People Are in Douluo, Martial Spirit Aatrox

I went, and when I saw that the heroine was Aatrox, my cerebellum shrank.

Notice! I came here to see Sword Demon, not those three love brains.

Just reading the introduction, it's incredible. Is Mount Targon so easy to climb? Are you a sports student who can climb Mount Targon while being chased by a sword demon?

Qian Renxue's use of sacred fire to hit the protagonist is a poisonous point in itself. Douluo hunts for soul rings and has to kill them himself. Qian Renxue must be familiar with the power of sacred fire. For the righteous angel clan, there must be restrictions on the use of sacred fire by non-evil soul masters. Looking at the writing, who is the protagonist who can make people mad and use sacred fire with just a few words? This is a means of killing. It is very unreasonable to be used so casually. The moment Qian Renxue used the sacred fire, the nature of the matter was different. It was like a person shooting at you with a gun. Whether she did it intentionally or not was one thing. Whether you had the ability to survive was another thing. After it was clear that the other party threatened your life, this was revenge. He who thinks it is a misunderstanding and laughs it off is a saint. Douluo Quality Ceiling Qiandaoliu I don't even want to talk about Qian Renxue's use of sacred fire. Bibi Dong has been his apprentice for decades and was locked up in a secret room for ten months. Isn't he still unfamiliar with this method? Whether the author has read the original work or not, Bibi Dong's perception of Qian Renxue changed towards the end. During this period, her feelings for Qian Renxue were inherited from her father's feelings, and she wanted to eat his flesh and drink his blood. When it comes to attacking the protagonist who is in a swing position, Qian Renxue cannot be attacked because Qian Daoliu is around, but stopping it is not a matter of words. How can Qian Renxue refuse without Qian Daoliu's signal? However, her inaction and even smiling and standing aside are really brainless. It's just a poisonous point in itself, but it has to be brought out repeatedly. If the author just randomly pushes the plot without thinking, it would be better to shorten the plot by a few thousand words and organize the plot.

It's not a joke. The title of the book is Aatrox, and then there is no ink. It can't be justified. Douluo fans can say that the writing is bad. If you want to make it, highlight Aatrox, otherwise it will be useless.

If you want to write a pretentious book, just change the title of the book. Sword Demon becomes your only attractive point, and then you click on it and you are all pretentious. It is like wbg without TS. Without Sword Demon, wouldn't it be just a cool book? Who else is disgusting by writing the sword demon as an idiot?

It's really like shit. The first dozen chapters are well written, but the further they go, the worse they get. They keep exporting their own values, as if they can't write anything else. What the hell, you didn't ask a studio to write the beginning, did you?

Dude, am I paying to see you export your own values?

I can't say, the elements of Sword Demon are not reflected at all. I keep saying that it is essentially the same as Sword Demon. I can only say that you are just disgusting readers.

Well! Poison! The author keeps exporting his mindless values ​​of "none of my business"! How disgusting! It's always bullshit, bullshit, bullshit, bullshit! It's so disgusting, why don't you change the word? Nothing but shit?

Maybe it's a studio novel, it's not very popular, it doesn't have many words, it's only been published in 22 chapters, it's rare.

Ah, no, Chapter 22 is on the shelves, Chapter 24 has 58,000 words, and I can't see anything yet.

I can't resist the poison, and the protagonist's personality is weird. Do this shit and that shit.

After the paid chapters, it was like Shi. Unfortunately, I just subscribed to them all.

. . . . I paid for the subscription in vain, but what follows is the same, the characters are really weird.

Tnnd, poison will be released as soon as payment is made

It's okay to output some values ​​in the front, but it's too much to become a pure stallion in the back.

Where do different world systems collide? Where is Demacia's powerful cultivation method? It's okay to pretend to be a child, but after living for so long, you are still struggling with where and where you are, what kind of disease it is, and you have a fragile soul and need to find a spiritual harbor to rest on? This is the level of martial soul performance, and there is no performance in different worlds?

How do you think that with Bibi Dong's experience, he would accept male disciples? Even if Hu Liena's own brother is not accepted, will she accept someone else?

I can't stand it anymore. It's pretty good at the front, but it's so weird at the back.

Now that you're convinced, can you write a book normally? Half of the chapter you read contains your own values. You are such an old person, do you need to preach? If you feel something, just feel it yourself, and it's okay to pass it on to others, but can you find the right place? The sermons that everyone sitting here has grown up listening to are not much less than the words in this book you wrote. Everyone's time is precious and they should write the plot carefully. It's fun for everyone to watch. The plot is a mess and there are preaching books everywhere. You might as well watch the Spring Festival Gala recording.

Dude, why did I, Aatrox, send it? 😂

It looks pretty in the front, but in the back you just go straight to the stallion, which makes it inexplicable.

The writing is very good. I like it. Please update it soon. Two chapters a day. Send the beggar away 😍

Write, why don't you stop writing? I'm still waiting for you to tell the plot of the later battle. If you haven't passed the early stage, I won't be able to continue writing.

Should the author write a follow-up?