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[Task: The Girl of Your Dreams]
[Task Details: In Xu Wanqing’s heart, you are the one who got away from her youth. She has watched you quietly for three years, and at last, on the eve of your departure, she gathers the courage to confess her feelings in person. Accept her sincere confession and begin an unforgettable first love that will last a lifetime.]
[Reward Preview: RMB 200,000]
Qin Qing: I refuse.
After being abandoned at the lowest point of his previous life, Qin Qing gives up the reward without hesitation and rejects the campus beauty to her face.
Two hundred thousand? My family isn’t bankrupt yet. Who do you think you are looking down on?
Rejected, the System nearly crashed. Its process was interrupted, triggering an emergency mechanism.
[Punishment Mechanism Activated]
The punishment mechanism appeared without warning, and Qin Qing cursed its shamelessness.
What is this, entrapment?
Have you no shame!
In response to Qin Qing’s abuse, the System said nothing and simply kept punishing him.
[Punishment ruling complete. Execution in progress, ]
[Wage Collector: Having failed the task, you are unworthy of the System’s generous rewards. You can only become a lowly wage collector, scraping together the paltry sums after the decimal point from other people’s wages to make ends meet.]
[PS: This is the System’s severe punishment for failures. Do your best to complete the next task and avoid an even harsher punishment.]
[PS1: Do you feel your self-respect being ruthlessly trampled? This is what happens to failures. Hahaha…]
[PS2: Live like a beggar, surviving on the meager wages you collect.]
Damn it, it’s insulting me! It’s insulting me!
Looking at the extra “collected wages” in his account, Qin Qing suddenly felt that maybe he could live with this insult.
You can’t refuse money just to save face!
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It's pretty boring. The author seems to be trying to write something new, but it's poorly executed. Just because his ex-girlfriend's best friend comforted him when he was dumped in his past life, he's reborn and has to win her back. Then, he also has to write about the ex-girlfriend, but her attitude is so cold and distant. Isn't this kind of ex-girlfriend annoying to even look at?
Xiaoyanzi
Wang Can
Violent driving
I can't relate to the overly literary style (ಡωಡ) It's not enjoyable to read.
The writing is really bad and childish. It sounds like something a middle school student would write.
Is the author under 20? How can their writing be so immature?
You're deliberately making the tasks fail every time, it's a bit too contrived. It was quite novel at first, but it got a little boring later on.
The synopsis seems to criticize Xu, but why is she still the female lead?
After just a few chapters, it's clear this book is doomed; it's another example of a spiritual novel.
The synopsis is ruined. Even if you gain an advantage, the "failure penalty" will inevitably make your book annoying.