Hogwarts: Let Me Deal with Dumbledore?

Kill Dumbledore and tell him that you saw your sister in the other world and said you missed him. Alpheus will kill him unless he dies.

It seems to be fine so far. I can write well in daily life and have good imagination. I haven't fallen into the strange circle of Raven's book. I will temporarily put it under good observation.

Wait, the protagonist's name is Morgan? Got it, it's Red Dead Redemption (🙂)

Receive it, take the lead and end it. Evaluating what I have read so far, it can be seen that the author's writing is a bit weak, but the pace is good and the characters are well created. As for several foreshadowings buried in the plot, such as the snow-capped mountain town in the other world and the smuggling gang mentioned at the beginning, they are gradually revealed after the start of school, and we look forward to the follow-up development. And what's written below, this introduction is just that, it's remarkable. My final evaluation is that writing original works in fan fiction is thankless. If you can really write, don't waste everyone's time reading it. Go and update now. Who can see this?

Dumbledore also had too many expressions 😰 and even shed tears. . I feel like he won't show it in front of people. I'm over a hundred years old, so I won't be so emotional. Don't comment on my personal opinions.

Original heroine? Emmmmmmm respect the blessing, but it's not suitable for me

Rewrite? I think I've read a book about this. But there are no tasks or rewards, it's about entrustments and gifts from friends.

Chapter 3 gives a ridiculous name, talking about sealing demons and cultivating souls. This name is too un-Harry Potter, too oriental fantasy, and too fragmented. Although I am a bit of a layman guiding an expert, I still want to say, give it a new name.

I haven't read one chapter yet. I'll stock up on 200 chapters before reading them. Feed them first and don't send them away

I'll go here for the introduction... Ariana is the Dark Lord 🙂

🙂 It would be great if the male protagonist just kills all the goblins in the future. I feel that there is no need for such a non-human race that always harbors evil intentions to exist.

It's okay so far, except for the first few chapters which are a bit bland.

I saw the posts posted by others before but they were all gone.

Good book, why are there so few people?

There are too many modifying adjectives. It gives people a very strong feeling. The writing style is better to be more natural.

Good guy, you can support yourself by reading books 😅

Will the protagonist meet Lily? Like tell Snape I accept your apology

It's very well written. Why is it a eunuch? It's such a pity.