Make the Fairy League Great Again

An unknown soldier is still famous all over the world, and his prison work is now

Author, the fire is on you, it depends on whether you dare to start a group🤔

This is not bad, but in the first 20 chapters it seems that the social trend of cultivating immortals is extremely repressive. I have seen some similar ideas. I hope it won't turn into a black slave in the underworld to cultivate immortals. . I don't know if there will be changes, but it feels very difficult. If the whole world is like this, there will be almost no other way to save it except deus ex machina. Although it is indeed true to consider the feudal society and the centralization of power for personal cultivation and longevity. The worldview without exceptions will make people very pessimistic, but I hope there is some progress. But he is a great author, so he should be somewhat sure about what to write next.

You are famous. You were bumped into by that freshman Heshou. You haven't started a group yet.

Not only do the titles of the books conflict, but the introductions also conflict with each other.

Author, the opportunity to write a book is before you. It depends on whether you have the courage.

A nobody, or a world-famous one?

The description is a bit edgy and the writing is messy.

Hit

Whether you are a nobody or become famous all over the world, it depends on you, the author.

The overall plot is under the author's control, but the description of specific details has a strong AI flavor, is detailed and wordy, and contains many unnecessary descriptions.

The title of the book collides 🤭

But your world of cultivating immortals has reached this point, and it has been squeezed to this point. It is too much if you have not even cut your appendix.

It's awkward to watch. On the one hand, the operations of the old coins are in line with my senior character's character of building foundations. On the other hand, after the protagonist shows his potential, he doesn't want to hold on to his thighs, nor does he want to retreat bravely. He is reckless and leaves so many points for others. People look at it, I really think it's strange that this person can survive to chapter 52. In an era when resources have been so tight, and you have no background, anything that stands out is 100% poisoning or contracting to maximize profits, but what about in the book? They were all watching the show, waiting, waiting, waiting, what? Just an observer, right? Send a wave of resources to the protagonist at critical moments.

What did the author do? Someone hit the book

What can a righteous monk call copying? It's borrowing You, the little monk with a sword, are too ignorant I try to borrow from you but you still don't appreciate it That little Wuwu, who only knows how to be angry, is a low-level cultivator You still want to touch me. A powerful man with 100,000 mana If you want me to offer you a gift, don't look at my level It's a pity that the ten thousand year old turtle doesn't play according to the routine With longevity, I, the leader of the immortal sect, is hardened For those who have no reference in the righteous way, there is only one proof of eternity Proof I have realized the Supreme Way, and I have followers who will debate the scriptures for me A group of young devils still want to prevent me from attaining the Tao and becoming an immortal Look at me establishing the Biyang Fairy Gate, but they splashed dirty water on me Look at me using a move to escape from your golden cicada's shell and avoid your sharpness Wait for six Resurrection of a dead body to see what can be done to me The Little Demon Sect is so ridiculous that it is not worth mentioning When I succeed, I will make you wait for the Demon Sect to fall into disgrace again (I take the liberty of recommending my own work on the basis of a treasure, and I am here to worship you. I am sorry to bother you)