American Comics' Divine Spear Bureau Dispatcher

After reading more than ten chapters, the main character gave me the impression that he is insane.

I felt a little self-conscious after watching a few of them. What happened to the agent having fangs? There is still one last bullet left for me in the army.

It's just a suggestion, not for the sake of trolling, nor is it preaching! Since it's Marvel, watch more Marvel movies, not for the plot, but to "learn their dialogue"! The dialogue in this book can be simplified and refined. The dialogue should be linked to the character. Bureaucrats and agents will not be "talkative"! In addition, Marvel fans must choose a good entry point. The author chose "Spear Expedition Exchange Observation" to SHIELD. This inspiration is very good, but it is not a good starting point. Because as we all know, S. H. I. E. L. D. Is a pot of "chowder" - white (the captain's neutral faction), gray (the profit faction of the bad country), black (the infiltration faction of Hydra), and the confused (the original faction of SHIELD). In this case, the "Spear expats" are destined to be oil "floating on the surface of the soup". They can't even do "things", otherwise they will "blow up the pot"! Because this is S. H. I. E. L. D. In the moldy country, the natural identity sensitivity of "Oriental outsiders", this logic destined that S. H. I. E. L. D. And Avengers are "inconvenient" to contact the protagonists. Finally, the author's writing style is a bit too retro, which will make many readers today feel "unfashionable"!

No, the most basic sense of awe, if it were not written as the protagonist and acted in this style, it would have died long ago.

I still have a little bit of imagination, but I'm really a novice on writing and character design, so practice more...

It's all in big paragraphs, doesn't the author divide it into paragraphs?

What did I see? The author is a dragon turtle, and in the novels he cheats even if he has money and has to carry the money to pay.

The author is really a newcomer. There is not a single sentence in the first chapter. It is all about the background.