
Douluo: Starting with the Charizard Martial Soul!
斗罗:从武魂喷火龙开始!
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I just recently read a Douluo novel, and I was left speechless by the protagonist. The protagonist could clearly develop to the god-king realm stably, but he still had to stay close to Tang San. The protagonist is level 19 and Tang San is level 12. The protagonist competes with Tang San and wins. Then he taunts and instructs Tang San on how to practice Blue Silver Grass. The master is very angry and Tang San is very angry. The protagonist secretly calls Tang San a white-eyed wolf. The protagonist is level 40, Tang San is level 29, Tang San goes to Shrek, and the protagonist goes to Tiandou Royal Academy. I thought that the protagonist finally stopped playing the hatred game with Tang San, but in the blink of an eye he went to the great soul fighting field in Soto City to participate in the spirit fight, beat Tang San again, and then mocked him again, and told Tang San how to practice Blue Silver Grass correctly. Tang San was not worried, and the protagonist secretly continued to scold the white-eyed wolf. Teacher Shrek comes to protect him, and the protagonist taunts and teases him, and then escapes. Tang San went to the Star Dou Forest to hunt for souls. The protagonist followed. Not only did Tang San get the Eight Spider Spears, but he also mocked Tang San, saying that the outer soul bone was poisonous and incompatible with Blue Silver Grass. Tang San was furious and was abused by the protagonist. The protagonist ridiculed him and taught Tang San how to add soul rings and how to practice mimicry. Because he was too arrogant, Tang Hao came to him soon after leaving the forest. The protagonist pretends to be well-behaved and says that he has been worried about Tang San, so he will let him see through the master's true nature by defeating Tang San. Tang Hao felt that there was some reason, but it was not the reason for the protagonist's excessive ridicule, so he beat the protagonist. The protagonist cursed secretly and ran away in confusion, and swore that he would take revenge in the future for thirty years from Hedong to Hexi. Then he went to eat grass jelly to level up to level 50 and participate in the soul fighting competition. Seeing that Tang San relied on the Eight Spider Spears to compete freely, he secretly decided that when he met Tang San, he would torture Tang San to prove that the Eight Spider Spears were not suitable for the Blue Silver Grass. When they finally met, they discovered that Tang San was quite powerful with the Eight Spider Spears on his back and the Clear Sky Hammer in his hand, and he almost overturned. So he continued to ridicule, once again emphasizing that Lan Yin Cao should take the path of life, saying that Tang San was on the wrong path, and that the master was rubbish. Successfully offended Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong. Then he ran away before finishing the competition, which caused Tiandou Royal Academy not to even get third place. The protagonist escapes from pursuit in embarrassment and curses Tang San and Tang Hao as white-eyed wolves, Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong are in love, and then changes his appearance and identity to lick Xue Qinghe (Qian Renxue), and actually creates a martial soul fusion. With the martial soul fusion, he successfully wins the favor of Qian Renxue. Continuing from 50 to 60, and adding soul rings to 79, the protagonist felt that it had been thirty years in Hexi, so he went to Tang San again and teased Tang Hao. Tang Hao, who was hit by the ring explosion, and Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo who had joined forces for some unknown reason, almost killed him. The protagonist ran away in panic and vowed to destroy the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. He did not mention killing Tang San, killing the master, or killing Tang Hao. After returning to Qian Renxue, he began to eat soft food and buy whale gum, and practiced double cultivation with Qian Renxue. His strength improved by leaps and bounds, and he soon reached level 93. So the protagonist went to find Tang San again, and was beaten by the Shura Goddess. Tang San was almost beaten to death, and then he continued to speak cruel words and ran away. As a result, they met Bibi Dong on the road. The protagonist mocked the master and offended Bibi Dong again. Bibi Dong chased the protagonist. Qian Renxue arrived in time and was seriously injured by Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong regretted and let the two of them go. The protagonist swears to avenge Qian Renxue.
The Dragon Martial Spirit Soul Master who has no background in Dou Yi will only be captured by the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus and used as a stallion or a fertility machine 🙂 This matter is also recorded in the original work
The biggest flaw of this book is that there are many female protagonists, otherwise it is very good
Problems I currently feel
It's just that the author got the focus of the description wrong. Most readers read this book because of the fire-breathing dragon in the title and introduction. But the author gave a considerable part of the content to the main body of Wuhun to gain energy and blood. It's not that he couldn't write it, but he missed the point.
In the early stage, if there are no guardians, stay away from the Buddha. Anus. These people. I do not intend to surrender to one force and rely on protection to survive the early period of weakness. Don't go to a place like Tiandou City where the attention of big forces gather. Someone will be watching you. Better to go to the far north. Or develop in remote areas like Hanhai City. But at least you must have the strength of Soul Master or above. Otherwise, such remote areas may not be peaceful. The ability to escape from danger is too weak 🔨
Suggestion
It can be said that the quality has become worse and worse in the past ten chapters. The biggest failure is actually that the protagonist wants to believe in becoming a god. The first, second and third chapters do not explain a thing, where are the angels and gods? Secondly, both Eastern mythology and Western fantasy emphasize a concept, that is, belief is poisonous, so I don't quite understand why the author wrote that the protagonist wants to believe in becoming a god, and the following chapters also explain the rest of the divine world. In fact, it is not stable (swallowed by a black hole), but the world of Douluo, which is separated from the divine world, is developing faster and faster. The second point is to establish an organization (also caused by wanting to believe in becoming a god). If there is no strong overall view, it will easily collapse the plot (kindness does not control the soldiers, moral integrity does not care about wealth, if there is no such ability, the plot will definitely collapse), it is better to go to extremely cold places to experience, explore the deep sea, and explore the legacy of ancient magic guides. Traces, crossing the sea to find the other two continents, these places are not described in detail in Dou Yi. There is a large blank space to write casually. Finally, I would like to give the author some advice. Don't follow the path of believing in becoming a god, and directly follow the line of awakening the world consciousness. (Dou Yi's statement is that Tang Hao later merged into the world and replaced the original world consciousness.) There is no need to replace it. Use other methods to awaken the original world consciousness. Upgrading the status of the world (the following chapters can break through the level limit of 100, which is a manifestation of the upgrading of the world) - maybe I didn't express it so clearly, but the meaning is probably this. Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year and a better career 😡😡😡😡
I hope there won't be any plots in the future where God Shura helps Tang San. Both Shura and Poseidon just want to run away. Looking at the catalog, the protagonist has also cleared the City of Killing, so the protagonist is a better choice. If God Shura helps Tang San wipe his ass because Tang San is the inheritor, it will be a bit witty.
Charmander's full set of evolutionary directions
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Why do you have to create your own god? It is said in the original work that the God Realm is full and there is no way to increase the number of Gods. Otherwise, why would the God of Destruction be so anxious to expand the God Realm? Another author said that the upper limit of inheriting the divine position is locked. So how did Tang San and Huo Yuhao, who also inherited the divine position in the original work, upgrade the level 1 God of the Sea and the level 1 God of Emotions to the realm of god kings?
Author, please change it.
You have already successfully gone undercover and become the emperor, so it would be too foolish to unify them by force, right? It is absolutely possible to cooperate with Wuhun Palace on behalf of the country. After all, Wuhun Palace is not a country, but an organization. Slowly deepen our cooperation and after a hundred years, we will become one among you and one among me, completely inseparable.