Versatile Mage: Touch a Corpse and Become a God!

The whole fucking heart describes fucking chicken feathers and eating them

Shen Nong is already poisoned. Most of the chapter is full of psychological descriptions. It is still like the original work. How about changing the name and writing an analysis article?

1. It's very eye-catching to see the author's small addition to the world view of the full-time mage in the first chapter, and the relationship between the grassroots resource family is also explained very appropriately 2. When I read the second chapter, I started to think deeply about the author. Although the description of the awakening of the magic system is cumbersome, it still has a good endorsement for the protagonist's golden finger 3. When I read the third chapter, I began to feel that something was wrong. Where is the plot? Even if it's your protagonist's experiment, what about your plot? Just leave it alone 4. When I saw the fourth chapter, I was still holding back When I saw the fifth chapter, I was really speechless. The author has been immersed in his own art and can't extricate himself. Seven days to release magic, from scratch, seven days to become a super human, the basic magic can directly destroy the house. I can't imagine his later period. Combat power, how bad he can be Really, what I mean from the bottom of my heart is that what the author wants to say is that you are actually more suitable to think about it and recommend some setting supplements for the entire community of full-time mage colleagues. You are really not suitable for writing novels. When I saw Seven Days to Release Magic, I knew that the combat power here has begun to collapse. There is no need to read it

The recent food appearance is too ugly. I don't want to write a list of pure water's strength. Just say it.

One chapter is full of strength summary. The strength summary can be published in a single chapter. Besides water, it is still water.

He's dead, even if Shen Nong comes, he won't be able to bear it!

It is estimated that 99% of people can't stand it 😅

This is not writing an essay, this is fan fiction

It's too watery. It takes three or four chapters to awaken the magic.

"To sum up", "in general", "back to the subject", what about your argumentative essay? Two or three consecutive chapters are like this and the main plot cannot be advanced at all. Wouldn't it be better to leave these settings in this chapter? The whole law is originally a very niche topic, and basically no passers-by will see it. You explained so much, but you have discouraged a large number of people.

As mentioned above, there is a lot of nonsense. At least 1/3 of the entire article is describing the same thing, and at the same time there is too much inner monologue.

The author is really good at water 😥

I feel like what I said is very wordy, like a novice writing

Many descriptions are unnecessary and too much nonsense.

After watching the first few photos, I felt good about it, and after watching a few more, it's time to watch Hong Wen 😅

You are not suitable to write a full-time mage

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It feels like one book can be divided into two. I only read six chapters, and I felt like I had to repeat every point several times.

I can't stand it anymore, there's something wrong with fan fiction these days. He always overturns the settings of novels and develops particularly awesome abilities. You just have to be good at the undead system, or you can use ancient magic. You have to have a very awesome Holy Spirit system. The previous settings were really good. Trash is dead now. Bullshit is not

Really verbose, repeating one sentence several times, really fluent

There are always some repeated words, and the smoothness of the sentences is worrying.