King of the Trident: A Game of Thrones Fanfic

The starting point is so low, and the main character is so obsessed with it, and the rhythm is obviously not grasped well. I haven't even finished watching it for free and I don't know what will happen next. Is Shen Nong not there

Known world map, Westeros continent, Westeros continent sphere of influence, Essos continent Free Trade City-State, Essos continent Slaver's Bay, Essos continent Skeleton Mountains, Yidi surroundings, Sothoros continent, Summer Islands,

The protagonist's personal force value must be increased to an inhuman level. Having no force value is too frustrating, especially in the Game of Thrones.

When did Suleiman's personal troops capture the castle?

I only pre-ordered a few chapters, so I can't comment on whether the writing is good or not, but is it really good to violate guest rights and kill people??? Why do some people always mistake betrayal for wisdom? The legend of the "Rat Chef" is most likely true in Westeros! What happened to the Frey family who violated their guest rights in the original novel? What happens to Euron? What happened to the Volantis slavers? What happened to the Immortals of Qarth? Including the horse king who broke the contract and James who broke the oath... In the world of ice and fire, breaking an oath will really lead to being cursed, and there is a god in the sky. Without credibility and family background, can we just rely on the so-called love of the common people to conquer Westeros? Aegon the Conqueror, who has three dragons, must respect the faith and traditions of Westeros and convert to the anointed one. During the Dance of Dragons, neither Daemon nor Rhaenyra would kill anyone during a banquet. It seems that the protagonist is smart and knows how to throw a Hongmen Banquet, right? I'm from Suqian, but I don't know what happened to Xiang Yu?

The protagonist is not an ancient person, but a modern person. In modern times, a small boss can keep several mistresses. If the protagonist has the world, he should marry more women to enjoy himself.

All I can say is that the author himself failed to write it. It looks pretty good in the early stages, and I feel like it's a guaranteed quality product, and I'm hopeful that I'll order it. The last time I saw a Game of Thrones that was this smooth was the Sam version. But the more the author wrote, the more he became obsessed with it. I stopped reading it for a few months, and now I can't pick it up. I can't even read the chapter names. It's 1.2 Million words long. Where did this plot go?

There are such clever politicians in Westeros. Anyone who has read the book will know that they are all noobs and idiots, which is why it is so abrupt. The level of the enemies of the protagonist you wrote has reached the level of ancient Eastern politicians per capita. Are there any wonderful performances in the original work of Black Fish? Besides running away or running away!

To be honest, it is a ten thousand-year tradition of Westeros. A powerful earl like White Harbor Tower would be unreasonable if he wanted to be a king, and a butler who has been born for three centuries cannot win vassals. It's outrageous for a little lord to be the king

The title of your book is really bad, Sir Stinky Castle. Just these four words can make many readers run away. Don't think that the name is not important. If the protagonist's name is Shabi, do you think it will have no impact on reading?