Naruto: the Ultimate Natural Disaster Starting from Uchiha

Who invented the word "Ku Ya"? Can you please stop using it when writing novels? There is no sense of immersion at all. I just had a sense of immersion, but "Ku Ya" kicked out the sense of immersion again and I can't read it at all.

Overall it's okay, but the main character's plot is a bit monotonous

The setting is interesting, but if nothing else, it will fall apart later on.

Movement itself is also energy. As long as the world exists, it is energy. Even if you drown the world, there will still be energy. Because humans themselves don't know what the world would be like without energy, or in other words, the world itself wouldn't exist without energy. So if you absorb energy, if you absorb it, it should be expressed as five. Really eh. What should be shown is a state of nothingness. Even five books, this is energy. There is also a vacuum, and there is zero point. Energy is the concept of energy that includes everything. Whether it is movement, breathing, or anything else, it is all included in the scope of energy. Even nothingness is energy.

From the beginning, they drove this manual technology hanger.

This is such a drama to me. Why are there so many words like this?

I couldn't stand it when I saw the evil Susanoo in the introduction. What the hell, I really thought this was twenty years ago. If you add an evil character, someone will buy it. Have you seen the original Naruto?

This book should be written by a middle school student in the second grade. It is impossible for elementary school students. It is impossible for people above high school to speak. 99% Of them are written by middle school students.

Those of you who like Haihu, can you write fanfics about Haihu and enjoy yourself? The arrogance really affects the perception.

After reading five chapters, what are you talking about? The old two-dimensional person will let me adapt to the new generation Baga honestly!

It's not that words like gua, kouya, and xi can't appear, but they don't match the character's personality, and the timing of these modal particles appearing is not appropriate, and it always feels like a drama. It won't be a problem if you write original or tone-matched fan works, or even if you control Naruto fan works with superb writing skills, but if your writing doesn't have this feeling, it will only affect the perception.

There are several books like this, but none of them are purely about dealing with disasters in the ninja world. They all describe how regretful the Third Generation and Danzo are, and how others see high-level goals, which is too low-level. I think this kind of book can even name the protagonist, and there is no pure method. Disaster Tools are better than these books.

It feels very interesting, but with the current pace, it always gives me the feeling that the Ninja World will be completed in less than 100 chapters.

Do you understand that after reading four books, they are still worth level 1?

There's nothing to read in this book anymore, it's like an infinite nest of dolls.

There is another one. This is the first one I have read.

There's a lot of nonsense, gua, what nonsense words?

This kind of subject matter is destined to hit the street. It feels good at first, and then it keeps repeating how others regret it, and it keeps forcing you to do it. No plot or highlights

Well written, it brought out new ideas about Naruto's world-destroying novel!

What are the plans for the group of people with more authors than Izumi Uchiha? I feel that the roles of this group of people are no longer useful. This group of people has been showing a cycle around the protagonist, which gives me a kind of visual fatigue.

Find Orochimaru and be reincarnated in the dirt. Remove the spell. Then nothing happens, everyone is happy, and the book ends.

How to say it? Anyway, it's just a lump

Author, you are a living being, what have I done to your old Fengzi?

Should the author return to another account and start a new book?