Douluo: Wuhun Tianjing, Opening Vs Qiandaoliu

If you say that more than 20 chapters are on the shelves, it's a feature of QQ reading, I don't care. As long as the writing is good, it's worth spending a little money, but what kind of awesome plot are you writing? It was fine before it was put on the shelves. But after it was put on the shelves, the protagonist was like a clown. He pulled out his hands and talked a lot. Why did he make porridge himself and feed it to the protagonist? The porridge was not ready yet, so what? Contrast cute, right? Those female characters can be omitted if they are not well written, there is no need to embarrass yourself and embarrass the readers.

The theory that Tang San was brought here by the Shura God, I think is just Zhang Wei's boast, Tang San is so strong in Dou Wu, but he still takes Xuantian Kung as a priority. The Tang Sect's martial arts is so strong, how strong must Tang San's original world be? If Shura God can enter this kind of world, how strong must he be? But what is the performance of the other four primitive god kings who are at the same level as Shura? The rhetoric is seriously inconsistent with the actual performance

Nangong Wenya's cuteness ability. Whoever you touch is stupid. A little bit looking forward to it

It's beautiful. I just admire the character of the protagonist. There's a hint of righteousness in it, the plot is so smooth, and the angle of the rant is unique and very powerful. The corpse ring floating on the corpse has never occurred to me. I just sit back and watch the protagonist's actions.

What kind of drama has it been since it was released? 😥 Has someone changed the writing?

Are you purely bored? What did you write after it was released?

So far, it looks pretty good 🙂 As long as you don't get crazy later, it's a good product.

The chapters after the release are all about conversations in the water. Even if I write about the plot of Yuexuan, in one sentence, the writing is very reasonable but it has no use in advancing the plot 😒

You might as well send the old Lufa thief to Douluo to educate these love-minded fools.

More than 20 chapters are on the shelves. I'm going crazy thinking about money.

There are so many Douluo fans, there is at least one Douluo fan in Daodu every day. Each time I have to click one by one without any interest.

If the emotional line cannot be written well, it is recommended not to write it.

It's a good book. Judging from the character of the protagonist, as long as the author doesn't make mistakes, this book should do well 😄

I don't really like the plot that just came out. I think I should blast out that move and hit her to serious injuries. I feel that that is worthy of the power of the Holy Art of Qiankun.

Official certification of Yuanshi Demon: No mercy

I read your book about Sword Demon. You won't mutate into horses later on, right?

Here comes the tiger soul again, with a sword in his left hand and a sword in his right hand, so he can use three swords, three swords and three magical skills.

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not as good as it would be if it were on the shelves.

Dongfangxiong

It's okay, I'm used to it. The main thing I read about your books is that I like to see crazy people and supermodels fighting.

What kind of cow-horse plot is written later? It was written by two people, right?

Author, is the Nether Demon book still updated? It looks good, so don't give it up.

If you really wait 10 years, it won't happen.

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