Age of Empires: Holy War Ignites the World

The writing is very good, but there is basically no grassroots construction, and there is no grassroots construction of the army. It is nothing more than a stronger aristocratic army. The difficulties of serfs and civilians are seen, but no change can be seen, and there is no foundation. Can an armed sect based on religion really last long? It is not that there are no religious knights in Europe, but they are all out of date.

The writing about the protagonist is a bit green, but the writing about the nobles is as natural as water, which makes people understand what nobles are. If the protagonist can also be written like this, it will be very good. I will praise whether it was written by al or not.

Author, your writing is too explicit and easy to be criticized. A book like this that is overstuffed will not give you a chance to change it and will be criticized directly.

I just added it to the bookshelf in the morning, and before I even had time to read it, I entered the palace at noon. 🥵

What a pity. This book is indeed well written. The ideas are very novel and the writing is also good.

I actually really want to see the protagonist do so many good things for these farmers. I hope it can reflect people's loyalty to the protagonist, such as fighting to the death, and keeping secrets even if a villager is caught and then commits suicide, etc. I feel that if these farmers have been living in darkness and have no strange habits, but the protagonist brings a ray of light and transforms them, they will no longer be able to bear the darkness. I hope to see what the farmers will look like after they have been transformed.

Although it is written by AI, it is already well written. When I read a book before and reached seven or eight hundred chapters, I felt like my brain was split in two. There is no such symptom, but there are some signs. Why can't we add a dividing line? means that the previous chapters are not relevant, otherwise the novel will be too confusing to read.

The writing is in line with my taste, but some things in the Age of Empires are a bit confusing to explain. It's not a bad thing to write more so that more people can understand. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Only free citizens pay taxes, right? Why should serfs pay taxes if their bodies don't even belong to them?

Many authors write these because they are too worried and want to force the protagonist to write more. But in fact, the pace of the novel must be fast. If the protagonist is suppressed, it will appear that the protagonist is mentally retarded, which means that even logical readers will run away. It is better to write at a fast pace, even if there are not many words, it will still be a well-finished masterpiece.

Nice looking, waiting for your update. Dude

I feel that these two are more appropriate, more like Shinra

I regretted it a bit after watching it. I should have watched it more. I didn't watch enough. Please update more soon.

There is too much content about religion and descriptions of suffering, and the mixture can be said to change your appetite. It is a bit overwhelming to keep describing and describing 🙂 It makes me feel that you are exaggerating the word count.

If it doesn't work, it's okay to just continue writing. No need to be a eunuch!

In the early stage, I feel that the population can be completely robbed. As long as the rear is collected well, the front will be liberated.

This novel is so well written. Kudos to the author, Persian Cat. I also recommend a novel to everyone, "A Military Household in Ansai at the End of the Ming Dynasty". Friends who are short of books can take a look. The author is also writing it very carefully.

The whole book is acceptable so far, and I look forward to the follow-up

I'm all ready to vote monthly, why don't you do this for me 😡

There is a folder on my buddy's bookshelf called Fattened and Slaughtered, Come on.

I saw in the introduction that a few chapters were pretty good, but when I took out the table of contents I realized something was wrong. There is no need for the author to give up directly. If you feel that you can't control it, you can really slow it down and restart it later. There are not many articles in the Age of Empire that are not particularly awkward, and the explanation of the sect/taiping is also reasonable. At the same time, the stereotype of a certain religion has gradually weakened this year, and curiosity has increased. It has great potential. The best thing to write is to change the skin of history (unpopular but not particularly unpopular) and add something of your own After reading four or five chapters, I now have a few: Travelers Goldfinger Age of Empires 4+ Middle Ages (look at the comments section and it seems slightly magical) Peasant War Taiping Rebellion/Religious War With Peasant War (you can refer to the Hussite War + German Peasant War, the skin change is not easy for everyone to see, it is logical, and it is qualified Materials are easy to obtain) as the skeleton, and the variables you bring can be mixed with the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom as the skin (mainly using memes to attract readers, and at the same time giving Goldfinger a realistic explanation), filling in the thoughts of the time traveler (the author, or the East Asian Agrarian Revolutionary War mentioned in the TJ announcement) as the bones, and Goldfinger as the engine. Sects are not easy to write about. You can read some early apostles under the skin of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom and match the religious reform (liberation theology is too premature. If you really want to produce it, you have to expand the golden finger. The contradictions caused by such a big step can also be written a lot). Use AI to generate some theological translation texts The last key is to think of an "end" That's enough. I would like to write about a horseman, an Irish/original old Western medicine man, and a peaceful man. I tried to write a chapter, but I don't usually write (recording documents do not count). My writing is a disaster, and it is far worse than the author showed.