Douluo: Martial Spirit Black Dragon, I Am the Lord of the Gods

The writing is okay, but if you keep abusing it like this, you will be trash.

It's called "Douluo Succubus, watch how I abuse myself and find someone to be my mother"

The advantage is that the protagonist is relatively strong, but the disadvantage is that the protagonist can't even control his own Gou Ba martial arts at present, which is a bit uncomfortable. When will he go to Yuanyang Guo to eat that big fairy grass, and then control those stinky people ruthlessly?

The character of the protagonist, Sima, makes people angry just by looking at it. Aren't they often made by themselves? He still looks like he is being persecuted, which is disgusting. He still looks like this after hundreds of chapters. It's hard to imagine that this person looks like a time traveler. He might as well write about aborigines.

，， Now that my martial soul has been damaged again, I won't encounter someone of the same level as me in the future and it will take a long time to win. But the writing is quite reasonable. I hope that the later writing will be more domineering and not overpowering.

How to say it? I was very confused while reading this book, and it felt like it was hard to explain in one sentence. The author repeatedly emphasized the character of the protagonist, and then the emotional lines were very messy. Starting from Bibi Dong and Tang Yuehua, I couldn't stand it anymore. It felt like you planted a flower and it grew into a dog's tail grass. . . . In fact, if the author doesn't know how to write emotional lines, he can write less, more action scenes, more plots, and more laughs. Instead of looking very depressing, with messy emotional lines, and not many laughs, the protagonist gives me a feeling of being both real and independent. . . . 😭, when the author first opened the book, I really liked reading it, but now. . . .

In fact, if you want to be happy, you can always be happy. There is no need to give him such a dark history! The author has made Hei Longtian's character lower and lower!

Is the author male or female? Why does it feel like it's like a female video, it's grinding and the plot advances too slowly.

Don't spend money to see it. It's not worth it. Look outside.

How to say it? It's almost time to quit. The character you started with thought there was no heroine or only one. There are 9 of them that you are showing right now. I haven't been to the Northern Land yet, there are two there. Who knows if you can go to Poseidon Temple? That's one too. You might as well die as a woman.

If other people like the protagonist just because of their sympathy, then I really have nothing to say, it sucks

It's boring that such an awesome character still needs to completely follow the original plot line and even rob the original resources.

If you don't know how to write emotional lines, you can write less or not write them at all. More dynamic plots now belong to the rigid main line of advancement.

Come on, author! It's been a long time since I've seen a quality fanfic, and a single female protagonist would be better.

The beginning was good, the mid-term was okay, and the late-stage was complete.

You can read it before Chapter 200, but it is recommended not to read it in the future.

The protagonist of this incredible novel only got his first soul ring in chapter 25 and then his soul power reached level 3. More than 60 chapters later, he is still at level 13 and has not moved. The protagonist is being kicked around like a ball, and he is bitter and resentful as a troll.

Black Dragon Dominance

You're kidding me. It's really a harem story, but it's still very interesting.

I read this novel as soon as it was written, and it was a high-quality second-generation fan novel that I saw. The early writing was okay, but I don't know what happened later, but I could still read it. I highly recommend this fanfic😁🙂🙂🙂

Speechless, what is there about Huo Wu and that water that you can kneel down and lick?

How did this protagonist become a superhero?

Wait a minute, wait a minute, why does it feel like there's a little water?

The author gave you two monthly passes at the beginning of November, and will give them to you every time there is a monthly pass, so can you follow me more and don't be fooled 😢😢😢

I heard it somewhere else, but it was much slower there, so I came over to watch it and ordered it all. It's so good and I love watching it😋

The author's writing is too bad. You can write a whole page if you're not writing a drama about distrust. It feels like a female channel, with too much nonsense. Not worth watching.

I wish everyone a happy New Year. I read this book last summer. I highly recommend it. The early stage is much better than the average fan novel. The middle stage is okay, but the later stage is not so good, but it is still very interesting. To sum up, I highly recommend this fan novel.

To put it bluntly, you will lose money if you spend money.

Hey guys, how come no one posts anymore? I haven't watched it since Poseidon Island. What happened next?

In the harem, almost all the female characters who interacted with the male protagonist in the later period became gods. It was almost because Liu Erlong became a god and did not take her. After all, characters like Bai Chenxiang who were only mentioned in a few words became priests.