Middle-Aged and Looking for a Charge: You Wanted Me to Recharge, So Why Are You Charging for Real?

Sabotaging your brother-in-law's job is tantamount to indirectly harming your own sister. I really can't understand how ruthless the protagonist is. He didn't do anything to harm your interests. If your brother-in-law looks down on you, so be it. Now that you've succeeded, just ignore him. Instead, you ruin your brother-in-law's job. What is your sister supposed to do? What kind of values ​​are these?

The book is already a bit toxic. Do you really need to demonstrate boiling water by hand to those businessmen? Do you really need to beg for that kind of ability? They should be begging you! It's not just a matter of hundreds of thousands; if you could cure these chronic diseases, you'd easily give millions. And then you give another person a 30% referral fee?

Having such superpowers to open a massage parlor seems a bit low-class and tasteless.

The concept is good, but the constant massages and repetitive scenes are uninteresting. The children's storylines are just filler, lacking any real appeal; once you start reading, you can't pick it up again.

I've fantasized about absorbing electrical energy before, and I hope this book is a bit long. It's just that I don't really relate to being a fifty-year-old man, although my son's personality is somewhat like mine.

The author doesn't avoid mentioning sensitive topics; the 30% commission on published chapters is honestly something that will make many people uncomfortable. The protagonist doesn't need this business deal. The two main characters have unique core competencies. 3. This is also the most important point: a 30% agency fee is too high; it's like giving money away to He.

The beginnings were barely watchable, but once it was released, it was all garbage. Don't they understand what it means to be a lone wolf? The protagonist is the one everyone else needs to please, not the one putting on a show like a clown. In the early stages, when there were no resources, it was okay to show some real skills, but now that you have resources, why are you still acting like a clown? Money is enough for the protagonist; they're just obsessed with money.

The author has gone astray. If the protagonist were a young person, the current plot would be fine, given the character's growth. But writing about an old man who already has a granddaughter, even if he's an old man with superpowers, would feel quite incongruous. From the very beginning, the protagonist in the reader's eyes is an old man.

The moment I see the scene of catching a fugitive, I know something bad is going to happen. Isn't it better to just show off casually? I really can't understand it. Even if you just fill in the details with everyday life, even if you become a global internet celebrity or a kung fu master, you could still write hundreds of thousands of words. I just can't understand the author's thought process.

The story concept is okay, but now that everything's paid, you should reduce or eliminate those trivial details and padding. If Zhao Yun recovers and can participate in the competition and win, then you'll be famous, and those massages will become your problem.