Evil God, Witch, the Empire on Which the Sun Never Sets

The author has ideas, but not enough writing power. The characters are well drawn, but the group portraits don't look like group portraits. Like the farming nanny article? Vader's motivations are driven by the macro narrative. What about conflict? What about contradictions? If you think too much, it will come true. The flavor of semi-invincible writing is there.

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Have you ever been an emperor? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted Come on, I will give you this golden throne. You can sit on it for two days before writing.

The protagonist is a little bit confused. If I had to describe him in one sentence, it would be "birth within birth". 🙂🙂🙂 His character is very similar to Yagami Yue and Kami. He often suppresses laughter and his innocent expression is deceiving. He is really born. 😰😰😰 The heroine was already in such a miserable state and yet he still lied to her and even pushed her into despair before rescuing her. But I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, it's really crazy! 😡😡😡 Also, I hope the protagonist can hold back his laughter in the end.

Honor in violence Aim to conquer Dedicate treachery to the Emperor Bring despair to the people Killing is my life Falling is my destiny Failure is my fear Oath to the evil god is my oath We will bring destruction to the world We create darkness in the light

A very familiar set of procedures. It's on the shelves. Two updates. One update. Intermittent updates. Leave a comment. Cut the book.

Although many adoptive fathers voted for me, most of the comments were complimentary. But I'm sorry to say that so far, the results of this book are very ugly. No follow-up Many adoptive fathers, Kuang Kuang voted for me a lot, and then started raising Now the collection and recovery ratio is 1/10 Such data can generally be summarized in two words - electronic waste Of course This is also possible In fact, what I wrote is just a pile of rubbish. However, all the adoptive fathers are so enthusiastic that I have the illusion that my writing is not bad As an author, I will also feel happy when I see the praises from readers Pretending not to care, in fact, I can be happy all day long behind my back Seeing the increase in the number of votes, I can no longer suppress my smile, but I still have to sell poorly among the authors. This is the little happiness of being an author. Does this small amount of happiness all depend on my own passionate speculation? How is the writing done? Each reader has his or her own opinion Can't force it Anyway, everyone can comment As for this book, it is now on the verge of life and death Today's recommended resources have been idle Finally, I will struggle again, ask for a follow-up reading, and change the title of the book Let's see if there is any improvement Of course, eunuchs cannot be eunuchs, and this book will be finished. If your grades are very poor, you may rewrite your next book as a nonsensical essay. The babble makes everyone laugh.

The three golden chapters, the character creation is very good But the logic behind it makes me crazy🧓📱 1. Witch setting: The previous setting is that 'a witch needs to have a strong soul and be chosen by a mythical creature from the spiritual world to give her strength when she is desperate/near-death', but Elideth was easily 'made' into a witch by the protagonist just by 'struggle for justice'. In a worldview where there is the Chosen God (who controls a country) and industrialization, if witches can be 'created', why is the sense of transcendent existence in the imperial capital of Lordan so thin? The other Chosen should have more witches, but they and their influence are almost invisible in the environment the protagonist is in (the worst area of ​​the Imperial City). 2． Lack of extraordinary supervision in the imperial capital: The protagonist is resurrected and takes in the first adopted daughter of a witch (she was shot and dumped). As the core of the empire, Lordan has no effective mechanism (such as a 'liquidation bureau', extraordinary detection tools, and regular tracing procedures) to respond to, monitor or pursue such an obvious extraordinary event? This seems like the imperial capital's ruling power and security system are too rubbish 3. The logic of the character's behavior does not match his identity: In the plot of the acquisition of a factory, the boss, who has been a local power for many years, should be well versed in the local power network, but he does not even recognize the new police chief, and even mistakes the protagonist's adopted daughter as the 'heir of an old family'. What is the information sensitivity and ability to recognize people that a 'local snake' should have? It seems that he is deliberately lowering his intelligence to serve the protagonist. 4． The protagonist's image has some clown potential: he is too high-profile, Xuan Ding'er's wallet, status is almost meaningless, he is not the only one chosen by God, there are many witches, and he is currently a young police chief who is in danger. He can't hold up the momentum of his second line, so he can only pretend to be in front of a few gangsters, a lost girl, and a rookie police officer 5. The world view is very confusing: the current setting (chosen by God, witch, great power struggle) seems to mainly serve the personal line of the protagonist and the women he trains, but fails to effectively integrate and affect the specific environment in which the protagonist lives (the bottom of the imperial capital). The influence other gods and witches should have on the world is barely reflected in the bottom layer of Lordan Prince🤴Come on, your highness, catch up 🙂, the title and introduction of the book are about tyranny and hegemony, but when you open it, you can see that there are only so-called witches who are naughty. Nurture and hegemony are currently stuck in the mouth. Personally, I hope to downplay the aspect of witch nurturance. I want to see the god-chosen fight for hegemony and start a war. Military is an extension of politics. If the length of the outline of witch nurturance is the main part, I hope to say it in advance 🙂

