A Guide to Traveling Through Serf Struggles

First of all, I must give praise to the author who is still writing western fantasy medieval farming stories in Qidian. After all, this is a difficult road to walk. Then let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is not bad, the depiction of aristocratic life is pretty good, and the control over details is very strong. I can imagine that the chapters related to the palace will have a pretty good reading experience in the future. Then there are the disadvantages. The character portrayal is too thin. The emotional changes of the heroine towards the hero are basically not written at all, and the hero's personal mentality changes are basically not written. You must know that from modern people to serfs, and then to the aristocratic class almost immediately, there is basically no description of any mentality changes. Of course, this may be relatively minor for readers who mainly watch farming. The farming part is basically a disaster, or there is basically no description of farming. As the controller, the male protagonist currently has no real understanding of the territory and the people he controls. Apart from letting the hundreds of indigenous people in the territory see him killing werewolves at the beginning, there is basically no description of establishing prestige. As a farming novel, this is actually quite disastrous. After all, control has always been a necessity for farming. Let's talk about the population structure of the territory. There are currently more than 1,200 people in the territory. About a dozen of them were discovered by the male protagonist himself. There are about 100 people who are residents of the original territory. The rest are "refugees". There is no description of the control of the refugees, which is quite disappointing. And the development is basically in leaps and bounds. Now there are a few hundred people, and then it suddenly increases to 1,000, and then 1,200. To be honest, this is very funny, because before there is land that has been cultivated by the public, absorbing a large number of people is a very abstract thing and cannot be suppressed. Putting aside the pressure, the food loss is very large, and it is basically impossible to be self-sufficient in the first one or two years. However, when the male protagonist's financial income does not provide the amount from other industries, he can still have a surplus purely from farming income (it has not been written yet how much money the businessman earns). I can only say that the details are still insufficient, but it is definitely worth seeing at Xihuan Farming.

The author describes the Duke's only son. On the battlefield, the Duke knew that his son was an auxiliary and weak in combat. The Duke knew that his only son was useless. But if he died, he would have no descendants. In the extraordinary world, the Duke did not send awesome people to protect him, so it was the Duke's fault.

This introduction is very familiar, and so is the previous content.

The master's castle didn't stand up and fire, I'm a little disappointed

What? What does it mean that the master's castle has stood up! ? 😰 (Will this happen?)

Qidian is now writing a Western fantasy. Why are all the goblins set up to kill the goblins? Logically speaking, the previous setting that relies on short reproductive time, large number of births, short maturation time, cunning and cunning to win by quantity, isn't it a good idea?

It was okay at first, but when I wrote about recruiting serfs, I was completely exposed. Good guy, the medieval old farmer came over and exploded the troops directly. It looked like he had played too many games. I didn't plan to watch it seriously, but this one is really bad and moist.

More fun

The protagonist can quickly enter the role of a gangster and take pride in robbing and trafficking people. The protagonist is often the incarnation of the author, which shows that the author is not a thing in reality.

Familiar batch, I also said when I will remove the bookshelf But after reading the comments, I understood the twins

Have you ever been a serf? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

What type of fantasy farming content does everyone like? 1. The protagonist focuses on developing territory infrastructure, land, population, and military strength. 2. The protagonist leads his troops to fight, siege cities and plunder villages, and seize resources. 3. There are many daily details, in line with medieval customs. 4. The protagonist's personal strength is improved. ps: I think many people are struggling with whether to use modern technology to improve the productivity of the Middle Ages. Some people are unwilling to do so, and some hope to do so. There is another question, what kind of farming method should be used? I think some people say that farming should be more detailed, will it slow down the pace too much?

You only charge 50% of the rent. You must be meeting a great sage. In the Middle Ages, charging 70% of the rent was regarded as loving the people like a son.

That's it

Why do you want to deliberately make the protagonist very thin? Obviously the protagonist is also going to the battlefield, and he is not ordinary thin. The enemy's armor is put on the protagonist, which looks funny. Of course, it may be because the protagonist is still young, so when will he become stronger?

Is it a rewrite? I have read a similar book before. The protagonist also has a friend, a monster. The monster can run into the demon world and steal things for the protagonist.

The author should change his name! Columbus, Goblin, Goblin, people who get dizzy after watching too many are annoyed😡

I haven't read it yet, but I want to ask if Grandpa Knight's castle will stand up 🙂

It is well written. An ordinary knight leads a standing army of 70 people. It is real. Other novels do not consider productivity and production relations. They use the military system to divide the land from the landlords😓

Such a good novel was cut. . .

Have you ever been a serf? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The pacing was too fast and the plot fell apart a bit. In less than 20 chapters, the protagonist gets promoted through fighting. Will the protagonist be a serf for three days? The protagonist doesn't do the work that a serf should do or suffer. (This is not bad, after all, no one wants to see people suffering without thinking.) After that, the fight continues, and then the protagonist has a territory from a commoner to a knight (it's okay, farming is also interesting) As a result, the protagonist encountered bandits again on the way to take office, and had to fight to the death (I couldn't stand it anymore, the world view, customs and customs were not introduced at all, and he had to fight on the way to take office) Is the protagonist a natural war mad? He just fights without brains. It is said that he started as a serf, but in fact it is just a fight without brains, and he directly becomes a knight lord.

From the beginning, this writer's writing skills don't look like a first-class author. The sense of immersion is very strong. Because I like the theme of Western fantasy, I really like this kind of immersion in the beginning. The title and introduction of the book are also good, but this approach is more selective for readers, and the early results may not be very good. Judging from the author's situation, he should have read the history of Europe specifically, and he was very attentive. Not bad, please keep writing, author

The beginning is very catchy and really interesting

What I've written so far is pretty good. With my 18 years of experience in novels, I hope you can keep writing.

Master Knight comes over with a bolter, and you won't be able to laugh anymore 🙂

Just tell the eunuch so I can remove the bookshelf

Your introduction is well written, here you go

It's pretty good. It reads smoothly. There's no deliberate attempt to embarrass the numbers. Please support me.

The water is a mess, where is the greedy snake? Back and forth