Hunter: Fluctuation, Rising Dragon, Super Kill

The second story behind it is really not good. It is separated from the main story of Hunter, and it always feels weird.

The writing from chapter 20 onwards is like shit. Just skip this Japanese gangster plot.

After reading the first five chapters, I found some problems: 1. Long said that the flow rate of space inside is 0.5 Times that of the outside. After reading the article, the protagonist trained inside for a longer time than the hospital outside. You should have done it the other way around. If you want the protagonist to have time to accelerate the speed of care, the speed of time in the space should be faster than outside. 2. Yeluzi doesn't know terms such as "entang", "train", "fa", etc. They have no one to teach them and they can only develop their thoughts based on their own understanding. It is impossible for a few young people who have been "baptized" to become mentally disabled to have the knowledge of these thoughts.

I feel like the author doesn't know much about hunters at all, and he also knows a little about nian. Once he understands it, he will probably write a book.

This author has been tamed by the rules of the website (or the book itself wants to subtly instill something into the readers). It is not recommended for any bloody men to read it.

Can you start writing a book without even understanding the worldview and background?

It's as smelly and long as an old lady's foot wraps. There aren't even many people with telekinesis abilities.

I read four chapters and it was so poorly written. The original owner was beaten to death by Beidoo. The protagonist who came back from time-travel used a plug-in to improve his strength and instead of seeking revenge from Beido, he accepted the challenge of Shadasuo first. I didn't read the rest. I don't know whether the plot arranged by the author is whether the protagonist defeats Dasuo in the ring and exposes his strength to alert Beido, or he pretends to be weak and hides his own strength. No matter how it is written, it is sb.

The protagonist's personality is not interesting, his reading ability is not interesting, and the plot is boring

There's a reason why my grades are so bad. It's purely for my own entertainment. There's a high chance that I'll be a bad eunuch.

I don't mind writing original plots, but what you're writing is a bit slow. Can you make some more exciting battle plots?

There are some ideas, but the learning plot is not exciting, the training plot is not exciting, and the fighting plot is not exciting, it is too peaceful.

Author, you may have miscalculated the time flow rate. Please correct it quickly.

I think the plot is very good. The original plot of Hunter Hunter is very suitable for inserting into the plot as long as it is good, unlike other comics. The main theme line is very short and there are few elements, making it difficult to insert other plots. However, the author needs to carefully study the Hunter Hunter comics and the elements in the comics that are related to reality. It is recommended that the author look up the world view of the full-time hunter. There are many people making related content on Zhihu or Bilibili.

It's still quite interesting. It would be better if the plot is polished. By the way, is there only the wave style in martial arts? It will be interesting to see styles like Vega appear in the future. Mental power is quite versatile. Knowing it is equivalent to having a life-saving card. Rashid's whirlwind is also very cool.

The protagonist's growth rate is probably the fastest among the fanfictions I've read.

So what is the use of the protagonist's telekinesis ability? Is it simply to explode with momentum and scare the enemy?

After learning the murderous wave punch, kick me. Thank you.

Is this different space a global travel in Street Fighter 6?

Skills such as the Wave Fist should be part of the release system. If you strengthen the system and learn other fighting skills, it's okay. But will learning release be a bit...

Except for the back of Sky Arena, it's just a running account.

It's really good. When will it be released?

An original plot about the Kingdom of Wano is not as good as giving the protagonist the ability to travel across the world. The advantage of the fanfic is that readers are familiar with most of the plot and characters, and the reading is smooth. The Purple Pig book is well written, but I have not read the subsequent Dark Continent chapters.

In fact, the plot of the Wano gangsters can be written as the plot of the Yokexin City gangsters. The collision with the Phantom Troupe will be very exciting. There is no sense of expectation at all in this way.

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It should be a pitfall to see the baptism of Sky Arena in other hunter works. Yun Gu taught Xiaojie and the three of them before they reached the 200th floor. I looked at the competitive players in the plot version and found that they were all rotten fish and shrimps, but they were mentally abnormal and took the competition too seriously.