The Celestial Court Office

When I first read it, I thought the language style was quite interesting, and it felt like it was telling a new myth. But as I read it, I felt that the storyline developed too slowly. I saved dozens of chapters and read it, but there was no big change. It was a bit like daily life but not very interesting. I feel that the author wanted to write a group portrait, and he should have written a short biography of each character. He wanted to tell each person slowly through short stories, but the writing power was not enough, and the short stories were scattered here and there. It feels like the following is a routine: an outline event + a bunch of daily conversations. When I write about the Chinese New Year, I feel quite disillusioned when I see a powerful person like a deity working overtime to correct documents. Later, it was arranged that the heroine wanted to pursue a beautiful boss, which felt outrageous. What kind of worker would want to fall in love with the boss? All of a sudden, people no longer have any desire to pursue more. So I basically gave up on it later. I suggest the author not to think about writing so many elements at once in the next book. I feel that the writing style is not bad, so keep up the good work.

I can't do it... It feels like it's anticlimactic, but I don't know what to write next. I can only say that maybe too few people read it and the author didn't want to write about it, right? Cheers for the next one. .

I think the author's words are quite interesting! I hope the author persists! ! ! !

By the way, take a look at my novel, now I write about fighting against the way of heaven, fighting against the will of heaven, and moving forward fearlessly!

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