each world in this book is quite good, but later on, when you become an apprentice and work, it's a bit worse. Secondly, 222, the plug-in is too complicated and confusing, or is it still two sets of plug-ins? Third, 333, when it can be tens of thousands of words, just publicize it at the end of the old book, add labels and other things, concentrate on it, and see if it can be changed. Fourth, 444, it doesn't matter if you add more conflicts in which the villain kicks the iron plate, because your writing is smoother and more natural. Don't be afraid of being clichéd. The key is how you write. You can write well in this aspect. Fifth, the protagonist of the book 555 does not have a strong feeling of mild mental illness, and the feeling of being indifferent to life and death is reduced. The next book can strengthen it.

It's a short film again, and it's the protagonist again.

Remember to make the title longer next time 🙂