I Build an Alien Civilization on Another Planet Alone

A god-level protagonist plays with small technology and writes plots day by day. Can he do some physical fighting? Are you in Federal Entertainment every day? Wasted subscriptions and referrals

Why does the protagonist end up in his own identity? This is not behind the scenes, and you can directly consciously descend on the believer. Why not just let others take care of it during normal times, and when you pretend to perform miracles at the end, descend and take over the body yourself? Then add the special effects, wouldn't it be even more powerful? Like the final villain of other novels, God is in the upper world and descends through the bodies of believers. . . Then give experience to the protagonist😂

Corrupt stars, causing them to release information-contaminated spectra.

Have you ever been an outsider? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted.

The description of cognitive corruption is quite good, that is, in terms of gathering civilization, I hope it is used in a weirder way. For example, you can fall down like the color of stars and hit a place, draining the vitality of a large area in concept, causing other elements to become unbalanced, and the remaining land will only grow into completely distorted objects. The Silent Sons can corrode wood and drain it into the most basic wooden units. Otherwise, it would be a bit inefficient to use an ax or something.

Sticking to the final chapter of the Arrival of the Son is too chaotic, too crazy, and too restrained, so it makes people feel disorderly and crazy. I don't have much interest in Crusu. I could keep reading purely because of the author's good plot and writing. However, I originally thought that the protagonist's old god civilization and the federal civilization should be in a state of war or stalemate, but I didn't expect it to be insidious assimilation, distortion and parasitism. It was so smooth. Everything was like a dream of the protagonist, exactly. The protagonist was too invincible, which made me think I was watching a silent drama. There was only darkness that covered the sky, but there was no beam of light that pierced the darkness. There is also distortion, which is too sanitary. I want to see rivers of blood, but I don't want to see a group of disgusting creatures murmuring. It seems that in the protagonist's sight, all creatures are objects that he can use and enslave, but I don't like it. I prefer to give the enemy real death, just like Eve. A bird's-eye view surpasses all human beings, and arrogance is her biggest original sin; another example is the giant company Key of Eternity, which deprives human rights, conducts human experiments, transcends life, and uses genetic medicine to extend lifespan. This may be normal in the interstellar age, but I don't understand. This kind of evil thing should be completely burned with fire, rather than pretending to be another body to continue research and experiment. In short, the protagonist is an evil god, pain is the main theme of this book, slavery and distortion are the main themes of this book. This is too crazy, but if you like the genre, you will probably like to read it.

If the results of the previous book are not good, it will be cut. The main reason is that I really don't know who the audience is But if the book is well written, even if it is not a big hit, it can build a certain fan base, form its own style, and gain a firm foothold The main thing is to get through the early stage. No matter how hard the early stage is, you must write more words to give readers the confidence to subscribe. If it is well written, even if it is just relying on the tap water among readers, the score will never be bad. See Gorgeous Revolver

It is recommended that the author give the special energy a name, but do not use a name like "XX Energy". It is best to name it similar to the "spiritual energy/spiritual power" in the world of cultivating immortals, the "fighting energy" in "Fights Break the Sphere", or the "ether" in some previous science fiction novels, otherwise it will be too cheap to keep calling special energy.

Although the memory has been cleared, my resume will be very rich if I continue like this. PS: No matter how much it goes on, it always feels like "Zhao Ming, the mastermind behind the scenes, is coming here with his evil minions" (heavy fog)

I have been reading for more than 50 chapters. Does the protagonist have other enemies? Cthulhu is really beyond the standard. There must be a stronger enemy, otherwise it will be boring.

Not the kind of Virgin in human skin Good-looking and good-looking Come on, author, give me a small tip and you must keep writing 😭

The writing is very good, it refreshed my understanding of Ke system 😁

When I read the first few chapters, I felt a sense of immediacy. The protagonist will not become like this later, right? After all, the appearance is quite suitable (funny + dog head to save life)

It's nice to watch, but the non-human protagonist is not very easy to write, and the protagonist's personality is very high. As a result, the author's writing power greatly affects the viewing experience. As for the problem that I see people talking about those lolita, that is not a problem at all. The contrast between chaotic and dirty and cute lolita is very sharp, and the two are the same thing, and the contrast is huge. And to be honest, whether these creatures have human form or not does not affect the structure of this article. If so, it can also be used to write conflicts. Generally speaking, the author does not need to worry about those remarks. If the outline is well drawn, if there are no major problems, there is no need to make major changes or make minor repairs.

The pace of the novel so far is very good👍The author has combined the Cthulhu style and civilization development very well. When the protagonist gains a base and begins to explore and develop the universe, the novel is cleverly used to connect the civilization cultivated by the protagonist with the outside civilization so that readers will not feel separated. At the same time, the story in the book also gives people a sense of mystery so that the overall style will not fall off.

If the protagonist represents the mysterious side of the old gods, then the Federation should have developed technology to the extreme. Which of the two is stronger and who is weaker?

I can give you what I wrote

It's pretty good, but it lacks some coolness. They are all silent pollution, lacking the contact, discovery and confrontation of the protagonist's civilization by major forces.

Nice writing, but the plot felt a bit thin

I update, update, update!

😭Isn't the author no longer updating?

Come on, author