The author writes well, but I feel like I'm watching a pyramid scheme 🙂

Have you ever raised a witch? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The writing is so good, the three golden chapters are very interesting, and the whole thing has a "let them show their loyalty" flavor. It is worthy of being written by a P Society war criminal. I want to kill the male protagonist. Will the male protagonist change in the future or will he go to the dark side?

As far as the introduction is concerned: Literary youth disease, artificiality

Hiss~ This is my first time watching this, so hold on, everyone's flannel ball-sang

It's well written and has the shadow of our star players with the highest moral sense. NPCs should be grateful and attach all their resources so that these resources can be used more efficiently.

It's all a sexually suggestive description, and it's all a metaphor. It made me vomit after seeing it. I don't care what the girl looks like. She's torn apart.

The plot and character design are pretty good, but the only point I want to complain about is that the characters talk too much at once, and it feels more like performing an opera than a normal conversation.

Admit it, the protagonist is a born political creature. His desire for power cannot be concealed. He knows the flow of interests very well. Perhaps there was morality that once restrained his extraordinaryness. But the pursuit of responsibility, the desire for power, the ultimate development, the love for construction. It has abandoned its own human morality and delved into the weaknesses of human nature He will surely lead his resources to bring mankind to glory just because he is human.

The writing is very good. It looks like someone who has been an emperor. It is exactly the same experience as mine. It is very well written.

🙂 I haven't seen it before, but forget it, call me when you open a new book in the future, remember the harem

To be honest, the title and introduction of the book are not very attractive. If you are not a bookworm, you will most likely not click on it; In terms of content, there is no villain behind the scenes (reality-oriented) classic writing, which inherently lacks direct excitement. However, the imagination, logic, and world view are all online, and the description of details and scenes are of very high quality. The immersive reading gives an immersive feeling, and the overall impression is good for those who like to pursue rigor; The protagonist is rational and can even be said to be He is indifferent, has deep thinking, is decisive in killing, and has no disgusting love brain, which is rare to see; The most important thing is that the depth of thoughts (war criminals) in this book are brilliantly depicted. Books about human (civilization) supremacy are really rare to find! The following are some suggestions for authors: 1. Don't be affected by negative book reviews from readers! You are the author with the pen in your hands! All suggestions are given before you decide! 2. It is recommended to change the partition. This is also a classic problem for new writers. Qidian light novel readers are extremely abstract and describe a mother as a girl. I posted a comment and a lot of people commented on whether I liked it or not. Light novel readers are basically not the core readers of this book. You can ask in the writers group which one is suitable for war criminals () 3. If you have time, the introduction can be shortened. This kind of long introduction is very domineering. If there is not much actual effective information, it will only make readers disgusted; the title of the book only reflects the elements rather than the key highlights, which is not attractive 4. Your daily update volume is sufficient. If there is no activity, keep the update volume and quality. At least the existing readers will not be lost. If you have time, you can save the manuscript and adjust the outline/details, such as adding appropriate conflict plots (to increase attraction, other methods are also available

The author writes very well. Is it an alien demon or an old eunuch?

Justice exists It is limited by environment and limited by education. Restricted by the country and other conditions, we can form a cognitive environment for peaceful survival We can understand darkness and understand what is said in the book But we cannot abandon the existence of circles, and circles exist in our hearts Justice exists, I always believe, Killing people does not bring anything back. There must be positive education, positive sports, and positive music, so that children can receive education from an early age, thus forming such a logical closed loop. There must also be people like the Philosopher King. It is too difficult, too difficult, so this is just an ideal, but you cannot deny that justice exists.

Ah, author, you really failed, the book just died, woo woo woo

Who can help me make up for the missing piece of P club?😭😭😭

The book is pretty good. When will I open the next one?

The next one is better😭