Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: How Did I Become an Evil Soul Master?

Now there is nothing Baku San can do against Douluo Star. One day in the divine world takes one year to fight. It only takes a month for the protagonist to grow up. Therefore, Huo Yuhao's best chance to get it is to get it all. After all, if you don't take it when you have the opportunity, wouldn't it be a cerebral hemorrhage? The protagonist of this book is not Huo Yuhao. Neither relatives nor friends. It doesn't matter whether he lives or lives. Unused opportunities can be given to women or people around you. He is the son of luck. Maybe there will be other opportunities. Even if it's not so outrageous. But as long as luck favors it. Plus he has been living so depressed. Plus hatred. Maybe he can become a Rakshasa god. Moreover, the divine position in Douluo Star has absorbed thousands of years of negative emotions. Maybe they are all god thrones. After all, there have been constant wars for thousands of years. There is no Wuhun Palace. Commoners also lost their channels for advancement. Plus the evil soul master is wreaking havoc. There is a lot of resentment and other negative emotions over the past ten thousand years.

I've read Chapter 40 and there's nothing else wrong with it. Just one thing: I feel like something that has already been expressed is followed by another sentence with similar meaning, and the writing is procrastinating. This really affects the reading experience. Almost every chapter in the first forty chapters has this problem. I don't know if it is the author's writing habits or deliberately to reduce the number of words. The free part is just holding my nose and swallowing it. I wonder if there will be any improvements after it is put on the shelves? This problem is more uncomfortable than typos and omissions 😅

I remember that the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King has a wife and children, right?

How many years have passed, why haven't you promoted the Demon Emperor yet?😅

Bored, I want to see the Demon King come over with a big cart and chase the pony away

1. Huo Yuhao: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, Level 9 Soul Master, defeated the beast god Ditian in a duel 2. Ditian: Defeated the level 98 Xuanzi in a duel, defeated Level 98 Poison Immortal in a duel, suppressed 99 in a duel Level Xuanzi 3. Evil Emperor: Almost defeated level 98 Huo Yuhao + Tang Wutong, injured Di Tian in a duel 4. Snow Emperor: No clear record, set to be undefeated in the extreme north 5. Niu Tian: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo 6. Muen: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, defeated Poison to Death at level 98 7. Ye Shui: 99 Level Ultimate Douluo, withstand 10 Level 9 high-explosive fixed-fire soul-guided artillery shells 8. Kong Deming·: Level 10 soul mentor, defeated Level 99 Xuanzi 9. Long Xiaoyao: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, suppressed Xuanzi and Du Busui teamed up 10. Xuanzi: Level 99 Ultimate Douluo, 98 At level 98, he was defeated by Poison Di Tian, and at level 99 he was defeated by Di Tian and Kong Deming 11. Titan: Level 98 super Douluo, clearly stronger than level 98 Xuanzi 12. Poison is not dead: Level 98 super Douluo, defeated Xuanzi, resisted Long Xiaoyao undefeated when igniting the soul core 13. Poison will die: Level 98 super Douluo, lost to level 98 Level Moon 14. Yan Shaozhe: Level 98 Super Douluo, escaped from the siege of the Holy Spirit Cult powerhouse at Level 96 15. Zhong Liwu: 98 Level Super Douluo, teamed up with Fengling to severely injure Poison Immortal 16. Ye Yulin: Level 9 Soul Master 17. Xiong Jun: Failed to defeat Mr. Song in one-on-one, but teamed up to defeat Mr. Song Xian Lin'er and was undefeated 18. Fengling: Level 97 Super Douluo, completely defeated by Level 92 Huo Yuhao in one-on-one 19. Xian Lin'er: Expected to be 97 Level 95 Super Douluo, tied with Level 95 Zhang Peng at level 95 20. Old Song: Level 97 Super Douluo 21. Ice Emperor: The limit of combat power was locked by Mr. Xiong 22. Ten Thousand Demon King: tied with the unknown Level 96 Su Lao 23. Jing Hongchen: Level 9 Soul Master 24. Tianyang Douluo: 97 Level 96 Super Douluo 25. Red King: Lost to level 98 Xuanzi in single combat 26. Zhang Peng: Level 96 Super Douluo

Even if you make a pudding at the end and say: [Just think that this is the protagonist's original physical body, and the previous part is just needed by the plot] Even if you make a pudding like this, I won't feel a little uncomfortable when I look at it. Don't filter the readers, I beg you, woo woo woo...

Gu Yuena

For this fanfic, my personal suggestion is to sort out the skill combination and abilities. The ultimate mine is the same as no more, a few soul skills have not been used a few times, there are big swords, halberds, elemental development is not good, and there are summoners. The most comprehensive one is the undead magic that just appeared. The combat system is too bloated, and I know a little bit about everything. In the end, it is better to use my fists. I give the author a suggestion: Either choose one element to refine, and then study other elements when the level is higher. Follow the path of Master, study the rules, have many methods, be proficient in one element, and assist in other elements. Either use the martial soul of the body as the base, all methods can be combined into one, choose a cold weapon, follow the path of techniques, and use it to arrange your own skills, such as knives, ultimate water can have Qianjun, overlapping waves, ultimate thunder can have extreme speed, defense breaking, and demon breaking, and then other elements such as water, purification, healing, and defense are used for the body, and other elements are either to improve displacement, physical fitness, or Add characteristics to your attacks, and use the rest as backup energy. Believe me, you can't control so many elements. Not many authors can control them. Nine elements, part strengthens the body, part strengthens the attack, and part strengthens the spirit. The remaining few spaces can be developed again. Don't write so much. The ancient moon wind element of Sangou is the wind blade, the water element water bomb, and the ice element ice cone. That's it.

Then write about love, everything else is the condiment of love