
The Hot Girls in My Class Became My Target
同班的辣妹成了我投喂对象
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 200k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I look more to the so-called stepmother than the so-called half-sister🙂
There are stitches and many typos.
Some typos should be corrected later. And many of the characters and jokes are stitched together from other Niqing, but they are not copied, and they are acceptable. Just pay attention to the rhythm. I feel that several female characters have a 100-level crush on each other. I'm afraid that if you want to write a longer story, you'll mess up the work later. Including my step-sister, I feel that there is a big difference in life with my step-sister. I feel like I have only known each other for a short time, and there is not even an awkward period. My favorability level is already 80, and it doesn't take long for me to give her away for free. Secondly, Qidian is currently killing light novels like crazy. Pay attention to the scale. I am afraid that one day your book will disappear from my bookshelf.
Hot girl + step sister
The first reaction is, isn't this the life of a foster sister?
An old bookworm looking for a book crawled across the desert. "Ah... I'm so hungry."
The protagonist keeps calling Xiaoqing, and sometimes I really can't tell whether it's the protagonist's mother or father's contemporaries who are talking or the protagonist. . It is recommended to use words carefully, otherwise it will be difficult to tell who is speaking when there are many people.
It's teak and Akino. Will there be sunflowers and cool flowers next?
All are high school students
In my opinion, even if there are cultural differences, people of the same age should have similar ideas, but Japan is completely different. Only a small number of people who specialize in entering higher education have similar ideas to us. Most of them feel that they are very mature, but in fact they are still very naive, as if they entered college early but are pretending.
Why are there so many plot scenes of Qing in the previous chapters 😅
Shu Huang, can you recommend any good light novels?
Ministry of Service.
Four storms that cannot be separated. Under the snow
Why isn't it updated? 😭😭
There are a lot of grammatical errors and typos, which is quite uncomfortable to read.
Great looking, first time win.
It's very good to watch, and the back part is really good to watch I've seen many people write the role of sister, but they didn't write it well, and it became a poisonous point. Later, they either disappeared or kept losing, losing, losing. As a person who likes girls, I have no expectations. But the author handles it very well, and the younger sister can also win, and the interaction between the younger sister and the protagonist is really beautiful 😍. I am really a person who likes watching the adopted sister. Let my sister finally stand up and not lose. Although it is over, it can be considered a perfect ending. My sister won in the end. 😭😭
Could the author not reference that anime at the beginning?
I looked at the beginning, and I think it was borrowed from that anime. Many details and lines are very similar. To be honest, the copying is not good-looking, and the lines and tone of speech are too Japanese. 😡😡😡 What is the difference between this and that anime I watched? 😍😍😍 But the original version in the back is actually better. The tone in the back is different from the anime. It has its own look and characteristics. It is surprisingly good-looking. Author, don't you have something? 🤔🤔 Author, aren't you capable? Why should you learn from him? It's not as good as your own original story. 😍😍😍 Others are like a snake with a tail, but you are a snake with a tail. If you change it at the beginning, your results will be dozens of times better. He obviously has good content of his own, but he wants to copy it from one that is not as good as his own. 😡