Ice and Fire: Dragon Shepherd

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How many times did Tai Mo talk about Long Yan? Does the author want to write dozens of them?

Rhaegon Targaryen Visenya Targaryen Aegon Targaryen Rhaonys Targaryen Rehoga Velaryon Hagon of Dragonpit

How should I put it? The protagonist of this book has no charisma and no political wisdom. The starting point of the reincarnation of a demigod is very high, but Naihe can't show off.

Dragons get bigger as they get older. The protagonist's dragon, Sun God, is over 300 years old, while Balerion, the black god of death, is only just over 100 years old. As a result, the protagonist's dragon is just a little longer in length, but its physical strength is not as strong as the Black Death. This is unreasonable when the protagonist's dragon is more than 200 years older than Black Death.

First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler, but not to the earth, but to another fantasy world through ice and fire. Secondly, the protagonist had a very high status in his previous life and had many powerful abilities. However, after time traveling, he was severely cut down and constantly imposed restrictions. For example, the protagonist can transform into a dragon, but this skill is temporarily banned. It's no problem to control the strength, and it's no problem to prevent the collapse of combat power. But this way of writing is a bit difficult to comment on. First, I point out that the protagonist has many awesome abilities at once, and then explain one by one that they cannot be used. Some can be used, but they come at various costs. Pull and pull, and a long length is thrown out like a foot wrap. Finally, the author likes to write long natural paragraphs. It's not that I can't, but when I read it on my mobile phone, the whole page is just one natural paragraph, which looks very tiring. So - different people have different opinions.

The protagonist is not willing to accept the inheritance, and the three golden chapters at the beginning are so drunk that the follow-up is wasted.

The first chapter was written inexplicably, and the second chapter suddenly changed the style of writing to a comic style, which is torn from the previous article. Other authors have introduced some jokes or something to achieve a funny style of writing, but this article directly uses some brainless tone and a protagonist who is like a fool to achieve something that is funny after reading it. Secondly, I think it is more appropriate for the author to bring these elements of dragon gods and demigods into Dungeons and Dragons, rather than forcibly upgrading the low-demon world of Song of Ice and Fire. The following is my direct impression after reading the first three chapters. I found that there were no complaints about the early stage in the comment area. I suspected that the author deleted the comments. The general environment of Qidian is that if the writing is good, it will be praised, but if the writing is vicious, the comment area will be completely unreadable.

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This style was considered good in a fantasy novel 20 years ago, but now in 2025 it can only be said to be a bit too pretentious.

Abstract, full of literary youth problems, is the protagonist a time traveler?

The biggest failure of the previous book was the dragons that became more and more human-like in the later period. Why are there more and more dragons written here? Does the author really not reflect on his own writing problems? The problem with your last book was not that it was too dry at all. When you wrote Dragonzel, you were high-spirited and ambitious. At that time, the whole article was charming. Those childish family dramas and pet-like dragons in the back were really a failure. Dragons are dragons. Dragons in Game of Thrones are savage and violent. They are bound tyrants. They are attractive because of danger. The rider can communicate with the dragon, but it is not such a childish and deliberate verbal communication. . The last chapter of the last book was because the dragons of the descendants communicated like the kittens and puppies in the female videos. They were not at all like they were at the beginning.

Frequently Asked Questions for Game of Thrones fans 🙋Long paragraphs of introduction and setting popularization, weak plot and strong introduction explanation. If the part that costs money later is still 80% setting introduction and 20% plot, then it is better to go directly to the Game of Thrones setting collection

Don't be abstract about reincarnation. I think it will get more readers. And there won't be any bad reviews, right? Has it been deleted?

I suggest the author use AI more to learn how to give nicknames. The nicknames in the introduction are worse than those of AI... To be honest, I never thought about nicknames like that when I was in middle school.

Great author, you have written about Elongopterus, and there are two subspecies of large individuals among the four types of Elongopterus. The adult body of Striped Elongopterus is ten meters long, and the Swamp Elongopterus is larger and bulkier, and both can carry people for flight. Let the protagonist go to the south to get two nests of dragon eggs from two kinds of dragons and let the dragon species tame them. Let the protagonist's eldest brother support two families to conquer Westeros. In the later period, the Dragon family had internal political infighting. The vassals of the two families fought against each other and the blood flowed. Let those lords see what it means for gods to fight and mortals to suffer, just like the Bracken and Blackwood families 😍

Both books are the same as having the modifier turned on, and the subsequent plots really test your writing skills.

I think the biggest problem with Martin's Blood and Fire is that Martin's accusations against Dorne were too serious. A medieval country actually broke out with the resistance of a nation-state.

Known world map, Westeros continent and spheres of influence, Essos continent free trade city-state, Slaver's Bay, Bone Mountains, Yidi, Sothoros continent, Summer Islands

The most famous dragon in Western novels is the dragon Smaug. Can Smaug crush the dragon in Game of Thrones?

Westeros HD Map

Describing religion in a large amount of space, I don't know what is good about this religion 😅😅😅

After all, the protagonist Lei Geng was a demigod in his previous life, conquering the world. Why do you feel that you are very mentally retarded after reincarnation? I'm trying to be pretentious when I give you strength... And you don't understand many things at all... Were you doing nothing in your last life? It seems that there are fewer people being beaten by human beings.

The first half is generally good, the second half is good, and the personalities of several dragons are revealed.

There are too many psychological descriptions, too many dialogues, and too many detailed descriptions. The locations and characters that originally appeared in the original work are repeatedly described. The constant use of square brackets to emphasize seems awkward and strange. It emphasizes that the protagonist is very strong but acts too carefully and looks awkward. The dragons are well written, and the protagonist has good mysterious abilities.

I feel that this book is not as good as the first one. The timeline is so slow that it seems like it is not moving. The setting of the protagonist also seems to me to be non-existent. It is either the Church of the Seven Gods or the Church of the Seven Gods. It is boring.

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Is there a map of the protagonist's territory

It's okay, I'd like to ask if there's a single female protagonist and multiple female protagonists?