Three Punches to Crush the Demon Soul, Young Hero, I Am an Honest Man

Isn't it too harsh to suppress the level? With so many resources, you can upgrade to a small level, and it must not collapse in the future.

No one dares to call Jinyiwei Shaoxia, right? Aren't they all called Chai✌

There are always a few points that I don't like. This book gave me the feeling that the protagonist is the only one who is capable. Indeed, you said that the protagonist has a lot of information, which is no problem, but I can't see the role of other people. In addition, I saw casual attacks on Jin Yiwei. The problem is that Jin Yiwei sent the protagonist in the end, who was in the innate realm. The victory in the end was due to the forbidden book from other sects. Oh, the fight was so fierce. I thought that Jin Yiwei didn't have the strength to overwhelm everything. How could he dare to be an eagle dog? How could he be an eagle dog? Oh, if a subordinate is killed, he will be ranked among the innates. This feels too bad to me. I feel that a Jin Yiwei is not a master. There is also a slight problem with the protagonist's realm. You have reached two minor ranks after you reached chapter 100. You have pressed too hard and cannot see the role of strength. Now I feel that I have not even touched the edge of foundation building in chapter 100. I personally have not looked back. I feel that after foundation building, it will be chapter 150. The promotion is too slow. There is always a feeling of a small person participating in big events. Jin Yiwei is a real talent. Apart from the protagonist, I can't feel Jin Yiwei's ability and strength. And that female character you have appeared in too many times. The villain is called a saint, and the leader is a woman. I met a chamber of commerce boss who was a woman. I went to participate in a poetry meeting and met a princess, who was also a woman. Then there is an empress. I feel a little uncomfortable with you. The rest is okay, at least the writing style is okay, the reading is quite smooth, and the story is well drawn out.

Cultivation resources are a bit like stacking boxes with unlimited resources. I understand that the pressure is too high to be invincible in the same realm and to be able to fight across realms. But writing the later cultivation resources in this way really becomes a paragraph, and then self-cultivation becomes meaningless. You can even remove the setting of being able to practice by yourself and just pile up resources.

Rather than downgrading, it is better not to write about cultivation and weaken the importance of cultivation. Otherwise, it has a retro feel when reading it.

There is too much trash talk, the fewer key points, the more obvious they are.

Reading new books is really important to me! It will take 30 days to be put on the shelves!

I feel a bit speechless. People say that in the Foundation Establishment realm, one can awaken his instinctive powers, but it turns out that the protagonist has not yet awakened in the Asgard. What the hell.

Can see! It's just that there are too many behaviors that reduce the intelligence of supporting characters.

I didn't practice for a day, I just practiced for a while after breaking through and advancing. I felt that I was almost done with it and then I upgraded.

To be honest, writing a male villain who is more powerful than the protagonist, spending a lot of ink on this character, and not being able to speed up the process to solve this character, on the one hand makes people uncomfortable, and on the other hand, the pace is too slow.

In fact, I think the author should change his thinking and align cultivation resources with ordinary people, so that competing for resources can be considered a small goal. Increase the difficulty of promotion and you will have to find the objects needed for promotion. This way, the overall resources will not collapse too quickly, and at the same time, there will be a lot more things to write.

Comment deleted? More than 30 items are too few, right?

Why do you feel that except for the protagonist, everyone else on the Empress side is trash?

This book is no better than that one about a sect full of spies. So I don't know how much money the author put into it, but why is there an anime for that story?

Dude, are we finally going to start cutting female bosses 🙂

Can you make this book free to read? Host, you shouldn't sell stories for money.

When you refresh it, you refresh it when you remember it, but you don't refresh it when you remember it, right? ? Everything is half a minute faster than the other side. Every time here, I wait until almost the end before I remember to refresh.

Don't write a paragraph in several paragraphs. If you really want to divide it into paragraphs, just use one set of double quotes. Don't use one set of double quotes for each paragraph.

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Should the title of this book be changed now?😰