From a Small Overseas Tribe to the Immortal Dynasty of Ten Thousand Realms

The map was upgraded too quickly. Pigfoot was just a little brat with the third level of Qi training, and he got mixed up in the maelstrom of inland and coastal aristocratic families competing for hegemony. His power was like floating on the water, with no development at all.

It's too cheap. Just follow it. At least there must be restrictions. The one in front was fooled and turned back to bite the host. There is no limit to the example. Even if you follow him now, his descendants may not be willing to do so.

Enter the main plot, collect characters and families, including major forces in subsequent maps. Give full play to your imagination and ask for the character's name, personality, skills, etc., Family background, etc. Genuine or villain. The more detailed the better.

The writing is pretty good. There is nothing toxic about it so far. I hope the author will continue to do so.

After reading more than 70 chapters, I feel like the protagonist wants to be Huang Chao

I have read a little bit of all the new family stories I have written so far. This one is pretty good. You can follow it 😎

Let me tell you my own opinions. You can criticize yourself (Personally I think) Your family is too weird. The protagonist is the only monk in the Gu family (there are two monks with foreign surnames), but you still marry into Zhongli's family. It's really weird. It's weird that the head of Zhongli's family fell in love with you at a glance, a monk with a third level of Qi training. But there are more good people in this book. For example, he almost died in the sea and was saved by someone else. The things that were recruited later were generous and things were not dangerous. No one looked down on the protagonist when he went to the Zhongli family. The owner of the house and his uncle did not look down on the protagonist (his uncle should be in the late stage of foundation building). When you enter their house, he will recognize you and not guard you. After more than 60 chapters, the protagonist is still practicing Qi at level 3. No one else in the family has spiritual roots to cultivate. Only the protagonist can do it. You have to find a way to escape from the Zhongli family to return to the topic. And here is another problem. The Zhongli family has been so kind to you. If you can't write it well later, no one will read it. To be honest, I'm not very optimistic about it.

After reading the beginning, I thought it was a group portrait novel like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but judging from the subsequent plot, it should be from Long Aotian. Why should I criticize the family's cloak when writing a novel about personal upgrades? Isn't this a hindrance to the protagonist? What we read about family stories is not to see one person dragging the family, but the succession of generations, the replacement of old and new...

Update quickly, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

After reading the beginning, it was too violent to kill people and silence them at every turn.

It feels like it has nothing to do with the family